Spider-Man (Again!)

[Stu]

Now then

I've continued trying to copy other artists, screwed up big time on this one, it was supposed to be John Romita Jr, but halfway through I thought, screw it and continued it normally. The pose is something weider than I usually try, but other than that, and the length of his arm, I quite like this one.

Comments would be apprecaited. :)

[James]

I like the tension in the thread made by having his arm down - even if it's a little long, although it's not overly noticable! I like the head positioning too. Your work seems to have a stronger clarity now more confidence and that comes through in the line ut the feet are something to watch for especially on spidey!!


The practise you put in is paying off. Art is about observation and self improvement. Finding your weakness and working on them. Training your eye to look. I think many looking at Bruce Timm's feet/hands style might be helpful. You keep your work relatively simple, as is his body construction - maybe that might help your art.

[Rune]

I like the pose, its almost got the feel of a 'between frames' shot where often the body doesn't look that neat & organised due to the motion. The angle of the head is very nice too. Maybe he needs bulking up a little here and there and as SJJ says the angle of the feet is a bit off but overall this is great - you're improving all the time :D