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Claude Frollo

Discussion in 'Animation Wiki Discussion' started by Radical Raven, Feb 23, 2009.

  1. Radical Raven

    Radical Raven Bow bow bow, bow bow bow...

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    Discussion thread for Claude Frollo. If you would like to add a comment, click the Post Reply button.

    My first character page, and TZ Wiki's second. Feedback?
     
  2. HellCat

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    It's not bad. One concern I have though is that it kind of reads like a synopsis of the movie plot rather than a character profile. I realise that's because Frollow is the main villain, but it does seem to go into details which would belong in a story synopsis and not a character profile. We need a way to keep the majority of the info but worded in a way that keeps the focus firmly on Frollo and his actions.
     
  3. MonkeyFunk

    MonkeyFunk Kids and grown-ups love me so

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    Perhaps it's just me, but putting the Clopin quote at the start doesn't seem formal enough for an encyclopedia - still, it could be worked into the text pretty easily ("As Clopin says when Frollo is first introduced...")

    Other than that it seems pretty good. I particularly appreciated the comparison with the version in the Lon Chaney film.
     

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