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Made Up Superheros Team up!

Discussion in 'The Story Board' started by lorbo, Jan 4, 2013.

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  1. lorbo

    lorbo Member

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    Yeah, but the superheroes realistically can't beat all the tech the AI has anyway. Too much of it. They would have to physically destroy the command module or hack it somehow.
     
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    It;s getting late,any last ideas or words to say?
     
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    Alright. I feel like I don't really have as good a grasp on this level of the story. You have a lot of good ideas to work off of. At this point it's just the little things that need to be worked out and those are best dealt with by one person, the author. Would you agree?
     
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    I guess not, well gbye thanks and gnite.
     
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    Rite, how would you end it? Just curious, im gonna do my thing regardless
     
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    We can talk about the larger story if you want. It's just the little things that I can't connect with.
     
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    oh well in that case goodnight i cya later I know the details and you dont i get it
     
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    How would I end it? I think she should get home for one thing. That would be her ultimate goal, so I wouldn't allow her to get back at all until the end. I would probably have every race be forced to team up against the AI in some sort of crisis situation, have Winn destroy it, then go back home with the help of the Bartek. The emotional journey would be her learning to accept that she can't fix everything.
     
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    Nice gbye
     
  10. wonderfly

    wonderfly Shaking things up a bit
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    I'm moving this back to the Story Board forum, as that's where this sort of thing goes...

    Furthermore,it's being closed due to numerous double posting, making the thread highly disorganized and hard to read. If you want to create another thread to do a creation workshop on superheroes, please don't double post. This is a message board, not a chat room.
     
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