Fantastic Four Sketch

[Furious Nick]

Here’s a quick sketch of Marvel’s first family. I’ve actually never drawn the Thing before. I found him to be an interesting challenge. Thanks for looking.

Cheers,
Furious

http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/9615/fantastic01.jpg

[Bic]

Pretty good, though I think the Thing seems too thin, which in turn makes him 'feel' too tall. The line work on the Thing, however, is rockin'!

Nice job!

[Furious Nick]

Thanks for the post. You know, you're right. I was wondering what seemed so akward about this. The Thing seems to be too tall and thin. I am going to revist this piece, and I will definately correct my Thing issues.

Cheers,
Furious

[n8twing]

Nice work!

I like your Mr. Fantastic. The head looks especially good!

Sue looks pretty good. Her torso looks nice, but her hair looks a little "off".

Human Torch looks pretty good, but his pose seems a little stiff. Try and get some of that Jonny Storm swagger in there. Look at some photo reference to get the right pose down.

The Thing needs a little work, as he just doesnt look like Ben. He should be bulkier and his brow should also protrude more; He's a very tricky character to draw.

I would also work on composition a bit to make it more dynamic. Reed's hand placement is a little weird, and Jonny looks like he was added in later; Work on how the body shapes work off each other within the image, rather than seeming independent. I like the interaction of Reed & Sue, but I feel Thing and Jonny could be flanked more interestingly; Or maybe Jonny could be making a fiery "4" symbol in the background.... Also, sometimes its better to put the bigger characters like Ben in the background, rather than a character like Jonny; You actually put the BIGGEST character in the foreground, which you may not want to do, unless you want to REALLY focus on him!

Keep going, man, I see some nice style choices in your work!