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    Slipped Pieces. A Teen Titan fic. Hope you like!

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    Okay, this is my first fic. on this site. This may seem a little confusing at first, but it's all good. Please R&R. OC is greatly appreciated. I love to know what you guys think, b/c I hope to post another fic. here.



    Ch. 1 "Slipped Pieces"





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    mans Starfire is singing, and green means the music is in the background.

    Starfire is standing on top of a pile of boulders. The other Titans are skattered across a rocky mine. They all were searching despritly for there fallen leader. Star had been up all night searching for him after the battle.

    "Star, we can't find him anywhere. Are you sure he fell here?" Beast Boy softly asked the crying girl. "Yes, I am positive. *sniff* Please, I need to be alone right now." Star replied as she flew to the Tower... into Robin's room.

    As she was holding a picture of Robin.

    He was leaning against an oak tree in normal attire; he was wearing black baggy pants and a red short sleeve shirt, he was also wearing a pair of black sunglasses to cover his eyes from everyone's view.

    She thought he was so handsome out of his uniform, and his it. Heck, she even caught him in the hall in a towel one day, but she did not smile at the thoughts of her past. Robin was gone, gone forever. Starfire started to sing when she sat on his bed and looked at his picture.She was singingAvril Lavigne's "Slipped Away".

    Na na/ Na na na na na/ I miss you/ I miss you so bad/


    Star took 2 of her fingers and slid them down Robin's picture. She started to cry again.

    I don't forget you/ Oh it's so sad/


    A tear ran down her face and landed on his face.

    I hope you can hear me/ I remember it clearly/


    (flashback) They were fighting Slade. Yes, he was back, this time he wouldn't leave until the Titans were gone for good, or a least one of them anyway. He was out for one Titans in paticular, and surprisingly enough it wasn't Robin. He was out for Starfire. He knew if he killed her that the Titans would be vunerable. He had kinnaped her and she layed chained to the rocky floor. They were in a mine shaft. She tried her starbolts and eye beams, but they were useless. She was stuck unless Slade let her go, which was highly unlikely, or someone saved her.

    "Well, well, well? What do we have here? I do believe we have ourselves a treasure." Slade menicingly, but yet camly stated.

    "What do you want with me?" As Star yelled this to Slade the rest of the Teen Titans, except one, bursted into Slade's lair.

    "Let. Her. Go. Slade." Cyborg groweled under his breath.

    "Ah, The Teen Titans, what a suprise, where is Robin? I thought he would come by himself to save the girl himself. I guess not, he will miss quite a show." Slade pulled out a knife and put it to Starfire's neck. "If you come any closer, I'll slit her throut, and make sure she dies!" Slade lowered the knife to the tied Tameranien. As he was about to cut the terified gril's throut Robin came from behind and attacked Slade.

    "What the.." Slade yelled as the knife was thrown in the air, and landed in front of the Boy Wonder.

    "I wouldn't want to miss this for the world." Robin quickly started cutting Starfire's ankles and then moved to her right arm. The others were being attacked by Slade's minions in the background, so they were no help. Slade kicked Robin in the side of the head, knocking him unconsious for a second or two.

    "I'm not through with her yet!" Slade slyly stated as he picked up the knife, his back was turned from the Tamerainnien.

    "Yes you are!" Starfire shouted as she shot him with her eye lasers. Slade hit the wall, Robin stood up drowsily, but quickly ran to Star.

    "Are you ok?" He asked as he continued cutting the chain on her right arm.

    "Yes Robin, I am undamaged... LOOK OUT!" She shoved him out of the way of the incoming disk. It exploded in front of the girl causing a giant hole in the floor. She was burned and cutt from the explosion, but she was ok.

    "STARFIRE!!" Robin yelled as the disk exploded. He ran to her side as the dust settled.

    "ROBIN!! NOOOO!!" Star screamed as Slade hit him in the stomach sending him flying into a rock jutting out of the ground. He was on his knees and looking up at Slade. Slade grabed Robin's cape and threw him at Starfire. She was so enraged that a blast of energy shot Slade so hard it threw him into the hole, but Slade shot a grapling hook onto Robin's leg, pulling the Boy Wonder down with him.

    The day you slipped away/


    Robin grabbed on of Starfire's lose chains and whispered into her ear. "I can't hold on much longer, so before I fall I want to tell you something very important."

    Was the day I found it won't be the same/


    Robin's grip on the chains were loseining, and the chain was slowly breaking. Star grabed Robin's arm and was trying to pull him up. She couldn't get a good enough grip because her left arm was still chained to the floor. "Robin, you must not give up!" She was straining to keep Robin and Slade up.

    Oh /na na/ na na na na na/


    "Star, whatever happends I love you, I always have and always will." He was about to kiss her on the check but then the chain broke.

    I didn't get around to kiss you/ Goodbye on the hand/


    "NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO, RRRROOOOBBBBIIIINNNN!!!!!!!" (end of flashback)

    I wish that I could see you again


    Starfire droped his picture onto her lap, and stood up. She stared blankly at a wall. It finally hit her, and it hit her HARD.


    I know that I can't/


    She started to talk to herself quitly. "Robin..Robin!! Please!! ROBIN, NOOO!!" She fell to the floor crying uncontrolably.

    I hope you can hear me/ I remember it clearly/ The day you slipped away/ Was the day I found it won't be the same/ Oh


    "STARFIRE, COME HERE NOW WE FOUND ROBIN!!!" Raven yelled in her communicator. Star heard Raven and flew to the mine shaft as fast as she could.

    I've had my wake up/ won't you wake up/ I keep on asking why/

    "Where is he!?!?!" Star yelled as she flew into the room where the others were. Cyborg was beside Robin with a serious look apon his face. Beast Boy was beside Cyborg fighting back tears. Raven was on the other side of Robin chanting, while trying to concentrate. Star flew to Robin. "What's wrong?" The terrified girl asked as she looked at the broken boy. "Ssttar, He..he's not responding." Beast Boy spoke first.

    I can't take it/ It wasn't fake it/ It happened you passed by/


    "Star...he might be dead." Cyborg stated first.

    Now your gone/ Now your gone/ There you go/ There you go/ Somewhere I can't bring you back/


    Star couldn't take it any more. She started to stand up, but colasped bck onto the floor.

    Now your gone/ Now your gone/ There you go/ There you go/ Somewhere your not coming back/


    Raven ran to Starfire and tried to wake her up, but couldn't. "Oh God! Why did you tell her that!? We don't know if he's dead yet!" Raven yelled. "Raven! Calm down berore you lose it." Beast Boy comforted the goth.

    The day you slipped away/ Was the day I found it won't be the same/ Oh /


    Later that day Star woke up in the infermery room. On the bed beside her she say Robin, laying unconconious. "He is in a coma Star. He won't wake up for a while. We are surprised he even lived through a fall like that." She turned to see that Cyborg was the the one who spoke.

    na na/


    Star slowly got up, not paying attention to the pain that shot through her.

    na na na na na/


    She leaned over to Robin and placed a small peck on his cheeck. "Please wake up soon Robin." I miss you

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    yay, firstsies!


    Well done.
    Pandering to the sappy rob/star demographic, huh?

    Regardless of subject matter, it was very attention grabbing!
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    This HAS to be the best description of feelings between Robin and Starfire since Vanishing Act. I like the music that you intertwine into your story. There's not really anything to critique, besides if you're against the Robin/Starfire relationship coughcoughreidcough. Very well done.

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    Wow. That was soooo good. I'm so glad you posted it!:anime:
    There's not really anything to critique, besides if you're against the Robin/Starfire relationship coughcoughreidcough. Very well done.
    yea.

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    Niceness. Keep it up. Everyone else stole what I wanted to say...so, well, um, yeah...good job and keep posting! :anime:
    That just about covers it...



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    You guys really like it? Thank you so much!

    Just so you know, this takes place after season 2. I'm going to try and put some of the episodes in my Ch.s
    'Haunted' is my fav. episode, so that will be one of my main drives till that Ch.
    But before I start incorperating the episodes, which will start after the holidays, I'm going to add a Christmas Ch.

    Thanks again, and I'll try and post ASAP!
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    Quote Originally Posted by oneeyemonkeypie
    Pandering to the sappy rob/star demographic, huh?
    Well, I shamelessly admit that one of those demographs (?) is me. Who'd have thought it, huh?

    Anyway, this is great stuff. Please continue!
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    I loved everything! The robin/starfire relationship was awesome, very good description. I could imagine everything. the flashback was also described very well, i actually understood it. (unlike other flashbacks...) and I think you described the way starfire felt greatly. in other words, AWESOME story, can't wait for another chapter!
    if you're against the Robin/Starfire relationship coughcoughreidcough.
    heh... i'm only against it a little.... *cough*
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    Quote Originally Posted by oneeyemonkeypie
    Pandering to the sappy rob/star demographic, huh?
    if i asked you what demographic was would you tell me to get a dictionary?

    this story is da bomb!!!
    you should write more
    you will write more!!!!

    please?

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    Ninesies!! Yay!!

    I loved the description about Star and Robin's feelings, it was awesome. I loved it so.

    Also, since Avril Lavinge rocks, I loved how you used her song, touche, touche...

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    Here's Ch. 2. No Fluff. but I need to post this. srry for any grammer/spelling mistakes I don't have WORD yet.


    Ch.2 "Stichings"


    It was early in the morning, and Robin was softly slepping in a small bed. It wasn't his usual dark and lonly room, it was the infremery room. It had been a few days after his fall, and Raven noticed a gash on Robin's neck. she healed most of his cuts and bruises, but the gash was too deep to heal completly. Robin was not alone in the infremery room. Starfire was sleeping in the chair beside him. Her head was on top of Robin's slow moving chest, and she was holding onto one of his ungloved hands. Robin was no longer in his tatered uniform. A few days after his fall, Cyborg insisted Robin change into some pajamas. The stubborn leader finally gave in. He was now dressed in some long, black, baggy pants. He had a red 'R' on the left pocket with a yellow ring around it. His shirt was short sleeved, and of course...red. The only piece of clothing from his uniform was the mask apon his pale face.

    "Hey Star?" Beast Boy whispered while slowly nuging the sleeping girl's sholder.

    "Mmm..." Her eyes fluttered open to reveal her green friend smiling.

    "Star, Robin has to have stiches." Beast Boy calmly whispered.

    Star's eyes got very wide . "What are these stiches? Are they dangerous?" She shot her head up.

    "Stiches are kinda like sewing, and no Star, they're not dangerous "

    Star was still a little confused and worried, but she belived her friend.

    "Star, don't worry, Robin will be okay, he needs the stiches, so his body can heal faster." Cyborg was trying to reassure the shocked alien, and it helped.

    "But why must he have these stiches? Is he not getting better?" She asked still confused.

    "He needs the stiches because I can not completly heal his larger wound on his neck. Robin will be fine, he will have to sit out of a few fights, but he will get better." Raven wheeled a tray of tools to beside Starfire. She winced at the sight of the tools.

    "C'mon Star, you can sit out here with me. I tend to get a little quessy at the sight of needles, and that sort of junk." Star slowly stood up, all the while staring at the tools that soon would be going onto Robin's neck.

    "Raven...will it hurt?"

    "No, he's asleep, but even if he was awake, it still wouldn't hurt." Star nodded and walked out of the infremery room with Beast Boy.





    Cy finished stiching up Robin's neck, while Raven put away the cleaned the tools that were used.

    "Do you think he'll find out?" Cyborg asked after he finished with Robin.

    "About the plan? No, even if he got close, you can use blackmail to lure him away." Raven said in her monotone voice we all know so well.

    "I guess, but you know he can get pretty sly."

    "I know, remember last year." She had a slight grin on her face when she looked at Cyborg.

    "Don't remind me. I still need to get him back for that." He had a look on his face that could kill.

    "You know it was funny." Raven was smiling evily. She looked at the sleeping Robin and back at Cyborg.

    "Shut it..." He opened a drawer and puled out a small black wallet. "As soon as he wakes up we'll go."

    "I'm so excited." Raven was back in her monotone voice. She was checking Robin's pulse on the moniters. She looked back at Robin and noticed him blink. "Cyborg, He's up."

    "How long have I been sleeping?" Robin spoke after slowly sitting up. He was rubing his temples trying to wake up.

    "All night, and don't touch the left side of your neck. You needed stiches, and so...well...I"m warning you." Cyborg hide his wallet in his right arm.

    "What..stiches?" Robin gently felt around his neck and found his stiches the hard way. He winced when he felt them.

    "I told you." Cyborg snickered as he walked over to his best friend.

    "Where is everybody?" Robin gently placed his bare feet on the cold tiles.

    "Hold on" Cyborg pressed a button on his arm showing Starfire and Beast Boy laughing. "Hey you two, We're done. You can come on in." As quickly as he said that the door to the infermery room showed the both, the floating red headed teen and a green laughing teen.

    "Robin! You're better." Starfire soared over to the now standing Robin.

    "Well mostly better." He weakly smiled. Robin was still a bit drowsy.

    "You know you'll have to sit out for at least a few days." Raven smirked in the background.

    "This is going to be a long week." Robin rubbing his temples again. Everyone was nodding. Just then the infremery room lit up in red and black as the alarm rang through the Tower. Everyone quickly looked at Robin and just stared for a few long seconds.

    "Don't...say...anything..." Robin hissed as he slowly made his way to the door. Cyborg grinned from ear to ear while Beast Boy held back his laughter, Starfire and Raven just flew to the living room without a word.


    Ohh! suspense? I hope I made you think about what could come next?
    Thank You all for reviewing. I'll have the Christmas fic. up before Christmas Day. It will be my Christmas present to you all. merry Christmas, (if you don't celebrate Christmas, I wish you a Merry place holiday here. )
    I heart you all.!!!:anime:

    P.S. berore I forget, b/c I will, PM me your thoughts/remarks on this...Would you guys care if I put BB and Raven together? It will be in LATER Ch.s much later, but still. PM me your thoughts. I just want to be sure you guys would be ok w/ that decision. I know how it feels to have my fav. couple broken up. *curses at people who put Robin and Raven together.* srry, if your a big them 2 fan. srry. I have issues.
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    *curses at people who put Robin and Raven together.*

    Does that have anything to do with my signature? *glares at Pookey evily* ()
    Cool chapter! I loved it, though the ending confused me a little.

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    *curses at people who put Robin and Raven together.* srry, if your a big them 2 fan. srry. I have issues.

    I said SORRY if I offened you. I have issues with my mouth/fingers. Don't get mad at me, my fingers just took over the keyboard. so...sorry

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    I was KIDDING.
    i think i'll quit using sarcasm....

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    no sarcasm good, just warn me. I was in a 'mood' i guess, but I'm ok now!!! I am th edefinition of sarcasm at my house, so I like it. Just, it's hard to tell sarcasm online for obvious reasons...

    The ending confused you? TELL ME!!! What?! I must fix, some how...or was it from the conversations, b/c if it was, that will be explained later.

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    Robin/Starfire GOOD. Beast Boy/Raven GOOD. Raven/Robin BAD. (that's for you Sproxie.)

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    Somebody help me. anybody...? FINE! *walks of mumbling*
    (is Sproxie related to Lordeykins?) sorry, couldn't resist.
    Quote Originally Posted by Pookey
    The ending confused you? TELL ME!!! What?! I must fix, some how...or was it from the conversations, b/c if it was, that will be explained later.
    yea, thats what confused me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by rrarbecy
    Robin/Starfire GOOD. Beast Boy/Raven GOOD. Raven/Robin BAD. (that's for you Sproxie.)
    YES!!! I can only think of one other fic where Robin and Raven were ALMOST put together. But as long as nobody likes a 'show' relationship with Cy, I'm good.

    Can't wait for more! I liked the stiches part, but you did spell stiches wrong, and it doesn't really make a good first impression, seeing as it was the chapter title...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sprox 083
    Somebody help me. anybody...? FINE! *walks of mumbling*
    (is Sproxie related to Lordeykins?) sorry, couldn't resist.
    I did NOT deserve that. If you didn't like that, you could have just told me.

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    wowzers! This is really good! I love the story line. I can't wait to see wait happens!! please post more soon!
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