My Book : Brain Speak, tell me what you think

[Chris Sanders MSX]

We are working on a new Chapter, as you read this. I actually do plan on getting it published. I've feild tested it at my school, and other schools in Chicago. Everyone thought it was hillarious and sometiems thought provoking. I wasn't going for that but it just happened.

My Co-Author, a white guy formerly from England(living in NY) has done the same feild work and has gotten some of the same results. And now I want to see what my friends here at Toon Zone think.

Because it's called Brain Speak, that means it's just things coming uncensored from our minds and lives, it's part Journal, part story board..well it's a little of everything. Also the uncensored thing is why I can't post directly on the board.

If you want to read a paragraph/editorial or 3, send me a Private Message and I'll send you some stuff. Then come back here and tell me what you thought. This is from the Chapter I'm working on now.

I appreciate any and ALL comments.

p.s. Don't forget to Clean out your PM Box...

[Chris Sanders MSX]

Yeah it's me. I decided that I can post 1 thing because it's pretty tame compared to the rest of the book. Read this tell me what you think and if you want more PM me, then come back and tell me what you think.

My Senior Year plan
This is my plan. I’m going to hook up with someone during the first week of school. Ya know get a girlfriend to start it off, then I’m going to transfer out like I already plan to, but I’m not going to tell her. Word of mouth will get to her that I transferred, and it’ll be the most hilarious thing ever. To me at least. I already know who I’m doing this to, and trust me they deserve it. But my plans not over with that. I will be attending Hyde Park’s Home Coming Dance, where I will purposely run into her, and try to dance with her just to see what happens. Gosh, I’m a great person, aren’t I ?


Go to the Top and read the “My plan” before reading this.
This is just a convo I had with Charles about my “plan”

MonkeySiXiZFUN: What I'm going to do is start dating [CENSORED] again, cause I can pull her again with a snap, and then simply transfer and not tell her. It's going to be funny.
Lunchbox Anthem: that never works , if your going for the "Cease to exist" thing

MonkeySiXiZFUN: How do you figure ?

MonkeySiXiZFUN: She lives too far, has no phone...

Lunchbox Anthem: has no phone?
Lunchbox Anthem: payphones.
Lunchbox Anthem: friends houses
Lunchbox Anthem: word of moth.
Lunchbox Anthem: mutual
Lunchbox Anthem: friends.

MonkeySiXiZFUN: I was planning on word of mouth to get to her that's what’s so funny. I mean think about it, She comes to school, I don’t show up. At firsts he thinks maybe I'm sick but then I don’t come back for at least 2 weeks and then she asked some one if they’ve seen her “man”. And they go uh.. he transferred last week. He didn’t tell you ?? It’s hilarious.

MonkeySiXiZFUN: I wasn't going for “Cease to Exist” anyway. I was planning to attend Home Coming ( a dance where all schools can come) and seeing her, just so I can smile in her face and act like nothings wrong.

Lunchbox Anthem: better hope she doesn't have a mean streak and connections.

Lunchbox Anthem: :)

MonkeySiXiZFUN: :)

MonkeySiXiZFUN: All her "friends" took my side when we were dating, so she has no connections, and she won't know I'm coming to the dance so I doubt if anyone will be waiting on me. If they are I’ll uh, run into the crowd. Its’a big gym.

[Watagashi]

Well... I don't really read those kind of novels, but it does sound like something a buncha people would want to read and so it will probably become pretty popular once you get it published and... yeah. :p