A New Area

[SuperBoy]

Clark Kent is standing in the back of his parent’s yard working in his mother’s garden. A little boy then runs up from behind him then jumps on his back.

“Hey little man what u doin back there?’

“Well dad you said once I’m done with my homework you well take me flying and I’m done so let go.”

“Did I saw that? Well ok then lets go.”

He then puts me off his back then spined real fast once he was done he was in his Superman suit.

“Well son lets go.”

His son then ran back into the house.

“Hold on dad I got a surprise for don’t look I’ll be right back.”

So Superman just stood there waiting for his son. Then his son came out in a superman suit looking just like his father but younger. “What you think dad you got your superman suit and I got mine but you can call me Superkid.” Superman says nothing he just laugh’s he picks his son up then on his showders. Then they take off slowly and was fling around all of Smallville they then went to Metropolis started fly around there. (Then at Lex Crop.)

“Sir there’s something on the raider it could possibly be Superman sir.”

Then Lex turn around from his chair and got up then walked over to the guy. He then looked at the raider for him self.

“Well I thought you would never show up Superman. * He looks at the guy on the computer * You know what do.* He then looks Seth a missile expert that he hired. * And you better hope that this works. I spent a lot of money on this project.”

Seth then looks at Lex Luther.

“Mr. Luther it well work sir I’m sure of it.”

As Superman and his son Adam are fling around his Super hearing starts to kick in he looks behind him a missile right behind them that came out of no where. Superman then held on to his son stronger then started to fly faster but he was not loosing the missile as he started to go faster so did it. He tried to get far from it then use his heat vision to blow it up but he didn’t work. As he was looking at the one behind there was one in front of him that he didn’t see. At the last min his son saw it.

“Dad there one in front.”

Then once he looked it was to late the missile in front of him exploded in front of his and his son’s face. Then the one behind him hit him in the back then exploded on impact. Both of the missile had extreme radiation that Seth (the guy working for Lex) thought not even Superman would be able to survive. Then at Lex Crop Seth and Luther where waiting for the results.

“Sir the target is died sir.”

Seth and Lex both went to the table and popped open a bottle of wine. But mean while at the exploration. As the smoked had cleared Super man was on the ground his suit torn and his son on top of him not breathing. He knew he had to get him to the hospital but he could go there cause the radiation that he is giving off could kill the people. He then looked at his son picked him up and took off super speed to the sun. He went there so the sun would suck out the radiation out of him and his son. Once he was done he fly back to the earth to the Metropolis hospital. Once he got back his son then started to breathe.

“Son are you ok? Talk to me are you ok?

His son just opens his eyes and lift’s up his hand and give him a thumbs up. But still not try his luck Superman takes him to the doctor. Once he get’s there and all the examine is done the doctor tells him that there’s nothing wrong with the boy sup for he was a little shacking up that was all. He then took him home once he got there his mother Lana Lang Kent came running to him.

“OH my baby are you? I’am so happy that you are alive.

She then start to hug him tighter. She then looks are here husband.

“Do you know who did this?

“No. But I have a good idea who is responds able.”

Superman then took off so fast he broke the sound bearer. He then landed in front of Lex Crop. He looked at the Lex statue and broke it to peace’s the only thing he didn’t brake was the head he took that with him. He then flow up to Lex’s office he was floating right out side of it. “The next time you miss with me Lex this is going to happened to you.” He then crushes the statue head of Lex then throw at him hard. Once Lex caught it the force sent him backward to the wall. Leaving a body print on it. Superman then took off back to his family. Then Lex’s people came up top then helped him out.



Now this is just the begining so i now it might not sound so good. But i promise you that it well get better. Let me know what you guys think cause this is the first time i ever did a SuperBoy story with out any friends

[Batgirl_2005]

That was cool... although... methinks maybe your spelling needs a little work. Not trying to be mean... or anything... But it's a really good start! I can't wait to read more!!!

[SuperBoy]

12 Years Had Passed

Adam is walking with his friend Jordan. While they were walking they where talking about playing football.

“So Adam what’s up man you going to play of what dude.”

“I don’t know. I asked my dad about it and he said no so I don’t think I’ll be playing. Besides playing football doesn’t really fun in the family me dad wasn’t that good but my grandfather was. So who are you taking to the prom Jordan?

“Who else but the most fineness girl in school.”

“You mean Jessica?”

“She wish naw man I’am taking about Irene dude she asked me.”

“That’s cool.”

Then as Adam and his friend kept on walking. Adam stopped and his ears started to hurt him he started to hear every body that he saw like they where right next to him.

“Awww my ears. Please everyone be quit your hurting my ears.”

“Dude what are you talking about there’s no one close to you man.”

“What hold on quit I hear some one.”

There was a two girls trapped in a room with gas canister’s surrounding them. He then looked at Jordan and told him to call 911 and he then ran off. He stopped and saw there where 5 doors he didn’t know with one and he need to find out fast then his started to hurt then he saw throw the doors. “What in the whole is happening to me? There they go.” He then went to the door but it was jammed cause of the pieces of wood that caught on fire fell down blocking the door. He then kicked the door sending the wood across the room. Then a girl came to him holding her arm.

“You got to help my friend she is surround by gas tanks and the fire is getting closer.”

“Don’t worry you just get out of here I’ll help her.”

He then started looking around again he tried to do the air thing but it wasn’t work then all of a sudden it started to get real hot to him. He then saw the girl but she was surround by the fire. He tried to go throw but it was to hot for him. He then stepped back then ran then jumped into the air right above the fire then before he hit the ground he rolled over to the girl then as he looked up he saw the fire was on the gas tank he then covered the girl with his body. Then the building exploded kids and other went to see what was happening but they could get to close. Then Superman came down went striate into the fire started to blow the fire out with his super breath. He then saw his son he then went to him to see if he is ok.

“Adam are you ok?”

“Yea I’m fine just a little shocked that’s all.”

“And the girl how is she?”

“She’s fine she pasted out before the tanks exploded.”

“Well it’s good to hear your ok. Hey we are going to have to make it like I saved you cause I don’t think people well believe you survived the fire.”

“It’s ok dad I understand. Here take the girl I’ll get on your back.”

Then Superman walks out with the girl in his arms and Adam on his back. Superman hands the girl to the paramedic’s. They also go to Adam but he tells them that he’s ok he then sees his father car and walked to it and waited for him to show up. Superman then waved to the people then flow off. Then landed behind the school then changed back to Clark Kent and went into the car.

“So son tell me what happened?”

“Well first dad me and Jordan where talking then my ears stated to hurt and I started to hear everyone and I mean everyone I heard people in the school away from the school. But then it some how if just focused on the girls that need help I just then ran to the sound. Then the hearing just left I tried to get it back but didn’t work.”

“Well it seems your hearing was kicking in. But throw all this time we thought you won’t get any powers since you are half human son. What else happened?”

“Well after that my eye’s started to go crazy I then saw throw it. I broke the door down and when I say I broke it down I broke it down good dad. Then I was walking throw the fire like it won’t nothing but then something happened I was normal again. The fire then was starting to have a affect on me. It was starting to get real hot. But I still jumped over the fire to save the girl. Once I got to her the tank then got on fire then blow up right in my face at first I started to feel extreme heat but then it went away. The only thing is I have a scare to show for it. (he then lefts up his sleeve and shows him the scare.) So what does this all mean dad?”

“Well son I really don’t know. Me and your mom won’t sure if you where going to get power’s in the first place. But it seems that they kick in when they won’t then and leave when it won’t. Son next time anything likes that happen again I want you to go get help. I don’t want anything to happen to you son. You understand?”

“Yea dad totally guess next time I’ll want for Superman next time. ( he then smiles at his father)

“Oh I almost for got to tell you me and your mom are going out of town and you are going to have to say with you grand parents. I don’t want you using your power’s ok.”

“So I’m going back to Smallville. The town of weird the place with the most meteor’s attack. So am I going to have to help them on the farm?”

“Come on you know you have, you know they are getting old now they are going to need your help.”

Once they get home Adam say’s hi to his mom and his dad tells his mother all what happened at school. Adam had got done packing his clothes he went back into the door about to open Intel his mother stopped him.
“Now look once we are I don’t want you to do anything to get your self in trouble you understand. Don’t be trying to be a hero there I know a lot of stuff goes on there stay out of it OK.”

“OK mom (smiles) I well I promise you, so you guys ready to go?”

They all get there stuff put it in the car then drives off to Smallville. Once they got there Adam got all his stuff out of the car then putted them in the house said hello to his grand mother and father. Clark came in there also said hi then once all the hello’s were over then left. Then Adam got all his goes up stairs and puts his stuff in his dad’s old home he then goes down stairs and talks with his grand parents.

“Hey Grand pa how is everything on the farm?”

“Same as always just need a little help here and there nothing we can’t handle. Hey won’t you go down the street and stay hi to your friend Steve.”

“Yea I think I’ll do that. So when well I be starting school here?”

“Soon as we get all the paper work and all that ok.”

Adam then goes out to the farm house. Walks up the stairs and sees a telescope he then looks throw and sees some good looking girl. “I can tell now I’m going to have a fun time here in Smallville…

[The Game]

I have to agree with Batgirl 2005- the story is good so far, and I don't think anyone has written a Superboy story before, but...

...You should try to keep the story in one tense- i.e. Past (which most stories are written in) or present.

Past is: He walked down the street, waving to people as he went.

Present is: He walks down the street, waving to people as he goes.

Get it? Sorry if I'm being harsh but it makes it kinda hard to read.

[SuperBoy]

Thankx for all the reed back. You guys are helping me to make my stroy more better but telling me what i did wrong and what i nned to do to improve. Thankx again. I'll post more when i get home.

[SuperBoy]

The next day in Metropolis. The young girl who was saved by Adam in the fire had finally went home to her father. She Walked into a big building she went all the way to the top.Soon as she got there her father was right at the door waiting for. Holding the news paper facing her way.

"Well my daughter saved by Superman. So tell me dear how did you ever let ths happened to you?"

"YES dad i'am ok."

" I could tell that your ok cause your here. Now answer my question how did this happened my dear?"

"Well i was woking on the prom decorations and a piece got on fire.Then the hole room, next thing i know i was on the floor and Superman saved me."

"So what is it here about this young boy who tryed to save you?"

"Nothing he tryed but i guess he didn't make it cause Superman saved him too."

"I see. Well i knew i shouldn't of let you go back to that school to just hang around.Now it's is time for you to finally grown up."

"Dad what are you talking about?"

"You are moving to Smallville. There's a little corporation of mine
there thats not making that much money. And you are going there
to make that change.When i real like your job is done you well then help me with Lex crop."

Lisa then say's nothing to her father she just walks out the door.After she slamed the door she then started to think about what really happened at that fire."I know Superman didn't help me intill it was over.There's something about that boy and i'am going to fine out."She then goes to her limo to head off to Smallville.

SMALLVILLE
Adam is in his bed sleeping not worried about nothing his grandfather comes in his room and wakes him up to goto school.Adam get up and takes his shower and everything get his clothes and all that then heads to the door.Once he was about to walk out the door way, his grandmother stopped him.

"Don't forget we are going to be late so we won't be there intill 4:30 ok?"

"Yea grandmama i remember Bye"

At school Adam seat's in all his classes just looking out the window.As he was looking out the window he saw some other teenager bullying some kid. They pick the boy up and throw him in the back of the truck.They tie them down then take off in the truck.Adam then looking at the front of the class seeing that his teacher was not paying any attention. So he went to the window lift it up then looked at the hole class and saw that they won't looking or either paying attention them self's so he jumped out the window."I can't believe nobody was looking. Well time for me to find that kid.Man i hope i have super speed." Adam then started to run as fast as he could but he was still running at normal human speed.Then he stopped running cause he was out of breat. Then once he stopped all of a sudden he get his breath back out of know where then he took off with super speed. While he was on his way the guys had the dude out the truck and about to throw him off the cliff.Then one of the guys grabed him and held him over cliff with his friends holding him.

"Now i told you not to talk to my girl but you never seem to learn but i guess you'll learn this time."

"I'm so sorry please don't do this i don't want to die please."

Then the guy started to act like he was going to let him go but he didn't.Once the boy got back on the ground the dude accidentally hit him causing the boy to fall off. The other guys looked over and thought to them self's that there's no way that he survived. So they got back into the truck and left. Then once everything was done Adam showed up he looked around and saw no one but he heard some guy calling out for help.He looked down and saw the guy he then ran down there as fast as he could.He got to the guy but then all of a sudden he started to get light headed.And was getting very weak and he fell to the ground and started to feel pain like he never did befor.After a few minuten's the pain then went away he shaked it off then went to the guy and picked him up over his shoudler's. Once he moved him he saw that he was surrounded by green rocks."Oh no this must be kryptonite,this why i felt so weak.But why not now? I need to get away from here." Adam then got to the nearest phone and called 911. Once they got there they took the boy to the hospital and Adam wanted for his grand parents.His grandmother ran to him and grave him a hug as soon as soon as she saw him.Then his grandfather came up to him.

"What happened here,are you ok?"

"Yea i'm fine.I saw some kids take some other kid and throw him into there truck so i thought something had to be going on so i ran after them and ended up here."

"Well son the best thing is your ok lets go home."

Adam and his grand parent's left and went home.Once they got home his grand parents went into the house he went into the barn house and started to think to him self what happend so then he went back into the house and saw his grand dad at the table and he then sat down by him.

"Hey grandpapa can i take with you for a sec?"

"Sure son what you want to talk about?"

"Well it's about kryptonite.When my dad was my age how did it affect him?"

"It affected him the same way as it does now.Why son what happend to you out there."

"Well when i went to save the boy i felt weak like i really couldn't move but then the feeling went away after a few mintines but the bad thing was i was normal again i had no power what so ever."

"Son it looks like maybe cause your half human your power are not fully developed and when you get around kryptonite it takes way what super power's you have."

"So when are they going to come back?"

"There's no telling.All i have to say is i want you to say away from that stuff and try not to do any super hero stuff.Now i'm not sayin don't help people but just watch your self."

"Thankx i'am going to go to bed now.Thankx for the talk."(Adam then get's up and walks away)

"Anytime son.(to himself)More and more he startes to act like his dad."

Later that night at the Smallville hospital the boy who was throw off the cliff woke up out of his coma. He look down and saw that he was strapped down.He then broke out them with no problem then got up and was amazed of his strength.He then got up out the bed and was about to walk out but stopped and look in the mirrior and saw his skin turn from flesh into rock.He jumped back but then started to look at him self he then punch a hole in the wall not evening fazing his hand. He then broke throw the wall of the hospital that was leading outside."Soon all of them well pay for what they did to me."

[Batgirl_2005]

ACK... I read this a long time ago and kept forgetting to respond... ~bangs her head on a wall~ so sorry....

It's a great story and I can't wait to read more!

ta-ta

*Batgirl*

[SuperBoy]

It's early in the morning. Adam is in the burn lifting up truck engines with one arm. His granfather walks in to work on the truck engines. He entered and saw Adam.

GF: Adam son what are you do?

Adam: I'm testing out my power's. This is very crazy. At one min i can't lift this engine then the next i'm doing it with no problem.

GF: Well look son put it down. Your father told you he didn't want you to do anything with your power's.

Adam: ok. (he then drops the engine) So what time is it any way?

GF: It's 6:48 normaly you are sleep. (walls to the engines and startes working) So why are you up so late?

Adam: I couldn't sleep. I was thinking about that boy who got threw from a cliff. It was pretty high up, i'm surprised he lived. I was also thinking about my powers.

GF: What about them.

Adam: Well they seem like there back. It took a while but there back but there back. I hope next tiem i'm around the stuff it won't take so long for them to get back.

GF: Well son you should go into the house have you some breakfest then get ready for school ok.

Adam then went into the house and got him some food. After he was done eating and everything he then got his stuff and headed out for school. Once he was on the bus he saw his old friend mik. (He was his friend when he lived with his grandparents when he was young) Mike then saw Adam then came and sat down on the seat next to him.

Mike: Man Adam it's been along time since i seen you.What you doing here?

Adam: Well i stay here again now.My dad and mom left so now i stay with my grandparents. I been here for 2 days now

Mike: You should of came by. But i have to tell you now is a bad time to be in Smallville. Strange stuff been going on.

Adam: What you mean strang?

Mike: People say that there's a girl on the loose killing guys by holding there hands.

Then a girl leans over Adams showder.

Girl: Well that is wrong. The girl kills the guys by kissing them i read up on it.

Adam then looks at the girl. Like he knew her.

Mike: Irene you still belive that stuff. That normal people get's powers by rocks. Oh yea befor i for get Adam this is Irene.

Adam: Yea i know you i saw you in my tele.... I mine i saw you in school. You also stay next to me while my grandparents.

Irene: Ummmm i don't think i hold up are you the Kent's grand son?

Adam: Yea that me.

Irene: i heard about you your the boy that tryed to save that girl in that fire but you ened up needing saving yourself.

Adam: Yea that's me.

Mike: Irene leave him alone he tryed to do something good but he just missed up thats all.

The bus makes it to school everyone get's out Adam,Mike, and Irene then startes to walk to class. While they were walking Irene grabed the school paper.

Irene: So what you think about my new work fly boy.

Adam: What are you talking about?

Mike: She does the school paper. She's the school editor.

Adam: Oh. well let me see the paper.

Adam then takes the paper and startes to read.Then he read about a boy who broke out the hospital.

Adam: Who is this kid?

Irene: Oh Darke he got thrown from a cliff and he lived. People say that he broke the walls down.

Adam: How did he do that?

Irene: don't no but i'll like to get a interview on him.

Mike: Look i'll like to talk about the super natural but i have to go to class. Now that i think about so do you guys see you later.

Everyone did headed for class. Meanwhile esle where. One of the guy who throw Darke off of the cliff was on his way to school. He walled outside to his car only to see that his rims where all crashed.

Guy: Man what the hell happend to my car?

(Then Darke came from behind the car.)

Darke: The same thing that is going to happend to you.

Guy: You did this? Ok Now you'll going to pay.

The guy then ran up to Darke. Darke looked at him and started smiling. Then guy held Darke with one hand then bring back the other one. THen with all his force he punched Darke into his stomach. Braking his own fist.

Guy: AAAAAAAAAAAAwwwwwwwwwwwwwww What you have under there?

THe guy holds his arm. Darke then started to laugh he then grabed the dude and picked him up into the air with one arm. THen his skin then turned from flesh to rock.

Darke: If your going to punch do it hard.

Darke then punched the dude in to his chest. then in his face. Then brong his closer to his face.

Darke: You and your friends are all going to pay.

Darke then throw the guy thorw his own house then walked off. The guy parents then saw there son and called 911.

[SuperBoy]

Later that day in school. While every body was outside Adam and everyone else saw the police car's go by. Adam and everyone esle ran to the gates to see the car's go by.

Mike: Dude what you think happend.

Adam: I don't no but i hope no one got hurt.

Irene: I would like to know what is going on.

Then while the students where against the gates the coach got right between Adam and Mike. He sucked in all the air he could then blow it into his weasel right there.

Coach: If you boys and girl don't get off this gate and back on that field by the time i count to 10 you all well drop and give me 50.

Adam: AAHHHHH coach come on that was my ear.

Coacg: Boy i don't care now MOVE IT MOVE IT!!!!

Adam and everyone then got ready to hit the track for there 3mile run. Adam and the rest of the class then got ready for the run. But once they where about to take off there coachstooped them.

Coach: I tell you girls what. Who ever are the first 3 done with this in 10 mins i'll give those 3 A's for the rest of the seamster.

Then one of the fast students stepped up.

Student: Coach that's going to be hard i can run 1 mile in 5 min and some seconds now if u times that by the 3 miles you want us to run that 15 and you are asking for to do 10.

Coach: Boy this anit math class boy this is gym and for being so smart you have to run 5miles. Now add that up boy. (looks at the rest of the students) Now if any of you boy want to be a smarty pants you just let me no and you can join your friend the math boy. Now stop talking and start running go.

So everyone then takes off but Adam and his friend Mike takes off slowly just with a easy run. But as they where running and talking. John one of the faster kids hit Adam off of the track causing him to fall. He then got above Adam and reached out his hand.

John: Oh i'm sorry let me help you up.

Then as Adam went to reached out his arm to John's. John then pulled it back and started laughting.

John: You think i'll help you Ha. See you losers when your done. Cause by the time your finished i would have been siting down.

Then John then took off.Adam then got back up then ran after John he caught up with him quickly got beside him. John tryed to speed up and leave Adam but it seemed the harder he tryed the faster Adam went. Adam then looked at John then smiled he then took off fast leaveing John way behind. About 32 mins had past and the hole class was done.Then the coach started walking toward Adam.

Coach: Well it seems like Adam here is the only one who not only did this under 10mins but he got a new school record 8 mins and 2sec. Now all you girls can hit the showers.

Then everyone then left and took care of business.Then once school was over Adam went to the front to meet his grandfather intill he strated to hear something. It was sounding like someone need help.Then his X ray vision started kicking in he saw a boy geting beat up by some rock looking creator.Adam then ran to the back of the school with super speed. He then saw Darke about to punch one of the football player's

Adam: Darke stop you don't have to you this.You need help your bone structure is going out of control let me help you.

Darke: I don't need help i need to make them all pay for what they did to me. Now Adam if your not with me then your against me.

Adam: I'm not going to let you hurt him.

Dakre: Then if i can't hurt him i'll hurt you.

Then Darke throw the boy who was knocked out at Adam thinking that the force would push him over but Adam just caught the boy the layed him down softly.

Adam: Now you want to fight then lets do this but it's going to hurt you more then me.

Then Darke then ran at Adam with full speed then brong his arm back to punch Adam just stayed there waiting for the blowing thinking to him self that it was not going to hurt him. Then Darke leted it ripped he punched Adam so hard he flow throw a pole then ketp on going and made a body print into the side of the school building. Then Darke saw that someone was coming he then ran off. Then Adam's grandfather ran and saw Adam into the wall.

GF: Oh god Adam are you ok?

Adam: (he slowly got out the wall. he fell to his knees) Yea granddad i'm ok just a lil banged up but i'll be ok.

GF: What happend?

Adam: I tryed to stop Darke from hitting any one esle but he was stronger then what i thought. But tonight i'll be ready for him.

GF: What you mean by tonight? I'm not going to let you try to fight this guy again.

Adam: I'm sorry grand dad but i'm going to if you like me to or not he is going to hit more people or might even kill someone and i have to stop him and that's what i'm going to do.

GF: Well i had a feeling you were going to say that but you got to be more carful on where you use your powers i saw but no one esle did. Now lets go home.

Adam and his father then went home once they got there Adam went straight into his room. Once he got there he looked in the mirror and lifted up his shirt and saw that there was a big mark there. As he was steering at it all of a sudden it went away. "Well i guess it is time to get the show on the road." Adam then opended a chest that had a all black suit inside it with a mask."Well grand dad said he didn't want anyone to c me so they won't." He then puted it on the take off as fast as he could to the school befor the football game. Once Adam got to the school he saw that Darke was in the back area of the school in his normal state. Adam then ran to catch him. He saw Darke in his sight he then stopped.

Dude in the suit: Darke listin to me you don't won't to do this.

Darke then turned around and looked at the guy.

Darke: And who are you to stop me? You better get out of here befor you get hurt guy.

Darke then turned back around then continued to walk the football field. But then Adam ran in front of him and grabed him by the shirt.

Adam in suit: I'm not going to let you hurt no one.

Adam then throw Darke about 20 feet back into the air. Darke then landed on top of a truck making a dent on the top. Darke then rolled off the top of the truck.

Darke: Wait i know who you are your Adam. I should of know only you can run that fast and you are the only one who cares about these people. But now it's time for me to show you something (he then get's up off the ground) My power's are now to the fullest. Let me show you.(The guy skin then turned into rock and he grow 8 feet tall and more rocky and stronger) Now that i'am fully powerful not even Superman could stop me.

Adam: Well since you think about it like that let's see.

Adam then ran right in front of Darke and punched him as hard as he could. But if had no affect. Darke just looked down on Adam.

Darke: I told you you can't stop me. Now let me show you a punch.

Darke then upper cuted Adam knocking him back ward into the air falling throw a parked car.Then as soon as Adam got up Darke was right there he picked Adam up with one arm then held him into the air. Then started punching him into the stomach as hard as he could then throw Adam face first throw the building. Darke then walked into the whole of the building then got throw out by Adam. As Adam saw him in the air he saw Darke body get smaller.Adam then ran to Darke and drove his showder into Darke's chest taking a big block of rock out.

Adam: Now what was you talking about no one able to stop you?

Then as Adam then started to get happy.The piece that he took out of Darke then came back and Darke just got stronger.

Darke: You don't get t do you ADAM i get my power's from the ground. Now if you look the ground is every where so you won't beat.

Darke then ran at Adam picked him up then throw him as a gas tack. Adam was on the ground about to get up intill Darke putted his foot on Adam's chest to hold him down. Darke a match then lighted it.

Darke: You might be strong and fast but this is the end of the road.

Darke then groped the match on Adam while he was covered in gas. Lighting him on fire then he walked away then once the fire got to the gas in the tack it blow up. Then as Darke started walking away laughting he then heard something so he turned around.

Adam: Your right the ground is every where but there's one place where it's not. THE AIR.

Then Adam walked throw the fire his suit ripped and burnt and his mask off. Adam then walked right in front of Darke. Darke then Ran at Adam then throw a punch but Adam blocked then Darke throw another Adam grabed that one then picked him up into the air. Then Darke with all his force was punching Adam as hard as he could but Adam still was holding him. Moments later Darke's rock skin then started to fall off. Adam then started shacking Darke to speed up the process. Then once all the rock skin fell off Darke normal skin was there Adam then throw him on top of a truck. Once Darke landed he was knocked out. Adam went to a phone called the Metropolis hospital. Then after the medics got there Adam was far in the back ground making sure everything went well. Once everything was done he then ran home with a smile on his face.

[The_NewCatwoman]

Ummmm, here's something you might want to remember everytime your writing.

Comma's are your best friend, they signal a pause in the sentence, and where a period could possibly be placed.

Proof reader's make the fan fic world go 'round. It's very helpful to have a fresh pair of eyes go over your work to make sure it all makes sense and that there aren't too many typos.

Speed + Force + Distance = Broken Bones

This holds true for everyone who doesn't have super strength, i.e. the football players, innocent girl's, blah blah blah. So when someone goes crashing through their front door, make sure they at least have a broken tibula or misplaced finger to match.

Applying these to your writing regimen make for a much happier audience.

Ohter than that, your story was very amusing, I enjoyed reading it, and wonder what's in store for Adam once his Papa finds out he used his powers anyway.

Also excellent, and unexpected twist having Lana Lang as his mother instead of Lois Lane.

[SuperBoy]

Think you for giving my your advice. I'll make sure put all that stuff next time.

I have a problem when I'm typing I'll be saying something out loud to my self but when I start typing I leave it out.

[SuperBoy]

Adam had finally made it home from his run from school.He walks throw the door real slowly trying not to wake up his grand parents.Adam walks straight up stairs and goes to the bath room.He looks in the mirrior to see how his outfit was holding up." Man i can't belive this there's rips all in this suit.Well in the morning i guess i could sow it up." Adam then opens the bathroom door slowly,he then pecks his head out the door. He looked to the left then the right to make sure his grand parent's where still sleep.The coast was clear he then quickly but quitly went into his room. Once he was in his room he then took off the suit then went to bed.

Meanwhle esle where in Smallville. Lisa has finally made it to her small corporation.As soon as she walkes throw the door.Her employees was at the door waiting for her.

John: Ms.Luthor welcome.

Lisa: Hi.

John: We have been waiting for you and so has your guess.

Lisa: My guess?Who is the person?

John: She didn't say, she said that she was a close friend of yours.

Lisa: You let someone in my office and don't even know the persons name? Well ok your fired.

Lisa then walked right pasted John who she had just fired.She walked up the stairs then went into her office.Once she opened the door someone was in her chair.

Lisa: Who are you and what are you doing in my seat?

The person and in the chair turned around.It was a old friend of Lisa's.It was her friend Jacky that she knew when she lived in Metropillis when they were little girls.

Jacky: Word on the street was you where living Metropillis. But I would of never guess Smallville.

Lisa: It wasn't my choice. What are you doing here i thought they where gonig to keep you into the hospital intel they fixed your little problem.

Jacky: Well they made something for me to keep it under control.

Jacky then throw Lisa a bag with somthing in it.Lisa reaches in the bag and pulls out lipstick.

Lisa: Lipstick this is what they gave you?

Jacky: Yep they told me to put some on every 4 hours and i won't have to worry about killing nobody anybody

Lisa: Well that's nice. Look it's late so i'm going to bed. Just make your self at home.I'll see you in the morning.

Jacky: Where am I going to sleep?

Lisa: You can find some place in this big house.

Jacky: I hope you sleep well cause come tommorrow we are taking a night out in the town.

The next day at the Kent's place. Adam had finally got up. He got up off his bed then walked down stair's on the way there he smelled breakfest on the table.

Adam: So what smells so good.

GM: Your favorite pancakes and eggs.

GF: So Adam what you do last night son?

Adam: Nothing i just got into a lil mix up.Then i looked at the football game a little bit then came home.

GF: Oh really?

Adam: Yea thats about it why you ask?

GF: No reason. (startes to read paper) "Mysterous man stop the rock creature who has been terrorizing the Smallville football team...Who is this new mysterous guy. Is he here to help..." Son the paper goes on and on.So you got into a lil mix up.

Adam: I stopped the guy no one say me i was safe.

GF: Yes you were and i'm happy for that. But you need to try not to cause so much damage. You knoow the school could have cauht on fire but lucky you are the police. They and the fire guy stopped it befor it could get out of controll.Now lets just for get about this and worry about today.Quickly finish your food cause we have to goto the feasible.Adam then started to eat his food slowly cause he didn't really wanted to go. His grandfather then got up from the table then went out side to load of the truck.

Adam: So grandmother what are we selling this years? Peachs, organes, what?

GM: This year it's apples. Your grandfather loves when this time comes around.Him and your dad uset to love doing this together.

Adam: I know. I always hated doing it with dad. I didn't care to much for it.

GM: Yea i remember those times. I don't get your more of a city person but yet your dad and your mother are country person.

Adam: I guess it must have skip a generation. ( he looks out the window) Looks like paps ready for me. I'll see you when i got home bye.

GM: Bye Adam have fun.

Adam: I'll try.

Adam then ran outside jump in the truck.

Adam: SO you ready to do this?

His grandfather didn't say nothing he just smiled. Then they went on there way. After the long drive Adam and his grand dad then unload the truck. Adam set the table then put all the apples on there. Once he was done he started to walk around to see if any of his friends came. Then as he was walking he saw a familiar face.

Adam: No it can't be her. I must be seeing thinking.

Lois: Adam it that you?

Adam then ran to his god mother and gave her a hug.

Adam: What are you doing here?

Lois: I came here this morning to see that my daughter has settled in.

Adam: I don't remember you having a kid.

Lois: Well it has been 17 years sense you saw me.

Adam: Has it been that long? Man i'm sorry.

Lois: It's ok. I sent you letter's did you get them?

Adam: Yea I worte you back for each one you sent.

Lois: You did?

Adam: Yea.

Lois: I'm sorry i didn't get them. ( She then looks off to the left) Hey there she is.

Adam: There who is?

Lois: My daughter. Lisa over here i want you to meet somebody.

Lisa comes over and Adam stairs at her. He tryes to picture where he seen her befor then it hits him it was the girl he saved from the fire.

Lisa: YOU!!

Lois: Have you to meet befor?

Adam: Yea. I mean no i haven't seen her befor for.

Lois: Lisa thats Adam he's you god bother. He stayes in Smallville now like you.

Lisa: Nice to meet you. (she then whispers in his ear) Again.

Adam: Nice to meet you to for the frist time in my life.

Lois: Since you to are here you can get to know each other better.

Lisa: (give Adam a funny look) Yea that well be nice.

Adam: Yea i guess that would be nice but i loved seeing you again Lois but i have to go back and help my grandfather now.

Lois: Ok Adam i'll see you again.

Adam: Bye Lisa can't wait to see you another time.

Lisa: Bye.

Adam then runs off and goes to help his grandfather.

Lisa: So mom who's his father?

Lois: Clark.

Lisa: Clark Kent the guy you worked with?

Lois: Yea that's him. We where a great team together.

Lisa: Didn't you almost marry him?

Lois: I did marry him but it just didn't work out. Well i'm going to go back to the house now i'll see you when you get there.

Lois then walks off but Lisa was still standing in her spot looking at Adam.

Lisa: I well find out how you saved me.

Then Lisa's find Jacky walked up behind her.

Jacky: Who are you talking to?

Lisa: No one. I was talking to my self.

Jacky: Well you ready girl?

Lisa: Yea let go.

Jacky and Lisa then left. Adam was sitting in his grand dad's truck thing about what Lisa sound to him. " Man i know she know that i saved her i can tell by the way see gave me that look." Then Adam's grandfather came up to him.

GF: Whats the matter son, something seems wrong.

Adam: Nothing worng. I just saw Lois.

GF: Really where is she.

Adam: She left she had to go back home.I have a question to...(his super hearing then kicked in)Wait

GF: What's worng?

Adam: Someone needs my help.

GF: Whats wrong son?

Adam: There's a car reck there traped.Look i have to go.

Gf: I understand but you be care full.

Adam: I always am.

Adam then runs into the woods then once he looked around to make sure know one was looking he then run with super speed.