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Discussion in 'Story Board Workshops' started by MR.MXYZPTLK, Sep 4, 2005.

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    im new to fan fics so my stories arent very good so i need i little help heres my opening to a fight in a storie im doing


    the robotick spiders gleamed in the sunlight and both civilians and police ran as they used there arsenal of flamethrower to burn the city to cinders

    i think that was ok but heres my opening in the part


    firestarter wore a yellow and black suit with a large gauntlets instead of gloves he then used his gauntlet to punch batman in the face


     

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