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Discussion in 'The Story Board' started by lorbo, Jan 4, 2013.

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  1. lorbo

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    When the Barteks leave, for a short while when has as much power as the AI wil have, and mainly uses it to help the Morkons.
     
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    For a short time Winn has as much power over the nanites as the AI will have, but doesn't exploit their full potential, using them mainly to help the Morkons.
     
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    Perhaps your right, maybe I will just put that in a sequel. The only reason Rana would ever come to Earth would be if she had gone rogue and wanted to explore on her own.
     
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    I think this process is moving too fast for me to keep up. Can we finish the chart before we do anything else?
     
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    Winn is the one that wants to go home. As for Rana, she is not even from that planet, Morkons live all over galaxy on different planets. Although typically dominated by other more advanced races.
     
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    The chart is finished. Unless you have something to add, the only thing else I was gonna add was 2 other superhumans for Winn to hang with that had her same experience.
     
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    I will follow your advice about Rana and keep her away from Earth in this book.
     
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    Winn
    Heroine
    Wants to get home/help the Murkons BTW she still needs an Earth job. Rana impersonating her got a job at KFC while she was gone LOL (seriously part of story)

    The Yuri
    Clandestine/spies
    Wants Guardian tech

    AI
    Wants to destroy all Guardian tech in galaxy, up to and including self

    Barteks
    Want to do anything they can to become a powerful ruling class in the galaxy like they once were. It's a lot easier when you have lots of money.

    Rana
    Intends to take down the Barteks, by stopping whatever evil they are up to.

    2 other superhumans

    Allied with Winn
     
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    I mean like finish the chart in terms of ALL the races and ALL the characters (the main ones at least)... I don't think you did that.
     
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    Winn
    Heroine
    Wants to get home/help the Murkons BTW she still needs an Earth job. She was fired for no apparent reason before applying to the job that landed her on an alien world.

    The Yuri
    Clandestine/spies
    Wants Guardian tech

    AI
    Wants to destroy all Guardian tech in galaxy, up to and including self

    Barteks
    Want to do anything they can to become a powerful ruling class in the galaxy like they once were. It's a lot easier when you have lots of money.

    Rana
    Intends to take down the Barteks, by stopping whatever evil they are up to.
     
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    Oh

    Head Bartek-John Noble. Granted he still looks like a dalek.

    Mal: A superhuman female. Friend of Winn

    Bobby: A superhuman male, friend of Winn

    Rana: A modified Morkon who can water morph, spies for the Yuri, befriends Winn

    AI: Has no name but Winn names it Jack.

    Yuri Superior of Rana-General Hess
     
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    Kola starship Captain-Kraag- He is corrupt and buying the drugs, officially his goverment is against it.
     
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    Oh

    Head Bartek-John Noble. Granted he still looks like a dalek.

    Mal: A superhuman female. Friend of Winn

    Bobby: A superhuman male, friend of Winn

    Rana: A modified Morkon who can water morph, spies for the Yuri, befriends Winn

    AI: Has no name but Winn names it Jack.

    Yuri Superior of Rana-General Hess

    Kola starship Captain-Kraag- He is corrupt and buying the drugs, officially his goverment is against it. ​



    Races, Human,

    Morkon

    Kola

    Yuri

    Bartek
     
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    If that's all the characters now can you do the same for all the alien races as a whole? What's their position as a species/what do they want? It's easier to remember this way...
     
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    Human

    Morkon

    Modified Water Morpher Morkons (Rana and any spy the Yuri use)

    Kola-Not pretty, I mean they look like Bowser for crying outloud!

    Barteks-Look a lot like Daleks, only smarter

    Yuri-Imagine a race of people like sandman. Technologically they are on par with the Barteks, even surpassing them in some ways. They look human but made of sand.
     
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    Do you mean name all the extra characters that facilitate the plot? No way, I will hafe to do that as I go.............
     
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    Let me put together something I think will help you. One minute...
     
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    Humans- Want to be secure happy

    Morkons-Have a short 20 yr lifespan, they want a secure life where they can mate, They mature at 3 and don't really age. When their time is up theyrt simply transform into water. IF they die before 20 yrs their corpse will rot like normal.

    Kola-Like Klingons, they consider it an honor to die in battle. Unforntuately for them, their starships arent all that tough, so typically they raid cargo ships.

    Barteks consider themselves superior to all other races, and want the power they once wielded long ago. Nowadays the Yuri are the strongest race. More ships. Better ships too.

    Yuri- Want to be the top race too, but realize they only have to take out 4 Barteks to do it.
     
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    Fill in the blanks please.

    Races

    Human: Independent
    Bartek: Want to destroy AI
    Morkon: Maintaining secure life
    Kola: ???
    Yuri: Want Guardian technology

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    AI
    Description: Has no name but Winn names it Jack/childlike?
    Motivation: Reprogrammed by the Bartek to destroy all Guardian technology

    Humans

    Winn
    Description: Superhuman heroine
    Motivation: To get home/stop the Bartek from killing Morkons

    Mal
    Description: Superhuman female/friend of Winn?/under control of Bartek?
    Motivation: ???

    Bobby
    Description: Superhuman male/friend of Winn?/under control of Bartek?
    Motivation: ???


    Bartek

    John Noble
    Description: Head of Barteks
    Motivation: To destroy the AI


    Yuri

    General Hess
    Description: Rana's superior
    Motivation: To obtain Guardian technology

    Rana
    Description: Modified Morkon water morpher/Yuri spy/befriends Winn???
    Motivation: To serve the Yuri/obtain Guardian technology from Darteks


    Kola

    Captain-Kraag
    Description: Corrupt/buys drugs from Bartek
    Motivation: ???
     
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    After this we can talk about the story more efficiently...
     
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