Wonderful Tonight (Krypto songfic)

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  1. Kurtman

    Kurtman You blabbing old fart!

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    I'm not exactly sure where Krypto fanfics belong but i'm posting it here. This is a songfic of an Eric Clapton song. It's about Krypto and Rosie getting married. It's a short and romantic fanfic. Tell me what you think about it!
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    (Midnight:Krypto's Dog House)
    (Krypto wakes up)
    Krypto:Rosie?
    (Rosie wakes up)
    Rosie:Yes,Superdog?
    Krypto:Here's a little something I got for you...........
    (Krypto shows Rosie a wedding ring)
    Rosie:Why,it's beautiful!
    Krypto:I have been thinking it over. And I finally made up my mind!
    Rosie:Oh,superdog! What a wonderful idea!
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    It’s late in the evening
    She’s wondering what clothes to wear
    She puts on her make up
    And brushes her long blonde hair
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    Krypto:The wedding ceremony will be at noon tomorrow. Are you sure you can make it?
    Rosie:I hope so.
    Krypto:Brainy Barker is staying up all night sewing a wedding dress for you.
    Rosie:Who is Brainy Barker?
    Krypto:You'll find out soon. I invited her,Streaky,Ace,Kevin and all of the Dog Star Patrol!
    Rosie:Really? That's great!
    Krypto:I know,it's great just like you,Rosie!
    (They cuddle up and go to sleep again)
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    And then she asks me
    Do I look alright
    And I say yes, you look wonderful tonight
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    (Noon:The Wedding)
    (The chapel doors open up and inside is a large chapel about the size of a high school
    gym. Kevin,The Dog Star Patrol and Ace are all seated while Streaky is standing at the
    podium)
    Krypto:Let's go,Rosie.
    Rosie:Of course,hero.
    (They begin to walk down the aisle)
    Bull Dog:Blimey! What a celebration!
    Tusky Husky (Wiping away his tears with a handkercheif):Weddings always make me cry,eh?
    (Tusky Husky sniffles)
    Mammoth Mutt (Bawling):You're not the only one!
    Hot Dog:Man,do I feel sick!
    (Hot Dog vomits in a bag)
    Tail Terrier:Awww....they make such a cute couple!
    Paw Pooch:Hyuck! Hyuck! Hyuck!
    Ace:I hope you all know that love is a battlefield.
    Kevin:But I think they're partners for life!
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    We go a party
    And everyone turns to see
    This beautiful lady
    That’s walking around with me
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    (Krypto and Rosie arrive at the podium)
    Streaky:We are all joined here today to witness these 2 lovebirds join together and become
    one big uh......lovebird thing. Look into their hearts and you can see it beating as one.
    Without K-Dog,Rosie would die and vice versa. But about enough with that. How about we
    skip all this ditter jitter and go onto the mushy kissing part! Rosie,do you take K-Dog to be
    your lawfully wedded husband?
    Rosie:I do!
    Streaky:And do you,K-Dog take Rosie to be your lawfully wedded wife?
    Krypto:I do!
    Streaky:I now pronounce you husband and wife! You may kiss the bride!!!
    (Krypto and Rosie share a long 16 minute kiss)
    Streaky:Congratulations,K-Dog!
    Tusky Husky (Still crying):Awwww.......I'm so happy,eh?
    Hot Dog:All this mushy stuff is really messing up my digestive system!
    (Hot Dog barfs more)
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    And then she asks me
    Do you feel alright
    And I say yes, I feel wonderful tonight
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    (Evening:The Dinner Wedding Party)
    (Krypto and Rosie clink their glasses and drink)
    Krypto:You know,Rosie! You looked absolutely beautiful in that wedding dress!
    Rosie:You think so? That's really sweet of you! Thanks!
    (Streaky walks up to the table)
    Streaky:Service for the lovebirds. And it's COMPLETELY FREE!
    (Streaky sets down a large dogfood pizza at the table)
    (Streaky leaves and Tusky Husky,Mammoth Mutt,Tail Terrier and Brainy Barker walk up to Krypto
    and Rosie)
    Tusky Husky:Congratulations,eh?
    Mammoth Mutt:Kudos to you two!
    Tail Terrier:Couldn't have said it better myself!
    Brainy Barker:My senses told me you two are going to be together for a long,long time.
    Krypto:How long?
    Brainy Barker:For the rest of your lives!
    Krypto:Isn't that great,Rosie?
    Rosie:Of course it is!
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    I feel wonderful
    Because I see the love light in your eyes
    And the wonder of it all
    Is that you just don’t realize
    How much I love you
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    (Krypto and Rosie have finished the pizza)
    Streaky:Are you two full?
    Krypto:Of course!
    Rosie:Yeah. I can't eat another bite.
    Streaky:You guys can always have the free sundae dessert!
    Krypto:No thanks. We will just go home now.
    Streaky:Well,okay. See you around,K-Dog!
    Ace:Have a safe trip home!
    Kevin:I'll see you at home!
    Brainy Barker:Goodbye,Krypto and good luck.
    Tusky Husky:Have a good night,eh?
    Mammoth Mutt:Goodbye until later!
    Tail Terrier:Be seein' you around!
    Hot Dog:Farewell,my lovestruck friends!
    Bull Dog:Have a nice one,maties!
    Paw Pooch:Bye!
    Krypto:Goodbye,everyone! See you all later!
    Rosie:Bye,everybody!
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    It’s time to go home now
    And I’ve got an aching head
    So I give her the car keys
    She helps me to bed
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    (Night:Krypto's Dog House)
    Krypto:I love you,Rosie.
    Rosie:I love you too,hero.
    Krypto:Brainy was right.
    Rosie:We will be together forever!
    (Krypto yawns)
    Krypto:Goodnight,Rosie.
    Rosie:Goodnight,hero.
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    And then I tell her
    As I turn out the light
    I say my darling, you were wonderful tonight
    Oh my darling, you were wonderful tonight
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    THE END
     
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  2. Fone Bone

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    That was almost as goofy as the show. I loved it. I'm pretty sure Krypto is the first pre-school show in history to inspire a shipping fic.:) :anime: :D
     
  3. StevenK

    StevenK One cool cat

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    That was some good silly fun and Krypto and Rosie would make a cute couple, but now I can't get that song out of my head.
     
  4. Crowgirl

    Crowgirl New Member

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    To be quite honest, I've only seen the show once or twice when flipping channels, and I haven't thought that much of it. But I thought your song fic was really sweet, I liked how you incorperated the song. I just don't know any of the characters! :sweat:

    And welcome to High Society SEG9, Fone Bone, and StevenK!
     
  5. Faethie

    Faethie Rockstarrlette

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    *shakes head in mock disapproval* thats CG for ya!

    That was real sweet. I never thought someone would do a Krypto songfic, but hey, theres a first for everything. I've seen the show a lot-cause of my stinking lil bros who are as obsessed with it as I am with TT, which is pretty bad- and this was pretty nice. For a Krypto songfic.:p
     
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  6. Kurtman

    Kurtman You blabbing old fart!

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    I'm pretty much obsessed with both Krypto and Teen Titans. They're about the only 2 shows I actually watch on Cartoon Network nowadays.
     
  7. Faethie

    Faethie Rockstarrlette

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    Then why don't yo your hand at writing somethin centered around TT? I'm pretty sure you'd get more readers, anyhow;) cause you're a great writer...who's writing Krypto stuff. Not that theres anything wrong with that, but hey, I'm just saying you've got some stuff, kid. You should show the others here at the WFWC what you've got.
     
  8. Kurtman

    Kurtman You blabbing old fart!

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    Hmmmm.........I could try a Teen Titans fic and after that probably a crossover of Teen Titans and Krypto. Oooooh! I can just imagine Starfire showering Snooky Wookums with a barrage of starbolts! And Tail Terrier rounding up Control Freak!
     
  9. TeenTitansGO!

    TeenTitansGO! expremental Upnnas

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    Um.....Krypto.....ok
     
  10. Faethie

    Faethie Rockstarrlette

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    cool!:D
    uhhh:sweat:........
    that would be..interesting...I guess...it'd be a first, anyhow:)

    And dont mind TTGO.:p
     
  11. RavenofAzerath~

    RavenofAzerath~ military brat :b

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    ha, cute, i have seen the show, like five times...despite the low number of times, i have indeed seen it:sweat:
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