I liked the story and the dialogue a lot. Probably my favorite of the books so far. The artwork? Ehh... First read through I thought it was good. When I went back....
The first page is alright minus the fact that in the 4th panel miss m's shirt is missing

in the following panels in the kitchen, i found the inconsistensies distracting. One minute her shirt is showing off her middrift, the next it's tucked in, baggy, and showing her suddenly large chest. Her freckles were kinda weird IMO too (seriously, whose freckles are the same color as their hair?!) and her nailpolish sometime disapeared.
I liked KF's design in this issue, especially in the panel where he's experimenting in his lab
the only thing really bugging me is the panel with GA, Speey, Robin and
Batman-- seriously, where are batman's arms?!?! He looks half drawn!! There are some other weird moments, but eh.
Story was good. Especially liked KF's version of becoming Flash's sidekick. I think Robin's expressions were drawn really well when KF was teasing him for not being able to tell his secrets

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