The girls are gonna love you for this! They adore the Tim/Robin character! I'm wondering, is this just the first chapter, or is it the whole story? Either way, I liked it. If it's just the first chapter, you've done a nice job with the set-up of the story.
By the way, welcome to this board!




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I agree with Oracle - Robin is such a cutie
One thing - when, in future stories, you are describing a fight scene, don't have it all in one paragraph, it makes it a little difficult to read. Other than that - it was a 
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