Need Help!

[Tootlez]

I'm writing this story, probably the longest one yet, and I'm getting writters block and can't figure out what to do next.

The storey is about a girl that finds a piece of paper with an incripted message on it. She will look it up and find out what it says and reads it aloud and then she begins her magical adventure with seeing things and getting in trouble at school.

(Chapter 1) It starts out on a stormy night and she (Samantha Parsley) finds the paper. Later on a big "Bam" sounds and she goes to see what happened. She meets her father who abanded her and her mother. Samantha's mother comes out and Peter (Sam's father) grabs Sam and they argue a while then Peter stabs sam in the side. Sam goes to the hospital and there is a scene there. Back at home Sam is healing and soon she is well again. (Chapter 2) She is sent back to school the next week with a sore side. She talks to her friend Tabbitha about school. In class they have a quiz to take and Sam daydreams back to the other night. I wrote more but i'm gonna change it around.

I need your help! I don't know what to do next.

Any Ideas are welcome!

[Watagashi]

Maybe, since she's daydreaming, she gets interrupted by the teacher and gets in trouble with him/ her for not being on course. And probably, after that, she starts thinking about it again and remembers the paper that she picked up right before that happened. She can go back home to look at the paper again and find the inscription on it and, filled with curiosity, decides to figure out what it means. And the rest can come from there.

I don't know... Just a thought.

[Tootlez]

I rewrote the part at the school. She does daydream and ends up writing down things about the night and how she could have avoided the whole thing when the teacher Mr. John comes by and yells at her for writing words and not numbers, it's math class. Tabbitha, Sam's friend stands up for Sam and then a lady walks into the room with a clipboard.

That is all that I redone.

I was thinking about sending her to the library to look up things.

Should I keep her at school or should I send her back home?

[Watagashi]

I guess you could keep her at school for a little while longer to do some research and talk to her friends about what happened and stuff.... But, then, cut the day short, causing not only her, but everyone else to have to go home for some reason. (snow, holiday, etc.)

I don't know.

[atari_14]

Like wat said, have Sam remeber the paper she goes home after school to try and find it. she finds it and gose to the library to do reasearch.

The women with the clip board can be a mystery person. Umm... like she comes in the class room right as the teacher is about to get Sam in trouble. And she tells the teacher somthing and Sam dosen't get in trouble. What the women says to the teacher can be reveled at the end or in the middle of the book. Or maybe she can turn out to be the enemy. Or a person that is supose to help Sam. If you want to make her somthing like that but her in small
scenes before she is introduced. like in the library.
I don't know, whatever you want.

[Watagashi]

Originally posted by atari_14
Like wat said, have Sam remeber the paper she goes home after school to try and find it. she finds it and gose to the library to do reasearch.

The women with the clip board can be a mystery person. Umm... like she comes in the class room right as the teacher is about to get Sam in trouble. And she tells the teacher somthing and Sam dosen't get in trouble. What the women says to the teacher can be reveled at the end or in the middle of the book. Or maybe she can turn out to be the enemy. Or a person that is supose to help Sam. If you want to make her somthing like that but her in small
scenes before she is introduced. like in the library.
I don't know, whatever you want.

Ditto! Mysterious people and happening always draws the reader and you into the story and can always open doors for a whole new scenario of the storyline and stuff. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

[Tootlez]

thanks alot I'll use these ideas.

[atari_14]

Originally posted by Watagashi


Ditto! Mysterious people and happening always draws the reader and you into the story and can always open doors for a whole new scenario of the storyline and stuff. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

That's exactly what i was thinking.

[Tootlez]

I added so many things to the story!

Sam is back at home and she finding out about the light paper. She has found a match and prints out the information. At the bottom of the print out the message history says two words: highly dangerous.

I think that this story is going to be really great when it is finished!

[Tootlez]

i split up chapter 1....
finished chapter 2 "3"
Working on chapter "4"

There is where I remain..... I don't know what to do with it afterwards
Sam is in "GlitterStone" (the other world) and she meets some creatures a Unicorn, Dragon, and a "Tum Tum" (my little creature that I made up, had nothing else to call it)

*" changed chap #"

Any suggestions are welcome!