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witness
09-28-2001, 11:41 PM
Hello, everyone. Once again I've come up with an idea for yet another story. This time, I'll be writing a story that's in the Batman timeline. This way, the various Tim/Robin fans will be happy (I hope). Guess I should get started, huh?





Judge of Character : Preview






Odd.





His time had finally come. He was given the right to join society once again. A clean bill of health had provided him the best way to get out of there. He hated that place. No one really ever likes it. He wonders why there are even people working there. His mind quickly snaps back to attention. He realizes that he doesn't care. He's leaving and he hopes that he never goes back.

Still, it was very odd. Even nature had agreed with the doctors. Gotham City, usually known for it's criminals, was also known by it's atmosphere. The skies were never clear. It was either hazy, raining, or whatever. But today nature had smiled upon him. The skies were totally clear. The usually, ugly reddish sun was shining a bright yellow. It was as if it was saying this is a brand new start for him.

He looked back once more at the life he once had. At the place where he spent the most dismal years of his life. That asylum always looked better standing from the outside rather than peering from the inside. He smiled to himself, knowing full well that he would never dare to return.

Yes, the day was as odd as he was, but he didn't mind. He took his top hat in his hand and bowed towards the asylum, giving it a fond farewell. He replaced the hat on his head, turned around and headed for his new life in Gotham City.

Batgirl
10-01-2001, 06:05 PM
Was that... Penguin? Was it??? The top hat thing... ow, I hope it is! And thank you! I LOVE TIM!!!! :blushes: Sorry, I'm a very passionate person... Hey looks good, keep it up.

witness
10-02-2001, 10:29 PM
thank you so much for posting a reply! i was getting worried if anyone would be interested with that preview. it was shorter than i wanted it to be. i was pressed for time. i'll hold off writing the first chapter for another day or so. hopefully i'll get another response. i just love words of encouragement. heh.

i can't say who that was yet. you'll find out soon enough though. either in chapter one or two, depending again on how much time i have to write.

thanks again batgirl!

Panther
10-04-2001, 10:01 PM
Sounds like its gonna be a cool story. i loved the reflection on the sky, very approperiate. However, my thought was this could be the Riddiler - he had that hat thing too. We haven't seen hm for a while. But it'll be cool whoever it is.

later