Ok, I am now caught up. I had mixed feelings about this chapter. On the one hand, you captured BroB's snotty "I-wish-I-was-a-badass" self excellently. Also, the action was good, and I especially liked the way the dream broke. The mix comes in that I felt that the flow of the scene (the way it shifted around so much) was too confusing. I was basically able to keep track of where people were, but you've done better in the past. Still, don't be discouraged, because the majority of the chapter was great. 7<regor Ps. The best version of "Cat Scratch Fever" is Pantera's version.