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    "A Day in the Life" Episode 6 of Dark Knight's Justice League

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    This is episode 6 of my Justice Leugue (Which consists of my favorite DC and Marvel characters.) Anyone who is familiar with the S:TAS universe should understand this one so no background info is necessary. However I should warn anyone just starting out that this episode contains numerous references to previous ones. You dont need to have read the others to understand this one, but reading this one will probably spoil more than a few things from them. That having been said, please leave your feedback if you read, and above all enjoy!

    JUSTICE LEAGUE
    A Day in the Life


    Scene: 8:35 A.M. A café in Metropolis. Rogue (dressed inconspicuously in civilian clothes) is having coffee with Clark Kent AKA Superman.
    Rogue: So Dr. Doom just bent your arm backwards? And then smashed ya into the ground?
    Clark finishes a sip of coffee then responds softly:
    Superman: I’d really rather we didn’t talk about this here.
    Rogue: Right. Sorry, Clark. So how are Ma and Pa?
    Superman: They’re fine. But I didn’t ask you out to lunch to talk about me.
    Rogue: Oh?
    Superman: Yes. We’ve all been a little concerned about what happened last month with the Parasite. How have you been dealing with… everything?
    Rogue: I’m fine, honest. You all have your demons…
    Sips her coffee and looks hard at Clark:
    Now I have them too.
    Superman: That doesn’t sound very reassuring.
    Rogue: I can deal with it, Mr. Kent. I’ve been doin’ it all my life. I just hope y’all can understand why I did what I had to do.
    Superman: We all know there wasn’t another choice.
    Rogue: That doesn’t mean ya like it.
    Rogue looks a little upset. Clark moves to grab her gloved hand and holds onto it.
    Superman: Rogue. I trust you. I just think you might need us more than you think. Who better to help you deal with the memories you absorbed than the people you took them from?
    She pulls her hand back.
    Rogue: I appreciate the offer, S-- Clark. But I think the others would rather not talk about the things they didn’t want me to know. Besides, it seems like everyone’s having problems lately. I’ll take care of myself. I always have and I always will.
    Superman: There’s a first time for everything. We care about you.
    Rogue: We?
    Superman: Rogue… I--
    Lois: Hey, Smallville!
    Lois has entered the restaurant and is coming towards their table.
    Glad I caught up with you. S.T.A.R Labs is holding an impromptu press conference in one hour. Jimmy’s on his way and…
    Notices Rogue.
    Hello.
    Rogue: You must be Lois Lane.
    She gets up and starts to leave.
    I can see you’re busy, Clark. We’ll catch up later, Sugah.
    She blows Clark a kiss and leaves. Lois glares at her as she leaves.
    Lois: Who was she and how did she know me?
    Superman: An old friend from back home. I’ve… told her a lot about you.

    Scene: 9:40 A.M. Outside S.T.A.R Labs. Prof. Emil Hamilton is addressing the media. There is a team of scientists behind him and their invention, which appears to be about the size of a typical golf cart, is underneath a cloth.
    Prof. Hamilton: Ladies and gentlemen of the press, we are proud to call you all here this morning to witness the birth of a new age of scientific advancement. Metropolis has only not so long ago been deemed the city of the future. Today we go beyond that.
    Lois, Clark, and Jimmy are in the crowd. Hamilton continues to ramble as they talk.
    Lois: What do you think it is this time, Kent?
    Superman: What would be the next logical innovative step?
    Lois: We’ve already got hover-platform traffic in this town. What more could they possibly have to add?
    Jimmy: You’re such a cynic, Lois. You’re just bitter because you never figured out how to program your VCR.
    Lois: I did, Jimmy. But by then it had become a DVD player.
    Hamilton finishes his rambling.
    Prof. Hamilton: Ladies and gentlemen I give you…
    He pulls off the cloth revealing a small vehicle with room enough for one pilot. It hovers slightly off the ground and has a very complicated control panel.
    The S.T.A.R Labs transport pod!
    Cameras flash and a murmur goes through the crowd.
    For years teleportation technology has existed, but now we’re working to introduce it to mainstream society. This of course is a rough model designed for one manned trasspacial travel, but as we come closer to simplification of controls and discover more reliable energy sources the possibilities are endless. Paramedics, firefighters and police officers can be on the scene of an emergency instantaneously! Entire shipments of goods can be sent as fast as e-mail! But, I’m getting a little ahead of myself. I’m sure you’re all eager to see the pod in action.
    Luthor: Allow me to handle the demonstration, Hamilton!
    One of the scientists behind Hamilton pulls off a mask (ala Mission Impossible) revealing himself to have been Lex Luthor. He removes his lab coat to reveal Luthor’s typical black and purple (JL: TAS) outfit. The crowd begins to panic. Clark slips out, zips through a subway entrance by the street and out a manhole cover as Superman. He flies up to the stage.
    Superman: Hold it Luthor!
    Luthor: Suspiciously on time, as usual. No matter.
    He pulls out a remote control and a large robot, about four times as big as Superman flies down in front of him and smacks him away with a clawed arm. Luthor pulls out a gun and holds it up to Hamilton.
    Step aside, Professor.
    Prof. Hamilton: How long have you been infiltrating my team of engineers?
    Luthor smiles and jams the gun into Hamilton’s chest.
    Luthor: Why, the whole time, of course. Give me the starter card.
    Prof. Hamilton: Do you really think I’d allow this device to fall into your hands?
    Superman is still fighting the robot in the background.
    Luthor: Either you give it to me and help the authorities try and track me down, or I shoot you dead and take it anyway.
    Hamilton gives him the starter card.
    Luthor: You’re a smart man, Emil.
    Luthor gets into the pod and inserts the card. The pod starts to glow. Superman finally is able to tear an arm off of the Robot and smashes it in half using the arm as a weapon. He then rushes towards the escaping Lex.
    Impressive as always. But, I’ve got lot’s more distractions for you.
    Lex tosses a bomb out of the pod into the crowd. Superman stops and dives for it.
    Not so fast!
    Luthor grins at Superman as two more bombs go off on the other side of a building across the street and the building begins to topple.
    Until we meet again!
    The pod and Lex teleport away. The crowd disperses where the bomb has landed. Superman rushes across the street and pushes himself against the top of the building stopping it from falling. He strains to push it back upwards. Meanwhile the timer on the bomb by the crowd is extremely low, at 4 seconds remaining. Suddenly the bomb is enveloped in Green Lantern energy. Green Lantern is hovering above all of the action and he contains the blast.
    Green Lantern: Miss me?
    The entire crowd is silent. Superman pushes back the building in place and GL holds it down at the base. Green Lantern makes a giant thumbs up out of GL energy on the side. Superman smiles and salutes.

    Scene: 10:38 A.M. Superman and Green Lantern are on top of a building in downtown Metropolis. Superman is standing up and Kyle is sitting on the edge with his feet dangling and his head in his hand, looking a little bored/exhausted.
    Superman: You’ve been gone for a while now, Kyle. We’ve been wondering.
    Green Lantern: I’ve been busy that’s all. 2814’s a big place.
    Superman: If this has anything to do with Carnage--
    Green Lantern: Did you think they’d want me around after what happened?
    Superman: Well, had you stuck around long enough, you would have been able to help us clear your name. Which we did, by the way.
    Down below a thief steals an old woman’s purse. Kyle notices.
    Green Lantern: It seems to me I remember a time when containing a devastating explosion and saving countless lives warranted an applause or two.
    He creates a construct of an old timey (almost cartoonish) police officer who trips the purse snatcher, handcuffs him, ruturns the purse to the old woman and tips his hat. The old woman blushes.
    Superman: It’s hard to blame them. The world just got a glimpse of how destructive your powers can be.
    Green Lantern: But I would never do that!
    Superman puts his hand on Kyle’s shoulder.
    Superman: I know. But they don’t. I’ve gone through this before. You’re just going to have to win back their trust.
    Green Lantern: How?
    Superman: Well, as someone once told me: “One person at a time.” I’ve got to get going, Kyle. If you need me--
    Green Lantern: Yeah, yeah, I have your number.
    Holds up Justice League communicator.
    Thanks, Superman.
    Superman salutes and flies off.

    Scene: 11:05 A.M. The Daily Planet: Clark enters. Lois is typing away at her computer. She doesn’t make any indication that she notices him, but begins to speak to him anyway: Lois: Where did you run off to?
    Superman: I went to call the police, then as Superman left I tried to follow him.
    Lois: Ha! I bet you kept up for all of what? Three milli-seconds?
    Superman: There’s no harm in trying.
    Lois: Well, while you were wasting time, Jimmy and I did some snooping. It turns out S.T.A.R labs had a consultant on their project.
    She hands him a Xeroxed lab report from S.T.A.R labs.
    Superman: Reed Richards?
    Lois: The one and only. I was wondering how they came up with something so ahead of its time.
    Superman: I’ll see if I can get anything out of him.
    Lois: Right, like Mr. Fantastic is going to make time to talk to Clark Kent.
    Superman: I have a few connections.

    Scene: 12:24 P.M. Four Freedoms Plaza. Marvel Girl is leading Superman to the lab.
    Superman: Sorry about the short notice, Valeria. But the faster I solve this little problem the better.
    Marvel Girl: It’s cool, Supes. My Dad’s a busy guy but not to busy for my superiors on the Justice League.
    Superman: Well as long as I’m here I have nothing but compliments to give him on his daughter. You’ve really impressed all of us so far.
    Marvel Girl: Hey thanks, boss-man! Well the lab is right through here. If you need me for anything I’ll be two floors up.
    Superman: Thanks.
    Superman enters the lab. Mr. Fantastic is busily stretching in many directions working on various machines and gadgets at once with one arm periodically stretching to a big computer and typing various commands.
    Mr. Fantastic: Come in, Superman.
    Superman: Thanks for seeing me Dr. Richards.
    Mr. Fantastic: Reed, please. Call me Reed.
    Superman: Sure. I’m here for information on the heist this morning.
    Mr. Fantastic: Yes. I heard about what happened at S.T.A.R labs, and I figured you’d end up here. So I made up this comprehensive schematic for you.
    Gives him the schematics between working on various inventions .
    I’m sure you know by now about the perimeter tube?
    Superman: Not really.
    Mr. Fantastic: Oh. I urged Hamilton to rig the transport pod to only be able to travel a certain distance. One kilometer to be precise. Only he and I knew about it, but Luthor’s probably figured it out by now. He needs another part to be able to use the pod to its full capabilities.
    Superman: Do you have it?
    Mr. Fantastic: Not here but it’s in the city. At S.T.A.R’s New York office. If you’d like some help--
    Superman: That’s alright, I’ll take care of it. And as long as I’m here, I just thought I’d let you know what a terrific kid you’ve got. I don’t know what we’d do without her.
    Mr. Fantastic finally stops working on his inventions and smiles.
    Mr. Fantastic: She has come a long way from sleep walking through time and space. And she looks up to all of you tremendously. Are you sure there’s nothing else I can do for you?
    Superman: Actually, I blew off a reporter from the Daily Planet earlier today and I’m feeling kind of bad about it. If he calls here do you think you could give him a really good quote?
    Mr. Fantastic: I don’t see why not.
    He stretches his hand over to Superman’s and shakes it.
    Superman: Thanks.

    Scene: 1:10 P.M. S.T.A.R labs New York Office. Superman is outside on the roof waiting. Down below in the street we hear sirens and a squad car chasing a bullet riddled beat up car comes around the corner. The crooks are firing at the police as they flee. Superman gets ready to jump down and help but before he gets the chance a big puddle of webbing is shot in the path of the speeding car and it is trapped in the street. Spider-man swings down, smashes open the windshield and webs up all of the crooks in the car. The police get there just as Spidey swings away. Superman catches up to him.
    Superman: Back on the streets I see.
    Spider-man: Superman! What brings you to my neck of the woods?
    They land on a nearby building.
    Superman: I‘m staking out S.T.A.R labs. There’s going to be a robbery. How have you been holding up after what happened last week?
    Spider-man: I’ll live. For a few days there I didn’t even want to look at this mask, but I couldn’t kid myself anymore. Not only does knocking bad guy’s heads together help me get out my aggression, but web swinging helps me clear my head.
    Superman: If it would help, you could take a leave of absence from the Justice League. I assume you’d want to be spending more time with your wife.
    Spider-man: I’ll think about it. But I’ve gone through some rough stuff before, and I’m not letting the world suffer from the lack of a Spider-man just because of my personal problems.
    Superman: I understand. You know--
    Close up on Superman’s ear as he hears an alarm and the sounds of a laser gun being fired.
    Follow me!
    Superman flies off in the direction of the S.T.A.R labs office and Spidey follows.
    Cuts to inside S.T.A.R. Lex’s transport pod is in the middle of the lab and he is holding everybody at bay with a massive laser cannon.

    Luthor: Someone here knows where the extra parts to the perimeter tube are! So bring them to me or I’ll tear you all apart molecule by molecule!
    A scientist stands up and opens a locked cabinet. Lex crosses the room and shoves him out of the way taking the part from him.
    Luthor: Thank you all for being so cooperative. I assure you I’ll be out of your hair as quickly as I came.
    Superman enters through the window at super speed. Lex aims the cannon at Superman.
    You again. Aren’t you getting at all tired of this Superman? I do something, you try and stop me, I humiliate you, and I get away.
    Superman: It wasn’t always like this, Lex.
    Luthor: Yes. I used to be someone. Until you ruined me!
    Fires the cannon at Superman. Superman starts to groan in pain.
    Now I spend my time running from the law, and squandering my legitimate earnings on lethal inventions designed to kill you! How do you like this one?
    Spider-man enters and webs the gun out of his hand yanking it towards him.
    Spider-man: Is that the new super-soaker?!
    As it comes towards him he punches it in two.
    Well that just sucks. They don’t make ‘em like they used to, huh, Lexy?
    Luthor presses a button on his remote and two crab-like robot drones come out of the transport pod. They very quickly attach themselves to two random scientist and fly out the window with them.
    Luthor: I suppose hostages are preferable to fire arms anyway. Those two don’t have very long before my robots drop them to their deaths, so I suggest you act quickly.
    Superman and Spider-man give chase. Lex opens a panel on the pod and inserts the extra part. He then starts the machine and vanishes.
    Cuts to the two robot drones flying above New York, several stories above the rooftops. The two scientists are screaming very loudly. Superman starts to catch up to them. They spin their heads around and begin to fire projectiles at him as they fly. The projectiles stagger Superman and knock him back a little.

    Superman: Nothing is every easy with you is it, Lex?
    He flies up again and picks up speed coming from the side this time. He fires a heat vision blast at it, but the drone opens up a heat absorbing panel that takes the blast and then reflects it back at Superman. Superman avoids the returning blast easily. Superman looks annoyed, then he gets above the two of them. He heat visions one and causes it to reflect the blast into the other one. The second drone doesn’t see it coming and is badly damaged. It drops the hostage then spins out of control and explodes. Spidey swings up and catches the plummeting scientist. He lands on a roof top, drops off the hostage and keeps swinging in pace with Superman and the other robot. Superman gets underneath the second one and starts to spin really fast as he flies, deflecting all of the drone’s projectiles. He eventually gets close enough that he pulls off the robot’s legs and grabs the hostage. The robot dives down at them and explodes. Superman shields the hostage from the blast, but they both begin to fall, however they fall safely into a web-net placed placed by Spider-man between two buildings.

    Scene: 1:31 P.M. Spidey and Superman are standing outside of S.T.A.R labs.

    Superman: This definitely isn’t good. Lex could be anywhere by now.
    Spider-man: Actually its not as bad as you think.
    He pulls out a small remote control with a monitor on it.
    I managed to get a tracer on his nifty little machine. Just wait for him to be stationary for a while then follow the signal.
    He hands Superman the tracking device.
    Superman: Good thinking, Spider-man. Care to join me?
    Spider-man: Nah. I’ve got some business to take care of here in the city. But, if things get too rough give me a call.
    Superman: I should be okay. But I think I’m going to have to make a quick detour on my way.

    Scene: 3:04 P.M. Lex Luthor’s secret lab. There are massive robot parts and mechanical parts everywhere. The walls are lined with deadly high tech weaponry. Luthor is at a work table working on a robot arm. The transport pod is in the background. Suddenly Superman busts in through the roof. He’s wearing his Kryptonite resistant lead suit.
    Luthor: What?! How did you find this place???
    Superman: You should’ve searched your new toy for bugs.
    Lex jumps over the table and looks underneath the pod. He finds the Spidey-Tracer
    Luthor: That wretched arachnid!
    Superman: You got greedy, and careless. One little technological heist and now I’ve found you. It’s over Lex.
    Luthor: Is it?
    He pulls out a gun with a Kryptonite power cell attached to the back and blasts a wide pulse ray of green radiation at Superman.
    Superman: This is rather desperate--
    Suddenly Superman starts to scream and falls to the ground in agony.
    Luthor: I have so much time on my hands these days, Superman. Time enough to figure out just exactly which wavelengths, when accompanied by Kryptonite radiation, can penetrate lead. This little side project does just that. Maybe I’ll send your poisoned green carcass to that miserable little wench Lane. I’d love to see her face when she finds you… hmm… I suppose I could attatch a small camera to the crate.
    Suddenly the gun is blasted out of Lex’s hands by a shard of ice.
    Iceman: You’re a pretty twisted guy, Cue Ball!
    Iceman comes up from behind.
    Would‘ve been here faster, but that machine took longer to deactivate than we thought.
    Luthor: No!
    Superman: Sorry, Lex. I was just the distraction. Now there’s definitely no escaping.
    Luthor: I’d rather finish you here! Code Red!!!
    Suddenly all of the Robots in the lab are activated and they all begin to attack Superman and Iceman. Iceman and Superman cut loose and destroy pretty much all of them after a while, Superman using all of his trademark abilities (Super-strength, speed, breath, flight, heat vision, etc.) and Iceman encasing many of them in massive Ice structures while smashing others with Ice projectiles. During the fight, Superman’s lead suit is all but destroyed. As they finish up they look around and realize that Lex is gone.
    Iceman: Hey, where’d Luthor go?
    A giant sliding door opens behind them and Lex emerges inside of a two story tall Robot. The robot is lined with cannons and deadly weaponry and has clawed hands like the one he used initially at S.T.A.R labs in Metropolis. Iceman starts to pummel it with ice, but it sends a strange pulse through his ice that knocks him back into a pile of smashed robots.
    Superman: Iceman!
    Luthor: He should have been more careful. Water is an excellent conductor of my electron pulses, even when frozen. But that’s just as well. This is between us.
    Superman: Have it your way.
    He flies up to the robot but Lex swats him away.
    Luthor: I may not have my Kryptonite anymore, but I can still finish you off with brute force!
    Superman gets back up and begins to drill into the ground. Lex fires at him as he disappears. In an instant Superman smashes up through the ground underneath Luthor’s robot and carries it through several stories to the ground above. Luthor’s lab was located in the middle of a large forest area. Lex’s robot lands on several trees and he begins to fire at Superman as he rushes at him with powerful rocket boosters on the backs of the robot’s boots. He nails Superman knocking him out of the sky and starts to pummel him into the ground with the robot’s massive clawed hands.
    I won’t rest until you’re dead!
    Superman grabs one of the robot’s arms and forces it back up while pushing Lex and his robot back. He gets a firm grip and flips the robot onto it’s back shaking Lex up severely as he does so.
    Superman: You’re crazier than ever, Lex!
    Luthor: Kryptonite poisoning will do that to you!
    Lex gives a few keystrokes and from the trees several mounted cannons blast Superman. Lex’s robot gets back up and fires a lasso cable from it’s chest that hooks onto Superman and electrifies him.
    After all of these years, I’ve finally figured out that your “weaknesses” are nothing but a crutch for your enemies. I’ve had enough of green rocks and red sunlight! It’s good old fashioned force that will finally break you!
    Superman is in excruciating pain, screaming very loud. But he still forces himself to grab onto the cable and yank it out of Lex’s robot.
    Luthor: No!
    Superman is smoking from the electricity but he still removes the cable from around him shaking off the residual shocks from the left over electrical charge. He tosses it aside then glares at Lex looking really angry. Luthor fires several heat blasts that Superman dodges. They hit the trees behind him and the forest starts to burn. Superman ignores the fire and begins to pummel Lex’s robot with punches severely denting up the robot.
    Superman wait!
    Superman: You’ve had plenty of chances to surrender Lex! Why should I believe you now?!
    He pulls one of the arms off of the of the robot and smashes it into the windshield of the cockpit where Lex is seated.
    Luthor: This is self-defense then!
    The chest of Lex’s robot opens up exposing a massive cannon that begins to charge up. Superman rushes to stop it but the beam fires before he gets the chance and pushes him back into the fire. Lex sits back with a smug look on his face but then his eyes get wide. Superman is pushing the beam back with brute force, punching it back until it hit’s the robot. There’s a massive explosion. When the smoke clears Superman lowers down holding a bruised and burned unconscious Lex. Behind them the trees and forest become very quickly glazed in ice and the forest fire is completely put out. Iceman walks up to Superman as he lowers onto the ground and applauds.
    Iceman: I’ve gotta say, Supes. That was awesome!
    Superman: Thanks for your help, Bobby.
    Iceman: Need any help lugging this jerk and that stolen dookicky of his back to Metropolis?
    Superman: I’ve got this under control, but it’s good to know you’re available.

    Scene: 4.45 P.M. Clark is finishing up his article on his computer. The headline on the monitor reads “Superman captures Luthor.” Lois walks up behind him. Lois: I don’t get it. You skipped work practically all day then walk in here and whip up this phenomenal story?
    Superman: Just good reporting, Lois.
    Lois: You have all the luck. I work my but off for this job and you barely ever break a sweat.
    Clark starts to print his article.
    Anyways I’m pretty much done here. You want to grab a bite?
    Superman: I suppose I could squeeze it into my day.
    Lois: That’s usually my line, Kent. Just what do you do with all this mystery time anyway?
    Superman: …well--
    Lois: Never mind, I’m sure it’s terribly uninteresting. I’ll go grab your coat and meet you in the lobby.
    Superman: hm…
    He rolls his eyes and smiles.

    Scene: 9:36 P.M. The Watchtower. Batman is at the computer as Superman enters. As they talk Batman continues to type and stare at the monitor.
    Superman: I didn’t expect to find you up here.
    Batman: Crime is slow this week. Nightwing and Batgirl are handling Gotham for the night. I figured I could get some work done on the computer system up here.
    Superman: You’ve probably heard already, but I found Luthor’s lab. He’s done for.
    Batman: For now. But knowing Lex he probably has about five more of them just waiting for when he gets back out of prison. I take it you had a pretty busy day then?
    Superman: Not so busy that I didn’t get everything done.
    Batman: So you were able to complete the evaluations then?
    Superman: Sort of. It’s quite a team we’ve assembled. They’re young, but they’re focused.
    Batman: I’m inclined to agree. Marvel Girl alone is a tremendous asset. And even I have to admitt that Spider-man has always impressed me. How is he coping?
    Superman: Pretty well considering a psychopath tried to make him murder his wife… among other things. I even had a chat with Kyle. He’ll be okay too.
    Batman: What about Rogue?
    Superman: She says she can handle what she took from all of us. She’s had this power her whole life. She knows what she’s doing… there’s probably more the two of us could say about her though.
    Batman glares a little as he types on the computer.
    Batman: Let’s not.
    Superman: Fair enough. Iceman helped me take down Lex.
    Batman: He’s got a lot of potential too. He just needs--
    Superman: --to be more careful, right. But I’ll give him this much, he’s not nearly as rash as Wally was.
    There’s an awkward pause. Batman: They’re almost as good as the old team.
    Superman: Hey we were pretty disorganized when we first started out too. Give it time.
    Behind them the door slides open and a shadowy figure enters.
    Batman: I still say we should-- What the--
    Cuts to outside the watchtower. The windows are flashing and muffled explosions are heard. There is a period of silence and then a mysterious craft leaves the watchtower.
    Cuts back inside. The main room is trashed and Batman and Superman are gone.

    TO BE CONTINUED…
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    wow dark knight! that was really, really cool! i cant wait to read the next one! i really wanna know who that shadowy figure was! i liked that superman was "testing" the other JL members, that was really cool. and lex was really interesting in this one, too! all in all, thumbs up!
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    Originally posted by EmeraldLight
    wow dark knight! that was really, really cool! i cant wait to read the next one! i really wanna know who that shadowy figure was! i liked that superman was "testing" the other JL members, that was really cool. and lex was really interesting in this one, too! all in all, thumbs up!
    Wow, EmeraldLight, you've certainly been busy reading all of these! I appreciate the enthusiasm! Thanks for all your feedback! Anyways I plan on continuing as long as I have ideas. And all questions will be answered next episode!
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    Hey, Dark Knight!

    I really like your customized Justice League! As much as I like the show on Cartoon Network, I think this one is (dare I say) better! Yeah, yeah, I know it ain't ever going to be a real show, but hey we can dream, can't we?

    Anyway, I like all of your stories so far. If possible, do you think you could post art of each League member? That would be really cool! Keep up the good work!

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    Originally posted by jasonstoneface
    Hey, Dark Knight!

    I really like your customized Justice League! As much as I like the show on Cartoon Network, I think this one is (dare I say) better! Yeah, yeah, I know it ain't ever going to be a real show, but hey we can dream, can't we?

    Anyway, I like all of your stories so far. If possible, do you think you could post art of each League member? That would be really cool! Keep up the good work!
    Thanks ! We cerainly can dream. Who knows maybe in the afterlife I'll actually get to produce/direct it. But in the mean time I'll settle for what I can do.

    And actually I do have customized Animated style images of all of these characters (such as my animated Iceman avatar) but I just don't quite know how to post images. I've tried it in the past, but hit a bunch of dead ends. If anyone can help me out I'd appreciate it. Thanks.
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    I have read all 6 of your customized Justice League stories so far. You've done a great job! Combining elements of the DC and Marvel Universes can really open up some great story ideas. I like the cliffhanger you left us on at the end of "A Day in the Life." Like some of the others who've read your stories, I'm itching for the conclusion.

    As for your origin story, I hope you post it soon. I would really love to know how your team came together. And since you've got a Justice League of DC and Marvel heroes, how about a story about an Injustice Gang consisting of DC and Marvel villains? If you decide to do that, here are some villians I think are must-haves:

    Lex Luthor (Superman Comics, duh)
    The Joker (Batman Comics, another duh)
    Juggernaut (X-Men Comics, for those who don't follow Marvel)
    Venom (Spider-Man Comics, for those who don't follow Marvel)

    The rest of their lineup I'll leave up to you. As always, keep up the good work!

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    Originally posted by jasonstoneface
    I have read all 6 of your customized Justice League stories so far. You've done a great job! Combining elements of the DC and Marvel Universes can really open up some great story ideas. I like the cliffhanger you left us on at the end of "A Day in the Life." Like some of the others who've read your stories, I'm itching for the conclusion.

    As for your origin story, I hope you post it soon. I would really love to know how your team came together. And since you've got a Justice League of DC and Marvel heroes, how about a story about an Injustice Gang consisting of DC and Marvel villains? If you decide to do that, here are some villians I think are must-haves:

    Lex Luthor (Superman Comics, duh)
    The Joker (Batman Comics, another duh)
    Juggernaut (X-Men Comics, for those who don't follow Marvel)
    Venom (Spider-Man Comics, for those who don't follow Marvel)

    The rest of their lineup I'll leave up to you. As always, keep up the good work!
    Thank you very much! Episode 7 should be posted within a few days if all goes well, Im currently working out the climax and conclusion.

    As far as an origin story goes, I'm still wodering about that. Originally that was going to be the first thing I wrote but getting all of these characters realistically together was going to be a mess so I just started to write my favorite ideas (I'm such a lazy jerk !) But I hope the next episode at least sheds some light on why the new Justice League formed, even if it doesnt exactly say how.

    Injustice Gang... hmmm... yes I believe I was thinking about doing one of those. I haven't quite figured out everybody on it, but when I do get around to it you can bet Joker and Lex will be there, and you beat me to it about Juggernaut. I planned on him being the muscle of the group. As for Venom I've always liked him as kind of an anit-hero so I'm not sure what I'll do with him yet... he might turn up yet but probably not on the Injustice Gang.

    Thanks for your feedback and your suggestions! And a note to anyone who reads these if you want to see something and I already have it planned (such as the Injustice Gang) I'd be happy to move it up and work on it sooner than later!
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    Episode #7 "Shadows of the Past" is now posted
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