Hey, I haven't been writing fan fics long, and the part I struggle with most is action scenes. If, possible, I'd like some advice on writing them. This scene is from my newest fan fic, which can be found on the main Story Board Forum. This isn't the whole post, which will explain the abrupt ending. ________________________________________________________________ Spider-Man dangled several feet behind the Vulture as they flew high above the city. With his webline stuck to the bottom of The Vulture's feet, Vulture wasn't getting away anytime soon. No matter how fast he flew, The Vulture couldn't escape Spider-Man. The Vulture: Leave me be, insect. This doesn't concern you. Spider-Man: Listen buddy, you've obviously had a good few years experience at this, but c'mon, I'm intrigued, how'd you think this would go down? You attacked a woman in a room full of people! Anyone wou... The Vulture: That witch will soon be dealt with...after you! The Vulture lent down and used his razor sharp wings to cut the webbing glued to his feet. Spider-Man began to fall. Quickly shooting another webline to a nearby building, Spider-Man quickly swung and used the elevation to spring himself up high, above the Vulture. The Vulture began racing forward but Spider-Man managed to land on top of him, wrapping his legs around the bird's shoulders. Spider-Man began punching, hoping to knock the birdman out cold. Unfortunately for him, The Vulture began spinning around, hoping to shake off Spider-Man's grip. The two began pounding each other, until a woman in a black cat suit came and kicked both of them, knocking them down onto a nearby rooftop. Spider-Man: Ow...the hell was that... Black Cat: Sorry, Spider. I only came to stop him stealing something that doesn't belong to him. Spider-Man, still on the floor clutching his side, didn't reply. That kick hurt. Black Cat leant down, and kissed him on the cheek, then swung away. Spider-Man: Well, she was a considerable step up from the morons I usually meet. He then noticed the Vulture, and sprayed enough web over him to keep him locked up for a lonnnnng time. The Vulture: You idiot! You let her get away...with the diamond! Spider-Man: Huh? The Vulture: She took the diamond from me. She has been stealing my loot for weeks now! I finally figured out who she is and you came along and ruined everything! Spider-Man: Sure. And now you swear revenge, and will curse the day I was born. Be sure to say 'Hi' to all the guys doing 25 to life. Maybe you can all work together and come up with a cool nickname you'll call yourselves, like the sinister stooges or something. . Suddenly, the cops came bursting in through the service door on the roof. Spider-Man: Officer Barr! To my left, you'll notice The Vulture, the man who... Officer Barr: It's Spider-Man! Raise your hands above your head and don't make any... He didn't get to finish his sentence before Spider-Man had leapt above them all and was nowhere in eyeshot. So, any comments?