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Itchy
05-16-2009, 06:02 AM
For all you fans of blunt force truma, I am posting this little twisted piece of cartoon mayhem. I hope it is to your liking. I am sorry if it is not violent enough to your liking, I will try to be more brutal next time.
http://fc09.deviantart.com/fs43/f/2009/129/6/a/Anvil_by_Itchyscratchy.png

Itchy
06-07-2009, 05:25 AM
Bump! I like feedback people.
If ya don't like it at least tell me what's wrong with it.

Temple Fugate
06-11-2009, 11:03 PM
It's appropriately violent. I don't have a problem with the image except for your choice of pose for Scratchy. (Scratchy is the cat, right? I could never get the names straight.) You've got good follow-through on Itchy, but the impact on Scratchy's head isn't as telegraphed as it could be. Below the neck, there is little evidence of the anvil's crushing weight. I would have drawn Scratchy's body arcing forward, following the momentum of the anvil. Just to spice the pose up a bit.

But that being said, the picture is fine as it is.