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Thundercleese
04-21-2002, 03:53 PM
So flash and J'onn are the only ones in the watchtower, the rest are dealing with another case. J'onn is doing something important on a computer, when Flash runs and and tells him.....
Add on....
BeastBoyWonder
04-21-2002, 05:44 PM
"The signal to the Javelin is gone!" exclaimed the Flash.
"How is this possible?" asked J'onn in his unique accent. "According to Batman, the Javelin emits a strong signal capable of passing through most obstructions. Unlike radio, it can pass through substances such as water and rock. The signal is built into the innards of the ship, and would usually only terminate if the ship were..."
"Destroyed?"
"I'm afraid that's the case."
"Do you think they're...dead?"
"No, I can feel them. Batman, Hawkgirl, Diana, Superman, and the Green Lantern are all in posession of their minds, but I sense a hightened feeling of excitement and anxiety, which is normal on missions."
"Do you remember what they were doing?"
"Here, on the watchtower, I had assumed a human form and was practicing casual convorsation to the mirror, when Superman made a passing reference to Sinestro, and said that he and the others were going on a routine mission. Because I was busy, I had no need to travel with them."
"And...?"
"Nothing."
"What are we gonna do?"
AND THEN...
Condiment King
04-21-2002, 05:51 PM
(This is a made for TV movie on Cartoon Theatre the Saturday after the JL 1st Season Finale. 2 Part Movie is optional depending on how long this is. It is titled: "What an Injustice!"
In the Javelin:
Sinestro was ripping apart the inner controls to the Javelin.
Sinestro: Remember me superfools! Time for all of you to die. I already sent someone to the watchtower to finish the Manhunter and Flash!
He nailed Superman and GL but the rest banned together and nailed Sinestro. Sinestro fled and flew to Earth.
Sinestro: Now, I will DESTROY your city, Superman!
John: Diana, Hawkgirl, come with me. We will help J'ohn and Flash. Superman, Batman, you guys help Metropolis.
Superman: Okay, John.
Superman and Batman flew to Metropolis. They meet Bane and Sinestro.
Sinestro: "Ah, remember us, superfools! You and that upstart Lantern took something very dear to me but I have it back! Let's just say some friends of mine made me a new one."
(Sinestro hits Superman and Batman with a yellow blast from his yellow Qwardian ring. Then, Bane gives both a pulversizing blow.)
Bane: I have also improved my formula. I shall break you. What do you think of our little alliance?
(Bane and Sinestro dominate Superman and Batman and leave them lying motionless [but not dead] Supergirl sees what is going on from a distance and gets help. Supergirl, Steel, Batgirl, Nightwing, and Robin all confront Bane and Sinestro.)
Sinestro: Aw, fresh meat but it looks like we will have to contact the brains behind our little alliance, Bane.
And then................
There! I think I cleared that up!
BeastBoyWonder
04-21-2002, 06:26 PM
Whoa, where did that come from? I don't want to be critical, its up to you guys to decide how the story goes. However, ilongkyle posted an identical extension after mine (not heeding or using the "i'm adding to the story" post), and this new entry is chock full of a rush to action with no introduction to any of the characters or situation or anything...I think we need to revise what we're doing.
EDIT: Nightwing, Robin, and Supergirl were thrown into the story, and the remainder of the JL is not mentioned, although at this point the story deals with the JL, and some of the members losing communication with the Watchtower.
Condiment King
04-21-2002, 06:33 PM
I edited my post to coincide with ragindrummerboy's post. Please go ahead and add on.
JLU Dude
04-21-2002, 06:46 PM
I deleted my earlier post.
Sinesto zapped Supergirl into a wall. "AHHHGH!!," she cried.
Bane grabbed Nightwing and tossed him though a window.
Robin walked up behind Sinesto. Sinesto turned around. "Turning to sneak up on me?" Sinesto asked, evily.
Robin was shocked. "Oh, crap," he said.
"Oh, crap, indeed," he smirked. He blasted, but Steel flew in front of him and fell.
"Steel!" Robin, exclaimed.
"I'm fine," Steel said.
Superman groaned and got up. He zapped Bane's Venom Tube, busting it. "The venom!" Bane exclaimed, as looked at the hole in his tube and fell as he began to return to normal.
Batman woke up and got up. "Great!" he muttered.
Supergirl, Steel, and Nightwing got up. "Sinesto," Superman stated. "You're outnumbered give up."
****************************************************
J'Onn looked around. "Show yourself," he said. He began to scan the mystery man's mind. "Flash duck."
A laser zapped the the floor under Flash's feet. Flash fell and looked up. "Remember me?" the mystery man asked. "You should. You and Superman busted up my last scheme." The man walked out of the shadow. It was Weather Wizard.
And Then...
Barb Gordon
04-21-2002, 08:50 PM
OOC: This thing is going great. but I think everyone might want to take things a bit slower. How,why, did Nightwing, Robin and Batgirl show up anyway? things like that need to be explained.
IC:
Flash was up on his feet again in...well...a flash. The Flash rolled his eyes.
"You've got to be kidding me...not the Freaky Forecaster again."
He teased.
"That's Weather Wizard you buffoon. I'll teach you to think twice about messing with me."
He began shooting out dozens of lazers from his rod. Flash outdodged them all, even throwing in a few dance steps while doing so. The Weather Wizard glared, frowning.
"I thought you were going to teach me something?"
Flash said mockingly as the Weather Wizard began throwing more lazers at him. Just then, a lazer got past him, hitting him hard on the shoulder. He hit the floor, clutching his shoulder.
"Don't mess with me boy."
"Hey..well, if I'm a boy, then you can you're an old man."
Flash said between clenched teeth, rolling away as the Weather Wizard closed in on him. Just then J'onn made a motion to step in.
"No!"
Flash said quickly.
"This is between him and me. Go se what you can do about the Javelin, or help the others out down on Earth."
"I'm done playing around."
"Oh are you?"
The Weather Wizard grinned, pleased to have the upper hand.
"Yeah. I am!"
And Flash threw himself at the Weather Wizard.
Barb^-^
BeastBoyWonder
04-21-2002, 08:58 PM
OT: Nice post barb! And great to see you doing these again...Unwanted Vacation was a blast, hopefully this will be too.
Condiment King
04-21-2002, 10:06 PM
I have a question before I begin.
What does all the abbrievations mean? Ex. OT, IC, OC?
Also, to the earlier question of why Batgirl, Nightwing, and Robin were involved, they were the help that Supergirl got to fend off Bane and Sinestro with Batman and Superman decapitated.
And then............
"I will never give up!" Sinestro insisted tugging away from the clutch of Superman, "It is time for me to go get the brains behind our gathering."
Sinestro barely picked up Bane and flew away before anyone could stop him.
"What a day!" Superman muttered under his breath.
"Don't worry, Superman, I put a tracking device on Sinestro when he wasn't looking a while ago while you grabbed him. Better to think before you fight."
Superman glared at Batman. "I wasn't---" Superman started. "Save it," Batman responded and walked away.
"Boy, will he ever trust me?" Superman thought as he watched Batman leave through the nightsky.
"We will try to clean up around him, Supes." Batgirl responded and Steel, Nightwing, Robin, and Supergirl agreed.
"Good. I will go back to the watchtower to help Flash and J'ohn." Superman responded.
Batman finally found the destination. "No, it couldn't be!" Batman thought, "LexCorps!"
And then.........
JLU Dude
04-21-2002, 10:22 PM
Weather Wizard zapped at Flash. But, then a green wall appaered and stopped the blast. "What the devil?" Wizard Wizard asked.
There stood Green Lantern, Hawkgirl, and Wonder Woman. "You should surrener," Green Lantern said.
"Never," Weather Wizard said. He ran towards the group.
Hawkgirl growled and charged towards Weather Wizard. She kicked him in the stomach. The others looked at her. "What?" Hawkgirl replied. "Like I said, on Thangar it's strike first or die."
Lex Luthor grimaced as he saw Sinesto and Bane. "Let me, guess," he said. "You lost."
"We weren't excepting the Justice League's allies," Sinesto said.
"I should of let the Joker back in," Luthor said. "Doesn't matter. Aresia and Kanjar Ro are enroute. They'll be here shortly. I need someone to handle Martian Manhunter, thought. Any ideas?"
And then...
peterparker05
04-21-2002, 10:52 PM
Meanwhile at Atlantis.......
"Your majesty, the mysterious troops are attacking on all fronts. Your advisors agree that the kingdom will not survive for much longer under this fortification," yelled Voru, Aquaman's chief aide, as he approached his king's throne and bowed before him.
"I will not give up Atlantis," Aquaman reminded with the authority and power of royalty. His kingdom had beared so much in the past few years that he would not let this invasion force break him.
"But Arthur," Mera gasped as her head turned towards her loving husband, "think of our son, Garth. You must think of his safety."
"I will save our son, but I will not give up Atlantis if I don't have to," Aquaman replied sternly, "signal the Justice League."
Within the barracks of the Underworld.......
"Your soul has tread a long journey of despair because of your mistake," the evil creature chided, "your quest for ultimate knowledge."
"Ultimate knowledge can be obtained," Felix Faust muttered coldly, "and when I find it, I will be more powerful than Hades ever was."
"I can offer you ultimate knowledge with no strings attached" the demon whispered.
"What's in it for you?" Faust questioned directly, looking the dark beast in the eyes.
"Death. Chaos. The complete and utter triumph of evil throughout the universe," the blasphemous creatured chatted nonchalantly.
"You're really being careless coming down here like this,"Faust said from the spirit like form he now inhabited.
"Oh please! I eat glory hounds like Hades for breakfast. I'm Neron for Qward's sake," the dark creature belly laughed as he took the form of a man.
"What's a Neron?" Faust asked with bewilderment.
AND THEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Condiment King
04-21-2002, 10:54 PM
On the Justice League Watchtower:
"Great. Now that freaky forcaster is out of the way." Flash joked.
"Was the mission done?" J'ohn asked.
"Yes." Wonder Woman responded.
"Care to go into greater detail?"
"No."
"Ok......." Flash said.
This is the time Superman flys up to the JL Watchtower but is unnoticed, watching outside.
Martian Manhunter sensed something. It seemed as though Hawkgirl, Green Lantern, and Diana weren't all themselves but he just couldn't put his finger on it. His thoughts were quickly halted by Hawkgirl's unbelievable shot to the stomach with her mace.
"What are you------" Flash started just as Wonder Woman kicked him in the face. The two heroes were quickly subdued by the false ones.
"We no longer need the energy, Sinestro," The false Diana spoke in her normal voice. Superman couldn't believe his eyes as he saw Wonder Woman, Hawkgirl, and Green Lantern transform back into Cheetah, Solomon Grundy, and the Riddler.
"Sorry, Grundy. I almost couldn't stop laughing from you impersonating Hawkgirl!" The Riddler exclaimed.
Superman came in.
"Stop!" He said.
Before he said another word, the three dominated Superman.
"Let's take him to headquarters and put him with Hawkgirl, GL, and Wonder Woman in the chamber." Cheetah said and they all flew off carrying Superman.
********************************************
In downtown Metropolis, Circle and Kanjar Ro were flying towards LexCorps and into the secret entrance when they were cut off by Joker and Harley Quinn.
"Show them what we do to our friends, Harley!" The Joker said.
"Good thing, I harnessed some of Livewire's energy for sake keeping after last time." Harley said, as she electricuted them through a wire. She held it in them for quite a while before letting go and having their lifeless bodies fall to the pavement. The Joker laughed.
"Let's find, Lexy boy." The Joker said.
***********************************************
"We must plan an attack. We cannot fall to the Justice League." Lex said.
"I will start to work on Bane a new formula," Sinestro said.
Cheetah, Solomon Grundy, and the Riddler came in.
"It is done." Cheetah said.
"Excellent." Luthor said, "Phase 1 is complete.This is better than the Injustice Gang. We can call ourselves THE LEGION OF DOOM. This spells doom for the Justice League. All we need is Kanjar Ro and Circle to give us the advantage of 8 to 7. Where are they? They should be here by now."
"I think that I know the answer to that, " The Joker said stepping in.
And then..............
peterparker05
04-21-2002, 11:00 PM
Before anyone hollers that Luthor is controlling everything that's happened and that I just threw Neron in there, I'm trying to imply that perhaps an even greater threat is at hand at that Lex and his Legion of Doom is only one small piece of the puzzle.
Condiment King
04-21-2002, 11:05 PM
Feel free to add, peterparker05. It's cool. I like where this is going. Great posting everyone! :D
Condiment King
04-22-2002, 04:02 PM
:D Hey everyone. Anyone care to add???? We were going and then evereryone kinda stopped. :confused: I am going to move this thread to a new thread because I don't think people are replying because of the story for ionglkyle name. I will change it to "What an Injustice!" The Ongoing Justice League Story String.
BeastBoyWonder
04-22-2002, 04:29 PM
Don't worry about it slowing down, its moving at a pretty fast pace...we can continue on here. Story strings getting bumped to the second page isn't bad, there are a lot of topics that are discussed. The subject heading of this thread could be modified, because the other thread as it stands is a little more confusing, plus the first portion of the story was not included.
Condiment King
04-22-2002, 04:33 PM
The First portion is now included and noone knows this is a JL Story String if it says, "story for ionglkyle"
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