First off, apologies if this is on the wrong board, I haven't posted on Toonzone for a good while. I'm currently playing around with a few ideas for a webcomic that I'm working on and I'd like some feedback, this is the one that I've put the most thought into. The Dice and the Domino: A comic featuring a noble stereotype hero, "The Dice", who always takes chances and succeeds, and the main character will be "The Domino" who's by large an old melodrama villain at first. "The Domino" being a villain who always falls down and ends up humiliated, and is a bit of a reluctant star in QueTube videos. The comic will be a comedy with some sprinkling bits of drama, it takes place in modern times in an American city. It'll feature "chapters" with a frame lay out inspired by Manga. Any suggestions, advice, and criticism is welcome.