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Teen Titans Fan Fiction Tears of a Smiling Shadow-A Teen Titan Fic

Discussion in 'The Story Board' started by starfire0639, Mar 2, 2005.

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Should I continue this story and if I do will you read it?

Poll closed Mar 31, 2005.
  1. Hell ya!I'm with it till the end!

    11 vote(s)
    84.6%
  2. Of course,why wouldn't I?

    5 vote(s)
    38.5%
  3. I'll read it for a while but start to ignore it.

    1 vote(s)
    7.7%
  4. Na...this story bores me.

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
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  1. RavenofAzerath~

    RavenofAzerath~ military brat :b

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    is Amelin's name really Ninla or something? or was that another person?

    but...heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyy...

    HOLY CRAP YOU ACTUALLY WROTE A CHAPTER!!

    i just realized this.....that's kinda sad.....

    okay, so maby she does have worce parents issues than Dragon.....now its certain.....
     
  2. Liz-Slade

    Liz-Slade Year of the Cat

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    Wow you actually wrote a chapter Ash, and a good one at that. It was disgustingly cool in a way and it did work for Halloween, nice and gory, but it didn't make much sense with who was talking. That's all I have to say for now.
    Later Gator.
    Liz
     
  3. Pookey

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    ash...u..u wrote a ch....-eyes widen...gasp- jk dobe it was a surprise though and thats always fun, well time to review -crackes knuckles- blood, gore, -smiles- woo! lol great ch asherz! long time since ur last but i cant talk about that -sweatdrops- kick arse ash!

    and now for the RP that i cant leave be...
    -glares back- 'what the hell is he up to, this is getting annoying' -leans forward and glares in ur eyes-
     
  4. ShadowOfAGhost

    ShadowOfAGhost Computer Geek

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    very nice work. I reiterate here about what I said in YIM, FANTASTIC opening. Glad to see you finally found the will to write another chapter, it did a really good job, and provided a great amount of detail on the character's background, however gory it may be. but gore isgood and blood is better, especially on haloween (or close to it) Excelent work ash!
     
  5. percguy89

    percguy89 Things Change

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    HOLY FREAKING GOSH, well, the chapter was definitely worth the wait;).

    jus a little confused as to who Ninla is(mayb amlin, since i have no idea whu else it could b).

    anyways, sorry it took me so long to figure out a new chapter was out, (theres so much spam on here i jus kinda stopped checking:sweat:), but luckily for me, u informed me, and now i would reeeeeealy like another chapter please:D.

    so peace out,

    o, and ps. hope u catch the SOB responsible for hacking, and go postal on their ass:evil:
     
  6. Matt A

    Matt A Smile. Or Else.

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    "Deja-vu", I think you mean.;)

    Anyway, onto the chapter. A bit gross, more than a bit random, and utterly absorbing to read: whilst we still don't have the complete picture of Amlin, her past and her troubles, we now at least know enough to know why we should care. I don't know about the others, but care I very much do. Congrats.:anime:

    -Matt A-
     
  7. DeathscytheVII

    DeathscytheVII Farewell, Daughter of Trigon

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    AH finally ash, i get to read a chapter :D Sorry it took so long, I didn't realize you edited your post two pages ago.

    Nice eery flashback with the monks and Amlin killing her parents. That was just plain dark, and i agree with the others, it was perfect for halloween :evil: Body parts, decapitation lol, now that's what i'm talkin about! At first, I was confused with all the temple stuff and scene switching. Very appropriate that it was a dream sequence, And at the same we get some more info on Amlin's motivations, and why wants to be a hero. Cool stuff :cool:

    Keep it up Ash-sama. SUGOI!
     
  8. HauntedLover

    HauntedLover Mutant Bat Bruce!

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    Ummm...

    What's going on? All I see is a ;).
     
  9. SilverKnight

    SilverKnight Sigh.

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    The person who originally wrote this story, during our despammification of the WFWC, decided to edge around the forum lockdown by editing her posts and replacing them with a smiley. Long story short, she's not around anymore.
     
  10. The Guitar Slayer

    The Guitar Slayer 1965 to Eternity

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    To clear it up further, she claimed that her account had been hacked at the time, so we let her back in. It was when she posted hardcore anime porn on this thread that we booted her out permanently.
     
  11. MR.MXYZPTLK

    MR.MXYZPTLK Mild Mannered Reporter

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    Nice girl...
     
  12. SilverKnight

    SilverKnight Sigh.

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    Yes, very.

    And with that, this thread goes locky locky. Place nice, boys and girls. :p
     
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