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    Revolutionary Boy Wonder

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    Hey there all you children of insanity and mayhem. I am reletively
    new here so I guess I'll tell a little about myself.

    The Insanity: Duaghter of Evil is my best freind, I've been Living under her computer. she finaly left the room so I desided to post something of my own.

    In truth: I'v been fencing for 3 years, love anime and anything sharp, pointy, or has a good swing. Daughter of Evil is my best friend.

    I started this on a sushi high not realizing I don't know that much japanese. If you like this little segment and know Japanese I would greatly appreciate the help.

    Well, I yapped enough. I don't own Tim or any of the anime or DC charactors in this Fic. So, If you feel like suing some one, you won't get much. Thank you and enjoy the ride.



    Revolutionary boy wonder

    “What!?!” cried Tim as he was herded to the limo in front of Wayne manor .

    “It will be good for you, master Timothy." alfred said as if on cue "Learn a new language, make new friends, you will have a translator to help you out so don’t you worry.” The butler droned as he began stuffing various limbs into the car.

    “ Yea but why Japan?” Tim cried

    “ Eat tons of sushi, watch the latest anime” Dick Grayson ended the monolog as he pulled up on his bike. “ Don’t worry kid, your going to a real posh academy for the semester. You should feel lucky.”

    Alfred finally got all of Tim into the limo and shut the door with a triumghent thunk "He does.”

    It is in our youth that we learn to want and strive for greater things, but it is only with age that we learn to let go.
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    HAHAHAHAHG!

    Sorry. Coughed.

    I'm glad to see you got your story up! I am salivating to read the rest!

    "Paris is a city for lovers. Maybe that's why I've never been there for more than half an hour."


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    Hey there Rev Boy,

    Welcome to our crazy little world!

    I like the story's start. I love the bit about Dick telling Tim to watch anime! Cool link.

    And you fence! Wow! I'm writing a fanfic with a fencing scene and will trade you the anme of a great translation sight for some tips on how to describ a fencing match.

    Keep writing!
    >^_^<

    Panther

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    Oh, poor Timmy! Hehe, can't wait to see what mischeif he gets into. LOL, I loved that last line!

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    Thank you, arigato Panther!

    Because there are three weapons in fencing there's a lot to say about a bout. If you send me a private email on what you wont specificly I'll give you all the details you wont.

    Thanks for read this meager sample I'll try to put out more at a time, next time.

    again arigato

    Tonbo
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    It is in our youth that we learn to want and strive for greater things, but it is only with age that we learn to let go.
    - Tonbo


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    Tim takes a trip

    Hi there all you costumed villians and crusaders!

    I've finished the next chapter and I hope you like it. The japanese is a bit broken, but I'm getting better. The parts in japanese ask who is this and is it ok. The next part will have better translations.

    And now for the disclaimer! I don't own any one from Batman or Utena no matter how much I dream, so don't sue. Please.

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    Tim, still wiping drool off his chin, was dumped at the Academy’s front doors.” Man and I thought the Bat mobile was fast”

    The only thing he could remember about the trip was a bag of peanuts he accidentally slung across the cabin.

    He picked up his bags and started for the main office.

    “Ohayo!” a girl said as she ran up to meet him.

    “Ah, ah, Coney chi wawa?” Tim stuttered. He’d almost forgotten he was in another country.

    The girl stopped dead in her tracks and stared at him, then burst out laughing so hard she fell over. Other than her ability to laugh so hard,
    Tim was fascinated by the colour of her hair. Was it pink or was the light just playing tricks on his jetlagged brain.

    “<Cough> I believe you are new here” another voice said behind him.

    Tim turned around to meet the new voice and found a small Indian girl carefully cleaning her glass. She put them back on and bowed. “My name is Hemimeya Anthy or Anthy Hemimeya in English.”

    “ My name is Tim Drake.” He bowed” Ohm, are you my translator?”

    Anthy chuckled and shook her head “No, but I can help you find them.”

    Anthy walked over to the first girl and looked over her “Utena-sama Sono wa wakarima****a desu ka.”

    The first girl sat up and wiped tears from her eyes “Hai, hai. Anou... kare wa dare desu ka.”

    “Kare no namae wa Drake Tim desu. Je na.” Anthy smiled at Tim and started walking toward the main office.

    After some quick words with a councillor, Tim followed Anthy to a large music room. “Mr. Tim, this is your translator Miki koru. Miki-san this is Mr. Tim Drake from America.”

    Miki was a slight boy. Sitting at the piano, his left hand poised above the keyboard, most would consider him elfish. Miki clicked a stopwatch and stood up. “ A pleasure to meet Mr. Drake. I will accompany you to classes and lunch. If you have any questions please ask.”

    Tim stared at miki for a little while and asked “Is your hair really blue?”

    There was a moment of silence. The sound of cicadas singing in the background started to become deafening. A forgotten metronome also fought for decibel supremacy. As suddenly as these sounds became painfully loud they stopped. Miki went into deer mode “ I have blue hair?!”

    It is in our youth that we learn to want and strive for greater things, but it is only with age that we learn to let go.
    - Tonbo


    Jyniteck: Do you feel confident to the task?

    D7: would I be here otherwise?

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    THAT was just TOO funny. It's left me really wondering which crowd Tim's going to end up spending his time with, but I have a feeling it's going to be the more interesting, non apple-eating one.

    Keep it up, Tonbo! I want to see more!!

    "Paris is a city for lovers. Maybe that's why I've never been there for more than half an hour."


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    LOL! Well, my money's on Tim ending up with whichever group has the ability to get into teh most trouble - both intentionally nad unintentioanlly - proably the ametuer detectives of the school. Can't wait to see more!

    And did you get the messege I sent you about translations and fencing? I couldn't get to you through e-mail so i tried the private message thing.

    later
    >^_^<

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    ACK!! This is TOO good!! *falls out of her chair laughing* *Hits her head on the scanner* ACK!!! Now see what you made me do!!!

    anywho.. this is great! I can't wait to see.... er... read more!
    "That's a riddle?"
    "Crap."
    "Looks like we're dealing with The Riddler."
    "Crap."
    "This is gonne be annoying..."
    "Crap..."

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