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    Attack on Toonami Chapter 31 "An Old Enemy"

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    Well, me and Zecs discussed it, and I'll be helping to write Chapters 31-33 of Attack on Toonami. So tell me what you think. If you don't like my writing, don't worry. You're only stuck with me for three chapters. Anyway, here goes.

    Not Romey's attack on the TICA proved that the force needed to be more powerful to take down the villain. It was time for Team Recca to reform and defend the TICA once again. Not Romey's attack was too destructive to go ignored. "Well team, it's time for us to go to war again," Sketch said.
    "Are you forgetting who the leader of the team is?", Recca asked.
    "Uh, no sir," Sketch said. Then Sketch remembered way back at around the halfway point of the series when he was kicked out of the leading position of what was formally known as "Team Sensei" due to the loss to Team Tienshin. This time, it was Team Recca, and only the greatest soldiers in the TICA would be used. William C. Maune, Duke, Aquadementia, and KuwabaraTheMan would aid Sketch and Recca in the fight.
    "Anyway, it's time to discuss the mecha we will use in this oncoming battle," Recca said.
    "I've decided to advance my TMNT suit to an even higher level," Sketch said. "Not only have I added mamodo powers to it. Now I have added the shadow clone jutsu to the mix. What will the enemy do when a hundred turtles..."
    Sketch was interrupted by a punch in the face from Recca. "What was that for?!," Sketch asked.
    "You're my dog now!," Recca shouted at the former leader. "There's no way we're revisiting your stupid turtle suit idea! For years, I had to listen to your crap. It's your fault we lost one of our most powerful soldiers, Lord Dalek!"
    "I can't believe your defending him!," Sketch yelled. "He nearly killed us and helped Zecs to kill innocent people! I thought you'd be happy to lose a madman!"
    "Actually, I would have preferred if you left instead," Recca said. "If you left and came back as a psycho, you wouldn't even be a challenge for us."
    "Enough," Sketch said. "I'm tired of you disrespecting me constantly. I quit. You guys can take down Not Romey yourselves."
    "Sketch, you sit down right now!," Jeff Harris shouted as he entered the room. "I will not have you quit this team. Recca, you watch yourself. You're the leader right now, because you're supposed to be the most responsible and powerful one in the group. Not the guy who constantly tries to shove a team member down. Due to this hostility of this team, I have decided to recruit the second council member to aid you in this mission. You will meet her shortly."
    "No time right now, Harris!," Maune shouted. "There's a report of four gundams attacking our main ship!"
    "Fine," Harris said. "Maune and Duke, I need you to stay here so we can talk about our plans for the council. Sketch, Recca, KuwabaraTheMan, and Aquadementia will head out to fend off the enemy. This could be Not Romey's doing."
    "But I can't work with that jerk," Sketch said.
    "Oh, I have a feeling you will!," Harris shouted as he held Sketch by the neck. "Sketch, this isn't for me. This is for the fate of the TICA and soon the world. Both of you will have to put aside your differences for this fight. Innocent lives are on the line."
    "Fine," Sketch said. "But no matter what he says, I'm using the TMNT mobile suit."
    The unsettled team headed to the main ship expecting to battle Not Romey, but they soon found out that it was an entirely different enemy. Sketch stared at the Destroy, Strike, Freedom, and Dark Gundams of Team Tienshin. This was the team that embarrased them before the main fight with Captain Zecs. Tienshin piloted the Destroy Gundam, Pepperidge piloted the Strike Gundam, Karl Olson piloted the Freedom Gundam, and Artimus Gigan piloted the Dark Gundam.
    "Well, whaddaya know," Recca said. "It's the team that put you out of business, Sketch.
    "What are you doing here?," KuwabaraTheMan asked.
    "What do think we're here for?," Tienshin said. "We're here for money, power, and fortune. Ever since your organization was weakened by Captain Zecs, we've wanted to kill all of the members and take all of the goods. This is our big chance team. This time I will show you all no mercy. We've defeated you all twice, and this time I will not spare your pathetic lives!"
    "Why did they have to come at a time like this?," Aquadementia asked.
    "How about we settle it with one-on-one battles like last time?," Karl asked. "Tienshin, why don't you settle the score with Sketch once-and-for all?"
    "Heh, works for me," Tienshin said.
    "You'll pay for taking away my entire collection and making a fool of my team," Sketch said.
    "MY TEAM!," Recca shouted as he punched Sketch's TMNT mobile suit in the face with his flying megadeuce that looked exactly like Don Patch. The entire team stared as Sketch stared at the enemy and shook his head.
    "After we finish with this team along with Not Romey's group," said Sketch, "I'll be sure to teach you a lesson."
    "This should be easy, Tienshin said. "It appears that you've softened up since I defeated you last time, Sketch. I'll go easy on you."
    "ENOUGH!," Sketch shouted. "SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!"
    All of a sudden, Sketch's TMNT mobile suit multiplied into over a hundred TMNT mobile suits. Both of the teams stared in pure disbelief. "But how?," Tienshin asked. "How can you use a ninja technique to multiply mobile suits?!
    "What do you think of that Youko Recca,?" Sketch asked.
    Recca gave him an angry look as both teams prepared to see the upcoming fight.

    To be continued.....


    Will Sketch defeat Tienshin?


    Will Youko Recca calm down and help his team defeat Team Tienshin?


    And who is the second council member that Jeff Harris spoke of?

    'I've been crawling on my belly, clearing out what could've been. I've been wallowing in my own chaotic insecure delusions."

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    Not a bad effort. It builds on the plot from the previous chapters, but I'm missing which makes me

    Oh well. Keep up the good work in the next chapters.
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    Change of plans guys, I have been inspired by a really good idea for the upcoming chapters, another chapter might be up tonight, should be good, be prepared to meet the second council member!

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    I nearly missed this chapter. Also good job shakezola .

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