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Old 12-12-2002, 09:01 PM
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Codename: Kid's Next Door operation M.O.M

Yes believe it or not I am doing a KND fanfic. Why? Why not? This may or may no be good but let's just say that this won't be..."exactly" following the general storyline of the series. This will be a hopefully unique & cute comical KND fic, and I'll occasionally even refer to them by their actual names. And they are...

Numbah 1= Nigel Uno
Numbah 2= Hoagie P. Gilliam
Numbah 3= Kiki Sanban
Numbah 4= Wallabee Beatles
Numbah 5= Abigail "Abby" Lincoln

This by ALL means experimental and I hope that this turns out well.)

Code Name: Kids Next Door

Operation: M.O.M

Motherly
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Or
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Messy?

(It was an awfully normal day today as #5 and #2 were busy..err...NOT busy just hanging around in the KND base. But then a rather sullen #4 and a more cheerful than usual #3 have just arrived.)

Numbah 2: Hey #3 and 4...

Numbah 5: Yo...(as they both noticed something a little large on #3) Woah hey Numbah 3 whats with the gut?

Numbah 2: Yeah #3 were you on a snack-eating binge?

Numbah 3: Nope, #4 is why I'M like this.

Numbah 2: Oh did he "invite" you to an all-you eat date there? snickers

(Numbah 4 is growling and looks like he wants to use #2 as a punching bag.)

Numbah 5: Now now Numbah 4 #5 is sure that Numbah 2 was kidding, right Numbah 2?

Numbah 2: Yeah man heh heh sorry about that.

(#4 calms down a bit.)

Numbah 5: Okay now Numbah 3, why did you get such a big belly?

Numbah 3 (giggling & blushing like mad and she can't contain herself): Okay...the reason why I got such a big Tummy because...*giggling* #4 got me...pregnant!

(The mouthes of #2 & 5 of course drop in shock.)

Numbah 5: PREGNANT?! Hey Numbah 4 how could you man? I mean really HOW could you?

Numbah 2: snickers Numbah 3 and 4 to be Mommy & Daddy? Ohhh this SO reminds me of a certain song.

(Now #4 just ran at #2 knocking him down and at his throat as #2 is gagging.)

Numbah 4: Listen you, I'll let you know that on our way home a bunch of kids saw us like that and THEY were singing that blasted song and many of them came back with quite the number of bruises. So let me tell you a little something here if I can beat down a choir THEN I CERTAINLY CAN BEAT DOWN A SOLO ACT! YOU GOT ME?!

Numbah 2: Okay...okay I promise I won't do anything like that so could you PLEASE let go?!

(#4 does as #2 is trying to catch his breath.)

Numbah 5: Okay now #4 how could they be able to know that #3 is pregnant?

Numbah 4: She...was...holding...my hand on the way back.

Numbah 5: Holding your hand?

Numbah 3: I'ms just wanting to be a good mommy with daddy Wawabee. (As she is hugging on #4 like crazy.)

Numbah 2 & 5: Wawabee?

Numbah 4: She's been like that ever since this whole thing started!

Numbah 3: Uh-huh!

Wawa..err..Wallabee : Kiki! Ehh..Numbah 3 we all agreed on to call eachover by our "Numbers" NOT our actual names!

Kiki A.K.A Numbah 3: I know, I know sorry about that but I feel SO much like a mommy instead of an agent.

#5: Now what Numbah 5 REALLY wants to know is HOW did you get like that #3? I mean you guys are 10 like us, HOW COULD A 10 YEAR OLD CAN GET LIKE THAT?!

#3: Well...

(End or Part 1)

How do you like this so far? I apologize if it was more stupid than original but I'd thought I try something a little experimental here. And by the way just in case anyone asks #3 is just being really excited about whats going on. And by the way NOTHING "*natural" happenend here so get THAT thought out of your minds! (I remembered telling my older brother about the basic and he smacked me for it as he assumed that I did that. Look I am willing to go..."experimental" but not THAT far!)

Pardon me if I am being overreactive here but I just wanted to make things clear. Anyways enough of that I am going to put out part 2 by MAYBE later on tonight to at least sometime tomorrow. So I hope that you enjoy this story and I will continue upon it soon.

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Old 12-13-2002, 10:03 AM
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I'm postponing this for a while

Sure the fic itself was just some lightweight piece of fluff that got into my mind. I won't make a big deal out of this but the only reason why I was doing one so soon was the fact that it was the only idea I could think of that wasn't incredibly long. It's not the fic that I am worried about now. But just in case IF I ended up forgetiing YES it is Numbah 1 as the "Baby" (notice on how he hasn't been in the story so far). I admit that I was thinking of just cancelling this at first and wait until I come up with a FAR better idea but hey we'll see what will happen. So don't bother with this all that much it was just something off the top of my head.
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Old 12-13-2002, 03:12 PM
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Hello! I was reading your story and seems sort of interesting.
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Old 12-13-2002, 09:16 PM
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Um...

Interesting, but sorta sick if you ask me...
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Old 12-13-2002, 11:17 PM
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need little work

your story ok it need a little work.
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