Incase you dont want to read all that my fanfiction is on youtube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V-evM...e=channel_page

Hey all, I came on because i am currently writting an x-men fan fiction that i want your opinions of. The title of the fan fiction is days of future past. To put it short i got the idea a few months back and suddenly began writting. Im just a fan working my ass off trying to make the best story possible and i want some of your opinions. It may not the best but its hard work trying to write a story from scratch and to make it interesting for people. And since this is the 1st actual story ive written in my life, it makes it even more hard. Im not done writting it, infact ive rewrote it 3 times.

Thanks in advance for your opinions. Without other people telling me what they think i can only go on my own instincts which isnt always enough. I used a program called natrual soft reader to turn my text into spoken words so you dont even have to read it, you can just listen to parts 1 2 and 3 of the rewritten version. I actually intend on eventually working this whole thing into a flash animation that i can put on youtube, so therefore it will become more interesting. But thats only if the story is good enough to even consider that.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V-evM...e=channel_page