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darkdetective
10-13-2009, 09:37 AM
I just redesigned the website. Tell me what you think. www.sparkthecomic.com (http://www.sparkthecomic.com)
This is a sample page (it's pretty old, over a year, but its the only 1 page that tells a self contained story):
http://www.sparkthecomic.com/comics/20080302.jpg
Motionbuilder
10-13-2009, 10:57 AM
Looks pretty good. Nav buttons work as expected. Good luck!
darkdetective
10-27-2009, 06:46 PM
You could also watch tons of videos of Spark in action on it.
Startrekman700
10-27-2009, 11:31 PM
One question....

The guy in the comic from last thursday asked to come peacefully. The hero spark asks if he thought he was stupid and just punches the guy who wanted to come with him peacefully?? You know there is a difference between being a badass when it is necessary like if a criminal is trying to kill you or if you are taking revenge on the people who deliberately try to cause trouble in society and being a jerk. I know the guy sold futuristic weapons that have caused death. But he asked to come peacefully and he gets wacked. Im sorry but that is just plain unnecessary and even a little criminal.
darkdetective
10-28-2009, 12:33 AM
Well, yes, it was unnecessary. Spark was wrong. He isn't perfect. Keep in mind though, that Spark, and everyone else for that matter, believes Ralph to be armed and dangerous. And he is armed. With dangerous weapons.
darkdetective
12-10-2009, 03:03 PM
Up to issue #4! This is the cover:
http://www.sparkthecomic.com/comics/20091210.jpg
I'm thinking of making it as a t-shirt. What do you think? Also, I'd like to know what you guys think of issue #3 (http://www.sparkthecomic.com/d/20090721.html), now that it's finished (it's only like 20 pages). Thanks.
Mist
12-17-2009, 05:37 AM
Cool comic. Pretty interesting.

My only criticism is that Spark's suit looks a little too much like Terry's suit in Batman Beyond. Otherwise, I like it ;)
darkdetective
12-24-2009, 08:44 PM
Spark's suit looks a little too much like Terry's suit in Batman Beyond. Otherwise, I like it ;)
Yes, I've heard that one before. His suit was original white and had shredder-like shoulder spikes, but I thought it looked better like this. I think people say it looks like Batman Beyond because my comic is drawn in a BruceTimmesque style. If you think about it, the Batman Beyond suit is like the black spidey suit, maybe with a bit of IronMan in there.