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    Poem collection thread 3

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    Let' start it up again i'm sure were at thread 3 allreayd so her's mine called when we two parted
    WHEN WE TWO PARTED
    .
    When we two parted
    In silence and tear's
    Half broken hearted
    To sever for years
    pale grew thy cheek and cold
    colder thy kiss
    truly that hour fortold
    sorrow to this.
    The dew of the morning
    sunk chill on my brow
    It felt like the warning
    Of what i felt now
    The vows are all broken
    And the light is thy fame
    I hear that name spoken and i share in it's shame
    Thy name there before me
    A knell to my ears
    A shudder comes over me
    why wert tho so dear?
    Thy know i knew thy
    Who knew thee to well
    Long long shall i rule thee
    to deeply to tell
    In secret love we meet in silence i greive
    That thy heart could forget thy spirit decive
    If i should meet thee after lon year's
    How should i great thee?
    With love and compassion?
    Or with silence and tear's?
    For that is the greatest gift of my fear's
    We we two parted.
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    i call this one...the sun

    THE SUN

    a molten ball high in space
    crashing upon us waves of heat
    giving light
    the sun

    Hero
    Formerly N. Frederick, among a bunch of others.

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    I believe I posted this poem once before on here but I will post it again....

    -Sinner-

    I'm covered with sin
    It's my second skin
    Redemption I cannot win
    I've got a devil within
    See it when I grin
    Love is something thats been
    Not something that will be
    No not for me
    Thats when the sin begins
    Life goes from start to fin
    I've got a devil within
    It sure does like to grin
    We all have a twin
    Of evil we hold in
    Prickin like a pin
    No reason for life to be
    Thats why the twin is me
    Thats why I let the devil free
    I sure do like to grin
    With my blood soaked skin
    Making life come to....
    Fin.
    "Question with boldness even the existence of a God; because, if there be one, he must more approve of the homage of reason than that of blindfolded fear." Thomas Jefferson (1743 - 1826)

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    Narf.

    I like poems. They're fun.

    An Explanation for Mr. Chan


    So you’ll fight us without a backward glance

    Just assuming that our reverence

    Is directed to the one who turned us into this,

    That there’s nothing we’ve lost, and nothing we miss.

    Well then, I guess I should start listing

    All the ‘benefits’ that come with assisting

    An old, insane, withered, bent shell

    Of a man who’s thoughts constantly dwell

    On the ridiculous concept of world domination

    And pursuing this goal through our humiliation.

    It’s taken us two arduous years to get to the point

    Where we have finally become just barely adroit

    Enough to even lay a finger on you

    Let alone take you out, and what can we do?

    Nothing, just continue to wearily fight

    Aware of your stature, your goodness, your might.

    Enough with point one, let’s move to point two-

    How we spend our days as servants, and rue

    The mornings when sunlight just barely is born

    Before the chilly dawn air is violently torn

    By his unbearable, high pitched, relentless shriek:

    “Gun! Run! Chui! Get to the kitchen and heat

    my tea! Fetch my books! What is this? Dust!

    Make the bed! Sweep the floors! Lick them clean if you must!”

    And so begins another fabulous day

    Of bowing and scraping and hiding away

    Watching him peruse those fragile old books

    Knowing that with enough sneaky looks

    We could find away to restore what we were.

    That inside those pages might lay our cure.

    But as you well know, we’re too cowardly

    To take the chance of being caught, we

    Have been tortured and beaten for much, much less.

    You don’t believe me? Here, I’ll let you assess

    The scars and the bruises, all of them new

    Quite different from the ones caused by you.

    These go deeper than each visible mark

    Burning and stabbing till our vision goes dark.

    And that brings me succinctly into point three

    Did you know we can’t eat? Sleep? Dream?

    The only rest our new bodies require

    Are those few moments when we ‘expire’

    Just to awaken in a nightmarish place.

    Did you know where he keeps us? From the look on your face

    I’d guess the answer is no. I’d suspected as much.

    So let me attempt to begin to convey what such

    a horrible place it is we’re banished to

    though it’s going to hard to describe to you.

    You know that feeling, right when you wake?

    When your chest is constricted and the world feels fake?

    When the digital clock blinks a blood red hour?

    When the adrenaline blooms in your veins like a flower?

    Take that terror, that heat, that predatory shade

    Capture and bottle it, and you’ve just made

    Our home. Our den. The place where we go

    To relax and unwind from our stressful day. So.

    Look at me now, and tell me truthfully

    Do you really not feel a shred of empathy?

    And God help me, yes, I seem really crazy

    Having this chat with myself, but since there’s no one near me

    I have to be content with my inner ranting.

    It’s better than the silent, private lamenting

    We do, when we lay prone in that malevolent prison

    Praying and begging, beyond rhyme or reason.

    And now I return to something I previously mentioned

    The inability to dream caused by our ‘ascension’.

    And one last question (I hope you can cope)

    If we cannot dream, how can we hope?
    A Political Lurker Set Adift

    Hell in a Handbasket

    "Correction: Last week's column mistankenly misidentified a source. The European Commission president is Romano Prodi, not Buffy the Vampire Slayer."
    - correction notice in the Prague Post

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    Well, I've only written a few... but this one is my favorite....

    Think of me II

    In the adjoining life when
    You look at the twilight
    Welkin and see the celestial body
    Think of me
    When you feel the touch of nature
    Or sail a famous sea
    Think of me
    When you smell a flower or
    See a tower
    Think of me
    and when your happy to the highest
    Degree make sure you
    Think of me.


    I put this one and a few others on Poetry.com.

    I would appreciate some feedback .


    Later,
    goodbye to you, goodbye to everything I thought I knew
    you were the one I loved, the one thing that I tried to hold on to
    -Michelle Branch
    GEEK CENTRAL~! it pwns you and TZ.

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    Cell Phone Haikus

    Gleaned off of /.
    made me laugh, ho ho, hee hee
    please enjoy them too

    Default ring is fine.
    Your five dollar ring? a waste!
    You consumer whore!

    I can take pictures
    I can send you my pictures
    This girl has huge ****!


    (Edited by Zmanjz)
    Saturday is the best day of the week. No demands at all! Perfect freedom! The whole day stretches before us with unlimited opportunity! And what better way to appreciate that opportunity than by squandering it watching cartoons all day! --- Calvin

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    Quick note: NO raunchy Limericks or Haiku.

    (there are plenty of places for that... and this is not one of them.)

    You have been warned.
    TOONAMI HAS RETURNED! THE PEOPLE REJOICE I BEGIN WATCHING CN AGAIN AFTER 8 YEAR EXILE!
    WORDS OF AWESOME
    All that is required
    Words of Wisdom

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    Oh, I actually rather like the last one

    Here's a few samples of the dreadful garbage I used to write until I got over myself.

    I had to remove most of them since they wouldn't behave and format properly.

    The Narrows


    I despise the narrows.
    Narrow space can produce nothing good.
    Narrow people inspire envy and resentment.
    Narrow minds yield only self-serving and unreasoned hate.
    Narrow eyes hide the truth.
    Narrow souls make bitter men.

    Reflections From an Ailing Moon



    On a day in winter
    Most lethal of the tetrology,
    I wasted the time burning cold
    Convalescent upon a sickbed,
    From mid Decembers morn to mid Decembers night
    Lied I there endlessly more pallid,
    Moaning from my swollen lips
    My breath and soul growing ever more shallow.

    In the depths of night
    Before the dozen bells,
    A caller came to the door
    Pulling me through my ailing dream,
    He stood cacophonously silent
    What sense remained betrayed him cold as I,
    Twas no witness of Jehovah
    Nor a peddler of delights,
    But a dark cloaked and gaunt formed man
    With visage kept to shadow.

    He thrust forth his hand
    A sickly member wholly skeletal and frail,
    As he moved his robe ripped from nights sky shifted
    His tarnish scythe blade flickered like a sickly crescent moon,
    The silken hood he wore shuffled without a sound
    And he croaked to me that I should come,
    I stiffened slowly in a minute that lasted a million years,
    Took his hand and winced with sudden chill.

    The street and houses were fully gone
    Each fence and yapping hound burned away,
    I stood instead on a dismal plain,
    Sown with withered grass,
    The dark-cloaked spectre beckoned me
    Bid me take his well-worn path,
    We walked upon a sullen road
    Kept to a sluggish pace.

    With but an hours passing stood we at the end
    No longer on the blighted earth but within a pallid void,
    Two stone faces adrift before us
    Both the same in ends and means,
    Each bore a face, baroquely carved from rock,
    One a grinning devil and the other a frowning god,
    In each face was uniformly set,
    A gaping maw of endless black,

    The gasping thing that brought me turned and harshly spoke
    Said that I may enter either and that neither offered hoped,
    In this I damnably gained mad assurance
    Basking the colorless gloaming of my penultimate thought,
    Closed my eyes and held my fruitless breath,
    Paid no heed my straining form or spirit,
    My arm stretched forward not shaking nor afraid
    And lo’, I was gone.

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    Actually, I still rather like that last one for some reason, but I'm dubious about the worth of the rest. But that aside, it was cathartic.
    “What is earnest is not always true; on the contrary, error is often more earnest than truth.”
    ~Benjamin Disraeli

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    I've written a lot of poems, but this one is my favorite.

    The Party

    Under the dark velvet sky of the night
    Is when the wild creatures dance into sight
    All having fun without a worry or care
    None can resist, weather common or rare.

    Under the stars the rabbits begin to swoon
    And the wolf comes out to sing to the moon.
    Bats fly all around in the great big sky
    While lizards like to crawl and scamper by.

    Ferrets and mice like to squeak and play
    And the coyote comes out to yip and bay.
    Monkeys swing from tree to tree
    While horses run wild and free.

    Cats of all sizes lay in complete bliss.
    And up in the trees the snakes will hiss.
    Rivers hold fish of every size and shape
    While at honeycombs is where bears wait.

    Sugar gliders sail like kites in a breeze
    And raccoons like to hide in the leaves.
    Turtles walk slowly without a sound
    While a skunks smell is easily found.

    The red fox comes out to join with her friends
    And the owl swoops in before the fun ends.
    Squirrels run back and forth hiding nuts and seeds
    While the alligator tends to its own needs.

    All through the night animals laugh and have fun
    But they all go home before the light of the sun.
    Even though the animals couldn't stay
    They'll be back, cause tomorrow is another day.

    What happens when the unstoppable force meets the unmoveable block???

    A good friend will come and bail you out of jail...but, a true friend will be sitting next to you saying, "Damn...that was fun!"

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