A pair of Chitahs

[Bhaskarc203]

I sketched this pair of Chitahs, as you can see my drawing has many defects and it does not look realistic atall, but I am still posting it here for the effort I put into it. Does anyone like it? Any suggestions?

http://www.freewebs.com/jujupoka203/chitahpair.jpg

BhaskarC.

[James]

The Cheetah on the left has an almost poignant expression and despite being coupled, it's actually quite a lonely drawing. It's always nice to see some natural colour and I would perhaps recommend an ink pen to give it some thicker line work. A gentle brush would be nice to bring out some of the line work from the colour.

Critical comments? There is a slight issue with the right cheetah, it's belly and rear legs don't quite ring true, but nevertheless, it's a nice gentle picture, devoid of robots, superheroes and spaceships. It's nice to see a variety of work and I hope you take up the paper and do a few more!

[Bhaskarc203]

The Cheetah on the left has an almost poignant expression and despite being coupled, it's actually quite a lonely drawing. It's always nice to see some natural colour and I would perhaps recommend an ink pen to give it some thicker line work. A gentle brush would be nice to bring out some of the line work from the colour.

Critical comments? There is a slight issue with the right cheetah, it's belly and rear legs don't quite ring true, but nevertheless, it's a nice gentle picture, devoid of robots, superheroes and spaceships. It's nice to see a variety of work and I hope you take up the paper and do a few more!

You pointed all the right errors in the picture. Thanks for your time. The lines were more clear when the sketch was half-done, but While I was coloring the chitahs I got impatient and started shading the sky, and in the process unnkowingly brushed my hand over and over again on the chitahs, which matted alll the drawing and the drawing was smudged to a dirty one, somehow I tried to restore it.

BhaskarC.