Baltofan
05-14-2003, 05:35 AM
The Greatest Show Aboard A Ship
A Don Bluth all star / Moulin Rouge (2001) / Secret Of NIMH II / Titanic (97) Crossover
Guest star:Max (Capitol Critters)
Strongly PG rated content
Part 1 - Teresa Meets Max
My foreword
This fan fic got a third place under the Animated Lust fan fic contest, and it was under the category Best Canon Couple for Max and Teresa.
Foreword
'Welcome aboard the Titanic!' that's some of the words that the elder Teresa remembered, as her faithful voyage with Titanic began.
Teresa clearly remembered the big carnival ball aboard the ship, her new love she met under the ball.
But she also thought about how the giant ship, and the many innocent crewmen and passengers sank deep down at the ocean, while herself, and some other passengers came safe away from the sinking hell.
On the day Titanic left Ireland
A big crowd stood beside Titanic, where over thousands of passengers, was boarding the ship, that sailed to the promised land, and Vangelis' 'Bon Voyage' got played by the ships' orchestra.
Max was a poor mouse boy, who lived in the backyards by the harbor, had won the ticket to Titanic under a card game in the local pub with Justin and his friends.
Mrs. Brisby, and her kids Martin, Teresa, Timothy and Cynthia, was together with Auntie Shrew, while the whole Mousekewitz family also got aboard the ship, where the orchestra welcomed them with Beatles' 'Yellow Submarine'.
The cheering didn't stop, as Titanic slowly left the harbor, and sailed out in the big blue, with Mr. Ages as captain, but nobody knew that the cat Richard also was one of the many passengers!
The Brisby, and the Mousekewitz family was sitting at the same table, in the French inspired restaurant, wine and lemonade was served to the dinner, and 'Be Our Guest' was played by the restaurant's pianist.
As Teresa went outside for a walk, she suddenly felt over her legs, and wounded herself, Max helped her up, and Teresa said 'Thank you for the help! Who are you?', and Max said 'I'm Max! Nice to meet You, Teresa!'.
Teresa asked surprised 'Where do You know me from?', and Max said 'You live in a big mansion near Windsor Castle with Your family, and You are often on the front of the newspapers.'
Max said 'You're welcome at our party tonight!', and Teresa said 'I promise to come! Bye!'
At the deck for the poor passengers, was there a party, where people danced, drank whiskey and beer, while a folk trio played up to dance.
As Teresa entered the smoky room, Max and his friends welcomed her, and Max took Teresa out for a dance, while the trio played Secret Gardens 'The Rap'.
On the walls hanged pictures of ships from Ireland, and then the dance- floor got crowded, as the trio played 'Jamboree', and 'King Of The Road'.
Later on, Max and Teresa left the party, and as the two lovers went outside in the moonlight, they began to sing 'All I Ask of You'.
After the song, the two new lovers kissed each other, thanked for the dance, said good night, and went up to their cabins.
The next day, was the preparations for the carnival starting, and it was going to be one of the biggest and expensive carnivals aboard a ship in history.
Richard was sitting in the casino with his fellows, and he planned what to do with the rich Brisby family, and as nobody believed in his plan, he hammered his paw down in the table, and asked who the leader was.
Teresa saw Max's paintings of Paris, and she really liked them, and thereafter, Max and Teresa went up to Teresa's luxurious cabin.
But Teresa had to hide Max, as Mrs. Brisby came and asked 'Are you going to prepare for the ball?', and Teresa nervously said 'Yes mom!'
As Teresa's mom vanished, Teresa said 'You can come out now!', and Max came out of his hide. Teresa showed her dress, and her jewels for the ball.
Max said 'That is beautiful!' and Teresa said 'I bought this dress on Oxford Street in London, while I bought the jewels in Amsterdam'
Max asked 'May I paint a picture of you?', and Teresa, who had taken her elegant dress on, said 'Yes! I'm so excited to see the result!'
Nearly ten minutes later, had Max finished his painting, and Teresa said 'Wow! That's amazing! I'm sorry, but I have to go now, before my mom misses me! Meet me under the dome at 10 PM!'
As Max walked out of the cabin, was Richard, spying him, and he wondered what Max did in Teresa's room, as he sneaked away from the rich peoples cabin deck.
The whole Brisby, and Mousekewitz family and Jenny had fun with blowing up hundreds of caterpillar, bird formed and round balloons, in all sizes to the ball.
Tiger and his mate Miss Kitty, and the sheriff dog Wylie Burp, who was in love with Tanya Mousekewitz, was hanging giant banners up under the big glass dome.
As the carnival party started, was Teresa and Max meeting on the stairs, and began to dance, while the orchestra played The Donau waltz.
Mrs. Brisby, and her family was really surprised to see Teresa had found a lover, he looked really fine, but they didn't know Max was a boy from the backyards.
Champagne, drinks, lemonade and snacks was served to the crowd, and Tanya, who won the prize for best carnival costume, made a solo ballet to the sound of the Sleeping Beauty waltz.
Thereafter, was everybody gathered to dance and sing along to Boney M's song 'Rasputin'.
Richard and his pals was also at the ball, the leader of the cats whispered to his men 'Tomorrow we're going to get a end of Max and his little girlfriend, and then the whole Brisby family! They are going to end in the cold water!'
Tony and Bridget won the dancing competition, as they danced to Ricky Martin's 'Maria', and the pair danced in a circle, while Bryan Adams' 'Have You Ever Really Loved A Woman'.
The day after the ball, the monstrous ferry came out in colder water, and many of the passengers, who took outside to enjoy the sunshine on the deck, got a cold or a flu, and the doctor was really busy.
Back at old Teresa's house:
Teresa remembered with a shiver what happen that night, she haven't imagination enough to think about the terrible disaster, where Titanic sank.
Part 2
On the day Titanic sank:
The moment that Titanic hit the iceberg, became everything chaotic so slowly, and the passengers didn't know they was about to sink.
Mr. Ages got his life's chock, as he sailed into the iceberg, he knew this would be a terrible disaster for the ship, and its passengers.
The Brisby family awoke, as somebody knocked on the door, and the water was slowly filling their cabin, Mrs. Brisby said 'I must be dreaming!' and Martin said 'I will hope that this is not an accident!'
In the meanwhile was the passengers gathering all their luggage's they could, and then they rushed out of their cabin.
Brutus had to gather every passenger under the dome, and give them a life west, but nobody knew how big a disaster there would be.
As nearly everybody was gathered under the dome, was Brutus saying to the crowd 'Walk out to the lifeboats! The boat is sinking! Women and children have to go first!'
Suddenly was everything getting chaotic, many of the kids wished not to be parted from their parents, and the husbands wouldn't leave their men.
Up on the crowded promenade deck, was Max and Teresa searching and calling desperately after each other, and there was panic in the lifeboats, and a lot of crying and swearing.
In the meanwhile was Mr. Ages rushing out to the deck with the lifeboats, where he got in the same lifeboat with Timmy and Jenny, and Timmy said 'Jump aboard captain! There can't be place for more passengers here!'
The leader of the orchestra, who stood on the deck with his band, said 'Let's play Bridge Over Troubled Water, before we go under, my gentle-mices!'.
The French born seagull, Jeremy and the female doves carried two mices each on their bags, and flew them to land, while the crew called out for SOS, and sent up emergency rockets.
Richard and his gang got their plans spoiled, as they was caught in a lifeboat, where the Brisby family wasn't aboard.
The boat sank further, the passengers began to glide and fall downward on the deck, and many fell down in the ice cold water, where they met their fate.
Some of the passengers in the lifeboats began to pray, and soon there wasn't a lifeboat that was full of crying and shouting passengers.
The mices Tony and Bridget, who got married aboard the ship, got rescued in the water, by the doves, while Fievel's mommy and daddy, and the cats Tiger and Miss Kitty, got helped up in a lifeboat.
Some of the mices used coffee cups, and bottles to get away from the ferry, who began to split in two, and it felt apart, while the two giant chimneys crashed down in the water.
The giant back of Titanic raised over the lifeboats like a god, many passengers was still swimming desperately in the freezing cold water.
Mrs. Brisby, who cried loudly out for help with the other passengers, wondered why the emergency ships haven't showed up yet.
Later on, when everything got too quiet, a boat with an emergency crew finally sailed through the many lifeless bodies.
After what it felt like an eternity, was the emergency ship crew first finding the Brisby family in their lifeboat, and the Mousekewitz family was found on the top of a wardrobe, thanked being father Mousekewitz's violin.
The day after Titanic's wreck
The overfilled emergency ships finally arrived in New York City, and Tiger, Wylie Burp, Max, and the whole Brisby & Mouskewitz family had survived the disaster.
Richard, and the cat gang, that had been wanted in whole Ireland, was one of the many missing passengers, and many in the two famous mice families had to be treated for lemonia and flu.
South Street Seaport, New York City, April 2002
Old Teresa, and old Max stood together by the Titanic Memorial, it's been eighteen years since they traveled with Titanic, and the press was gathered to interview the famous pair.
A Don Bluth all star / Moulin Rouge (2001) / Secret Of NIMH II / Titanic (97) Crossover
Guest star:Max (Capitol Critters)
Strongly PG rated content
Part 1 - Teresa Meets Max
My foreword
This fan fic got a third place under the Animated Lust fan fic contest, and it was under the category Best Canon Couple for Max and Teresa.
Foreword
'Welcome aboard the Titanic!' that's some of the words that the elder Teresa remembered, as her faithful voyage with Titanic began.
Teresa clearly remembered the big carnival ball aboard the ship, her new love she met under the ball.
But she also thought about how the giant ship, and the many innocent crewmen and passengers sank deep down at the ocean, while herself, and some other passengers came safe away from the sinking hell.
On the day Titanic left Ireland
A big crowd stood beside Titanic, where over thousands of passengers, was boarding the ship, that sailed to the promised land, and Vangelis' 'Bon Voyage' got played by the ships' orchestra.
Max was a poor mouse boy, who lived in the backyards by the harbor, had won the ticket to Titanic under a card game in the local pub with Justin and his friends.
Mrs. Brisby, and her kids Martin, Teresa, Timothy and Cynthia, was together with Auntie Shrew, while the whole Mousekewitz family also got aboard the ship, where the orchestra welcomed them with Beatles' 'Yellow Submarine'.
The cheering didn't stop, as Titanic slowly left the harbor, and sailed out in the big blue, with Mr. Ages as captain, but nobody knew that the cat Richard also was one of the many passengers!
The Brisby, and the Mousekewitz family was sitting at the same table, in the French inspired restaurant, wine and lemonade was served to the dinner, and 'Be Our Guest' was played by the restaurant's pianist.
As Teresa went outside for a walk, she suddenly felt over her legs, and wounded herself, Max helped her up, and Teresa said 'Thank you for the help! Who are you?', and Max said 'I'm Max! Nice to meet You, Teresa!'.
Teresa asked surprised 'Where do You know me from?', and Max said 'You live in a big mansion near Windsor Castle with Your family, and You are often on the front of the newspapers.'
Max said 'You're welcome at our party tonight!', and Teresa said 'I promise to come! Bye!'
At the deck for the poor passengers, was there a party, where people danced, drank whiskey and beer, while a folk trio played up to dance.
As Teresa entered the smoky room, Max and his friends welcomed her, and Max took Teresa out for a dance, while the trio played Secret Gardens 'The Rap'.
On the walls hanged pictures of ships from Ireland, and then the dance- floor got crowded, as the trio played 'Jamboree', and 'King Of The Road'.
Later on, Max and Teresa left the party, and as the two lovers went outside in the moonlight, they began to sing 'All I Ask of You'.
After the song, the two new lovers kissed each other, thanked for the dance, said good night, and went up to their cabins.
The next day, was the preparations for the carnival starting, and it was going to be one of the biggest and expensive carnivals aboard a ship in history.
Richard was sitting in the casino with his fellows, and he planned what to do with the rich Brisby family, and as nobody believed in his plan, he hammered his paw down in the table, and asked who the leader was.
Teresa saw Max's paintings of Paris, and she really liked them, and thereafter, Max and Teresa went up to Teresa's luxurious cabin.
But Teresa had to hide Max, as Mrs. Brisby came and asked 'Are you going to prepare for the ball?', and Teresa nervously said 'Yes mom!'
As Teresa's mom vanished, Teresa said 'You can come out now!', and Max came out of his hide. Teresa showed her dress, and her jewels for the ball.
Max said 'That is beautiful!' and Teresa said 'I bought this dress on Oxford Street in London, while I bought the jewels in Amsterdam'
Max asked 'May I paint a picture of you?', and Teresa, who had taken her elegant dress on, said 'Yes! I'm so excited to see the result!'
Nearly ten minutes later, had Max finished his painting, and Teresa said 'Wow! That's amazing! I'm sorry, but I have to go now, before my mom misses me! Meet me under the dome at 10 PM!'
As Max walked out of the cabin, was Richard, spying him, and he wondered what Max did in Teresa's room, as he sneaked away from the rich peoples cabin deck.
The whole Brisby, and Mousekewitz family and Jenny had fun with blowing up hundreds of caterpillar, bird formed and round balloons, in all sizes to the ball.
Tiger and his mate Miss Kitty, and the sheriff dog Wylie Burp, who was in love with Tanya Mousekewitz, was hanging giant banners up under the big glass dome.
As the carnival party started, was Teresa and Max meeting on the stairs, and began to dance, while the orchestra played The Donau waltz.
Mrs. Brisby, and her family was really surprised to see Teresa had found a lover, he looked really fine, but they didn't know Max was a boy from the backyards.
Champagne, drinks, lemonade and snacks was served to the crowd, and Tanya, who won the prize for best carnival costume, made a solo ballet to the sound of the Sleeping Beauty waltz.
Thereafter, was everybody gathered to dance and sing along to Boney M's song 'Rasputin'.
Richard and his pals was also at the ball, the leader of the cats whispered to his men 'Tomorrow we're going to get a end of Max and his little girlfriend, and then the whole Brisby family! They are going to end in the cold water!'
Tony and Bridget won the dancing competition, as they danced to Ricky Martin's 'Maria', and the pair danced in a circle, while Bryan Adams' 'Have You Ever Really Loved A Woman'.
The day after the ball, the monstrous ferry came out in colder water, and many of the passengers, who took outside to enjoy the sunshine on the deck, got a cold or a flu, and the doctor was really busy.
Back at old Teresa's house:
Teresa remembered with a shiver what happen that night, she haven't imagination enough to think about the terrible disaster, where Titanic sank.
Part 2
On the day Titanic sank:
The moment that Titanic hit the iceberg, became everything chaotic so slowly, and the passengers didn't know they was about to sink.
Mr. Ages got his life's chock, as he sailed into the iceberg, he knew this would be a terrible disaster for the ship, and its passengers.
The Brisby family awoke, as somebody knocked on the door, and the water was slowly filling their cabin, Mrs. Brisby said 'I must be dreaming!' and Martin said 'I will hope that this is not an accident!'
In the meanwhile was the passengers gathering all their luggage's they could, and then they rushed out of their cabin.
Brutus had to gather every passenger under the dome, and give them a life west, but nobody knew how big a disaster there would be.
As nearly everybody was gathered under the dome, was Brutus saying to the crowd 'Walk out to the lifeboats! The boat is sinking! Women and children have to go first!'
Suddenly was everything getting chaotic, many of the kids wished not to be parted from their parents, and the husbands wouldn't leave their men.
Up on the crowded promenade deck, was Max and Teresa searching and calling desperately after each other, and there was panic in the lifeboats, and a lot of crying and swearing.
In the meanwhile was Mr. Ages rushing out to the deck with the lifeboats, where he got in the same lifeboat with Timmy and Jenny, and Timmy said 'Jump aboard captain! There can't be place for more passengers here!'
The leader of the orchestra, who stood on the deck with his band, said 'Let's play Bridge Over Troubled Water, before we go under, my gentle-mices!'.
The French born seagull, Jeremy and the female doves carried two mices each on their bags, and flew them to land, while the crew called out for SOS, and sent up emergency rockets.
Richard and his gang got their plans spoiled, as they was caught in a lifeboat, where the Brisby family wasn't aboard.
The boat sank further, the passengers began to glide and fall downward on the deck, and many fell down in the ice cold water, where they met their fate.
Some of the passengers in the lifeboats began to pray, and soon there wasn't a lifeboat that was full of crying and shouting passengers.
The mices Tony and Bridget, who got married aboard the ship, got rescued in the water, by the doves, while Fievel's mommy and daddy, and the cats Tiger and Miss Kitty, got helped up in a lifeboat.
Some of the mices used coffee cups, and bottles to get away from the ferry, who began to split in two, and it felt apart, while the two giant chimneys crashed down in the water.
The giant back of Titanic raised over the lifeboats like a god, many passengers was still swimming desperately in the freezing cold water.
Mrs. Brisby, who cried loudly out for help with the other passengers, wondered why the emergency ships haven't showed up yet.
Later on, when everything got too quiet, a boat with an emergency crew finally sailed through the many lifeless bodies.
After what it felt like an eternity, was the emergency ship crew first finding the Brisby family in their lifeboat, and the Mousekewitz family was found on the top of a wardrobe, thanked being father Mousekewitz's violin.
The day after Titanic's wreck
The overfilled emergency ships finally arrived in New York City, and Tiger, Wylie Burp, Max, and the whole Brisby & Mouskewitz family had survived the disaster.
Richard, and the cat gang, that had been wanted in whole Ireland, was one of the many missing passengers, and many in the two famous mice families had to be treated for lemonia and flu.
South Street Seaport, New York City, April 2002
Old Teresa, and old Max stood together by the Titanic Memorial, it's been eighteen years since they traveled with Titanic, and the press was gathered to interview the famous pair.