Dinosaurs: An Epic Prehistoric Tale

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Alright, settle down. I am working on a 7-part story called DINOSAURS: AN EPIC PREHISTORIC TALE, and I decided to begin with the last part, that is...The Valley of the Sun.



DINOSAURS
AN EPIC PREHISTORIC TALE


By Timothy Robert McKenzie

The Opening Sequence is like this: the sun rises on the prehistoric valleys, then, the camera began to travel through the valley, then cut to a POV from a creek where a flock of Pterosaurs zooms towards the camera! The Camera pulls back documentary-style while Pterosaurs of different kinds, except for Pteranodon, who lives only in the coastlines, flying into someplace. The camera travels documentary-style through Prehistoric Lands, past a variety of Dinosaurs, until Tearak, A Troodon, runs through Prehistoric Lands and leaps through rock and rock in a single bound, and hops into Adam the Iguanodon. Adam and Tearak travel through Prehistoric Lands, meeting their 9 other Dinosaur friends and then play in Prehistoric Lands, then, in a clearing, a foot lands in the forest floor. It Was Akiro the T-Rex and his 2 brothers, Kahn and Lucifer, who began to prowl and attacks and threatens the 11 Dinosaurs until Samson, A Stegosaurus drove the Three T-Rexes off with his Spike Tail and the Three T-Rexes run away. Then, The 11 Dinosaurs began to run towards a High cliff and then, Adam began to rear up on its hind legs and roars! Pull back from the cliff to reveal the whole valley, traveling Dinosaur herds, traveling packs of meat-eating dinosaurs and finally, a rotating CG logo for the Film, which stops at the center of the screen. But before we’ll tell you THAT story, we’ll have to tell you THIS story. P.S. No Grass in the story please, ‘cause grass ain’t evolving yet! We’ll digitally remove the grass in post production except for some.

This is a story of long ago, when the world was just beginning to end for the dinosaurs. Christ isn’t born yet. Moses did not come to the mountain to talk with God, the pyramids are still in the earth, waiting to be cut out and put up. Even the great dictators—Alexander, Caesar, Napoleon, Hitler—none of them existed yet. This is the world of 65 million years before the Al Qaeda Terrorist Attacks on the World Trade Center in New York, on a tranquil Tuesday morning, September 11, 2001.

It is a young world, a world early in the morning of time, 65 million years before the 9/11 terrorist attacks. A lush, beautiful world, rich and teeming with life. Creatures that traveled in herds and creatures that hunted in packs. And the Dinosaurs, superior to the world, even in all of their shapes and sizes. Dinosaurs do not lived in swamps for they lived in a variety of environments, venturing far through Prehistoric Lands, unaware of a legendary land that existed even. Very warm blooded, very active and very intelligent. Their life were simple, Dinosaurs are among the most successful animals in the history of earth.

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This is Adam, an Iguanodon, and these are his 10 friends, Tearak, a Troodon Shaman, David, Adam’s Iguanodon Brother, Eve, Adam’s Iguanodon girlfriend, Kirk, A Triceratops, Samson, A Stegosaurus, Maia, a Maiasaura, Courtney, A Corythosaurus, Frank, A Lambeosaurus, George, A Parasaurolophus and Anthony, A Brachiosaurus. There is friendship between them and this is where their journey begins.

Out of the clouds of Heaven, God, that God from Bruce Almighty, appears in front of the 11 dinosaurs. “Adam,” God said, “You and your 10 dinosaur friends shall make the dinosaurs an example in these times. Behold, Adam, This is the Valley of the Sun, a land as legendary as it was located east of the sun, west of the moon. Look well, Adam…for it is you and your friends’ sacred task to seek this land…that is your purpose, my fellow dinosaurs….the Quest for the Valley of the Sun.”

And so, the following day, the dinosaur herds, especially the 11 dinosaurs, began their journey to find the Valley of the Sun, a legendary land, east of the sun, west of the moon. But they are being watched by predators such as three Tyrannosaurus Rexes, Akiro, the biggest of the three T-Rex brothers, Kahn, the oldest, and Lucifer, the youngest. They are joined by Durok, a villainous Utahraptor, his mate, Kala, another Utahraptor, and his band of 300 Deinonychus, Velociraptor (depicted here in its true, correct, positive, and modern, feathered form and at 6 feet long.), Utahraptor, Dromaeosaurus, and Saurornitholestes, who decided to stop the 11 dinosaurs from reaching the Promised Land.

In a lush, tropical forest, during a rainstorm, the 11 dinosaurs were 5 days into the journey, when the three Tyrannosaurus Rexes and a small group of Raptors led by Durok came out of a clearing in the dense jungle. They confronts and chases them through the forests, until they stop running when the 11 dinosaurs runs away. Akiro the Tyrannosaurus, told Durok the Utahraptor that “As long as we killed those bastards, there will be law and order.”

While the 11 dinosaurs travel, God turn off the rain. But, just then, a Pack of 25-feet-long Carnotaurus, (not the larger, meaner and faster versions in Disney’s Dinosaur) surrounded them and told them what are they doing? Adam said, “We seek the Valley of the Sun.” The Carnotaurs agreed with that, and left them to continue their journey. 2 Days later, they are attacked and threatened by a greedy Spinosaurus named Croc-Jaw. Croc-Jaw chases Adam the Iguanodon and Tearak the Troodon into a huge waterfall flanked by two chasmed with a large tree log fallen between them. Adam and Tearak challenges the evil Spinosaurus and Adam rears on its two legs and then shatters the log bridge beneath the Spinosaurus’ feet as he charges. Tearak, Adam and Croc-Jaw fell into the streaming river, and Adam and Tearak, except for Croc-Jaw, has made it.

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They both got reunited with the 9 dinosaurs who survived the attack. The Dinosaur herds marched through the variety of environments from mountains to deserts, to open plains to forests. Meanwhile, While the 11 Dinosaurs Play in the waters of the lake, very far away, The Three Tyrannosaurus Rexes, Akiro, Kahn and Lucifer, saw A Trio of Allosaurus, Billyboy, Dragon, and Redjaw, who is preparing to eat their kill, a Camptosaurus. The Three T-Rexes observe preparation for the meal, preferring fighting the Three Allosaurs for a meal, challenges the three Allosaurus Brothers to a fight on the jagged but barren landscape with a youthful sexual insult. So the three T-Rexes and the Three Allosaurs went into battle. (Note to self: The battle might be influenced by the stylized visual effects and battles in the movie, 300 (2007). A Visual Effects-Heavy succession of violent dinosaur images performed as a battle straight out of that of the 2007 movie adaptation of Frank Miller’s 300 will be dazzling, synchronized with exotic tribal African-flavored drums, percussion, flutes, and chants, similar to that of the Lion King’s music.)

In Frank Miller’s-300-style, the Tyrannosaurs and Allosaurs clash jaws and claws, hurl each other through jagged rock formations, biting each other, leap at each other, and use heads to slam each other like battering rams. Bodies fly through the air, leap and summersault, biting each other, until Akiro defeats Billyboy by breaking his neck, ala Jurassic Park III.

Then, The Three Tyrannosaurs eats the Camptosaurus carcass and then, when they spot a herd of Iguanodon, Styracosaurus, Centrosaurus, Triceratops, Parasaurolophus, Lambeosaurus, and Corythosaurus in the distance, they call out to the 300 raptors and Durok by roaring loudly and ferociously. The Raptors came and follows the 3 Tyrannosaurs to catch the herd, causing the herd to panic and run in a stampede! Running at reckless speed in a rush towards the stampede, they play “chicken” with members of the dinosaur herds, exhilarated by the panic and excitement of forcing other plant eating dinosaurs off a cliff. Moments into the stampede, Akiro bites a Lambeosaurus in the back, and the duck billed dinosaur bellows in pain, the Lambeosaurus’ bellows causing a big dinosaur pile up that ended the stampede. The Three T-Rexes ate the Lambeosaurus carcass, while the 300 raptors ate the carcasses of the dinosaur herd.

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After the chaos caused by the Dinosaur Stampede, The 11 Dinosaurs continue on and on in their journey, until, in a forested area, They meet a Dilophosaurus, who stood at ten feet tall like his real kind and like the real them, non-poisonous, The Dilophosaurus in this story is a more correct, more positive and more scientific image of Dilophosaurus. His name is Crest-face. Adam and Tearak ask Crest-face, “Do you see the Valley of the Sun?” Crest-Face replies, “I know of a valley, a valley where no dinosaur has entered before.” “And the Valley of the Sun….The Valley of the Sun is there?” said David, Adam’s Iguanodon brother. Crest-face answers, “There is much danger…for living in the Valley of Caerbannog, is a Giganotosaurus named Crognor the Black Beast, a horrible monster which no dinosaur has ever clashed with.” Eve spoke, “But the Valley of the Sun…Where is the valley of the sun?” “Seek You the Valley of the Moon, the birthplace of the very dinosaurs to ever walked Prehistoric Lands,” answered Crest-Face. A Bewildered Kirk said, “The Valley of the Moon…Which Leads to the Valley of the Sun?” Crest-Face talk back, “We don’t know for sure.” Crest-Face walks away. The 11 dinosaurs move on.

After 5 or 6 days and 5 or 6 nights, The 11 dinosaurs arrived at the jagged and oft-kiltered, shattered-looking Valley of Caerbannog. They traveled through the valley, until they encountered some strange writing, maybe in Latin or Aramaic, on the wall. The Brachiosaurus translates the strange writing in English: “Here may be found the following words of the Guardian Angel, Gabriel: Any living creature who traveled in herds and those who hunted in packs, may find the Valley of the Sun in the Valley of Dante’s Inferno.”

Then, he notices some crude marks in the stone. Maybe from a Giganotosaurus or a Allosaurus. Suddenly, a roar is heard, and the 11 dinosaurs look up and saw a 45-50 feet long Giganotosaurus named Crognor, the Black Beast of Caerbannog. Unlike his kind, which was, well, not fast runners, Crognor was meaner and faster than his kind and could run down and kill prey as well as dead and dying ones. Crognor spots them and roars again. The 11 dinosaurs panicked and run, with Crognor running after them. Crognor chases them all through the valley.

The Giganotosaurus lunges forwards, escapes for the 11 dinosaurs, when suddenly, the 11 dinosaurs cross a huge natural bridge, overlooking a river, and all 11 dinosaurs crossed it, Crognor lagging behind. Crognor challenges the Brachiosaurus which rears up on its legs and bring them down to shattered the natural bridge beneath the Giganotosaurus’ feet. The monster fell into the river, and was swept downstream into a shore near the river. The quest for the Valley of the Sun could continue.

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After the close encounter with the Giganotosaurus Crognor, They reached, the Valley of the Moon, a Lush, and Forested Area with mountains behind them. They encountered Crest-Face again. Crest-Face asks Adam to eat from the trees, to give the 11 dinosaurs extra strength and power. So they did. Meanwhile, A Pack of Ceratosaurus met up with the three T-Rexes and the 300 raptors, and together, they have a plan: to ambush another Dinosaur Herd.

The next day, Adam the Iguanodon and Eve the Iguanodon fell in love, while the 9 other dinosaurs thinks up a plan where to find the Valley of the Sun. That night, when the 10 other dinosaurs were asleep in a jagged canyon (Which looks like the set for the Be Prepared number in Disney’s The Lion King), Adam looks at the starry night sky and remembers in a flashback sequence about the day he and David were baby Iguanodons and how Adam’s parents nurtures his crèche and rememembers the moment when Adam’s Mother sang him a lullaby when the sun sets (a song similar in style to You’ll Be in My Heart from Disney’s Tarzan which will be reprised during the end credits in an end credits pop version just like that song.) and then falls asleep. In a 2D hand drawn animated sequence drawn in the same art style as Dexter’s Laboratory: Ego Trip, Adam finds himself in a fog, until…..




Whoa! You can see those lovely girls, don’t ya?!

In the story and the movie, Dinosaurs, that half-naked Mandark might be replaced by Tearak the Troodon, though he is a very smart, near-bird dinosaur. So, anyway, Adam the Iguanodon despite being 33 feet long can see the girls giving Tearak a massage in Tearak’s bird-like feet (complete with sickle-like claw on its second toe). Tearak welcomes Adam.



Tearak told Adam the Iguanodon (who will replace the teenage Dexter in the background), “Tomorrow Night, If I want to throw a party, then, we’ll throw one.” Tearak the Troodon told the girls, “Off you go my lovelies.” He got up, clap his three-fingered hand and they run off. They then clean Tearak up.



Note to Self: when watching the Ego Trip Footage with the Weta Digital and Cartoon Network teams, beware of Mandark’s ass!

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That night, All the varieties of Feathered Dinosaurs, Tearak and the 10 other dinosaur friends threw a very wild party. They serve all kinds of food you will eat at restaurants such as Outback Steakhouse and TGI Fridays. Just like Tearak said earlier, “The party will fill with chicks and food and swimming pools and drinks and beverages and drugs and booze!” The hot chicks are actually female feathered theropod dinosaurs such as Oviraptors and Velociraptors. A Therizinosaurus pimps with Two Female Oviraptors in a glow in the dark hot tub. Tearak sexually checks in on a female Mei Long, saying to her, “Say Mr. Tearak! Say it! Say it!” The Mei Long replies, “Mr. Tearak.” Tearak answers, “and I Love you.” Meanwhile, a variety of feathered dinosaur dancers performs tribal dances, displaying their feathers to the females and the attendees at the Party. Well, no drugs and booze are included in this party, because of the changes in the movie climate. And All through the next day and night, the party rages on. Note to self: That does not denote the length of the sequence or pure awesomeness of the scene.

It was Midnight, Everybody move on, or go home, I believe. The 11 Dinosaurs were left. Food was laying everywhere. Everyone’s laughing so very hard. Tearak the Troodon said, “I used to get treated like this with my first girlfriend, Laura, A Troodon. We’d get so busted we’d forget Both Laura and I were Troodons.” Adam said, “She was a Troodon?” Tearak Replies, “Actually, yes, she’s a Troodon. At one time, we were stealing a T-Rex’s meal that he killed, and that pissed him off.” George, The Parasaurolophus said, “I dated a female Parasaurolophus once, but she got killed by a Pack of Daspletosaurus while we were swimming in a lake.” Adam said, “My kind is probably 78 million years old, well, not all of you lived in the same time and place as T-Rex.” Moments later in to the talking, they went asleep. Tearak said “Um, Tomorrow, guys, we’re going after the Valley of the Sun tomorrow at 7AM. Nighty, Night?” he starts asleep and starts snoring. Imagine hearing An American Robin singing in the morning as he exhales.

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They all go asleep, then, the earth shook, and the background is cut to outer space! Adam the Iguanodon and Tearak the Troodon were hanging in anti-gravity! Then, the anti-gravity force switches to gravity and the two Dinosaurs went falling down to space, straight into HELL!!!! Yeah, Heaven has 1,656 inhabitants, Hell has 923,565,421,2xx and rising. On the first descent to Hell, Adam and Tearak fell into a flock of Fell Beasts (perhaps these same Fell Beasts that we saw in the Lord of the Rings Movies by Peter Jackson.), which scatters! On the second descent, the two dinosaurs scare away a crowd of damned souls watching two damned souls wrestling one another like WWE wrestlers. While The Damned Souls scatters in panic, the damned souls that talked to Adam and Tearak are, Adolf Hitler, George Burns and Mahatma Gandhi, while Gracy, the Killer Clown, John Wayne and Jerry Garcia flies past them. Here might be some heavy metal music similar to the heavy metal part of the DVDA South Park Song, Hell Isn’t Good:
Little boy, you're goin' to Hell.
You said bad words, threw rocks at the birds; now this is your hotel.
You ain't goin back. This ain't Disneyland, it’s HELL
Little boy it's time for you to pay
For hurtin' that bird, and not goin to church, starin' at boobs everyday.
Thought you were in bed, instead you're in HELL!
Hell isn't good, no, hell isn't good, yeah!
Hell isn't good, no, hell isn't good, yeah!
Hell isn’t good, no, hell isn’t good, yeah!
They land from the river of fire to the Gate of Hell, guarded by the Gatekeeper, who counting every soul who is damned to hell. The Gatekeeper said, “Hi, Adam and Tearak!” Adam said, “Welcome to what?” The Gatekeeper responds, “Well, you shall see what our ruler, Mandark the Devil reign over your kind…in hell.” Just then, A Fell Beast swoops past the two dinosaurs, which panicked and flee to a mesa in Hell, which looks like Mordor from the Lord of the Rings. Suddenly, A fell beast, with Dexter’s Arch Rival (which will be realized through 2D Hand-Drawn Animation, in the same art style as Ego Trip), Mandark (complete with a villainous black and red supervillain costume with tights and a black and red cape from Ego Trip) riding it, lands on a perch in the Exterior of the Black Palace of Hell, and then, Mandark stares at him and laugh in a powerful voice louder than before…..
AH-HA-HA! AH-HA-HA-HA-HA! AH-HA-HA! AH-HA-HA-HA-HA! AH-HA-HA!
Wanna See Him in his cape?!!!! Huh?!!!! That does it!!! I’m showing you Mandark in his CAPE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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You know, that is one scary-looking dude in that cape! So, Anyway, The Fell Beast roars at the two Dinosaurs and Mandark and his Fell Beast rides down to the ground. “Speak of the Devil,” Tearak said. Mandark (in that villainous black and red costume with tights and a Black and Red Cape) is carrying a staff with a magic crystal ball at the M-Shaped tip, a staff similar to Saruman’s in Lord of the Rings. He spoke in a powerful but familiar voice (that’ll be Eddie Deezen) “Please Sir, Call Me, MANDARK!” Lightning strikes, the cauldrons spouts hot air! So the meeting began, with Mandark giving the two dinosaurs a tour of Hell, While Tearak the Troodon interrupts Mandark. Towards the end of the meeting, Mandark gave the two dinosaurs a warning, “I leave you with a warning: 3 months after you find the valley of the sun, a large asteroid will hit the earth’s face and destroy your kinds and other dinosaurs!” Mandark then speaks to the Gatekeeper, who told them that Mandark’s warning will be true. “Excellent, Ha Ha!” said Mandark, “Excellent! AH-HA-HA! AH-HA-HA-HA-HA! AH-HA-HA! AH-HA-HA-HA-HA! AH-HA-HA!!!!!!!!!!!”
Back to the girls! Tearak is still in the water with the ladies, and Adam is bewildered! Tearak then jump into one of the girls (the black-haired one) and a bewildered Adam watched they both kissed offscreen!

Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx (kisses) Oh...mmm, not bad...oh, twice...
Back to reality, with Tearak the Troodon kissing and hugging himself! The 10 dinosaurs look bewildered! Adam said, “Tearak, were you just first-basin’ with those girls?!” The next morning, the quest resumes. Herds of Dinosaurs from different species, travels far and wide, searching for that Valley of the Sun. Meanwhile, The 11 dinosaurs were on the coastline, past a flock of Pteranodons flying past Mosasaurs and Tylosaurs. Then, They saw The Three T-Rexes and the army of 300 Raptors, led by Durok and Kala, and the Ceratosaurus pack and run, the T-rexes, the Raptors and the Ceratosaurs running after them! They chase the 11 dinosaurs through the forests and the rocks and terrain of Prehistoric Lands, until a roar chase them off!!!!
It was Croc-Jaw, The Spinosaurus, and he ain’t dead yet! In fact, HE IS BACK FOR REVENGE!!!! The 11 Dinosaurs form a defensive ring, and moments later, when Croc-Jaw got too close, they panicked and run, until The Three T-rexes arrived and Fights the Spinosaurus, so that reminded us of Jurassic Park III when the T-Rex fights the Spinosaurus execpt for that the three T-rexes are winning! The Three T-Rexes and the Spinosaurus fights each other, in Frank Miller’s-300-style! At the end of the battle, the three T-Rexes chases Croc-Jaw to a chasm overlooking a river and waterfall below. Croc-Jaw the Spinosaurus manage to win but was finally killed when the Three T-rexes rams a boulder at the Spinosaurus and the boulder hits the Spinosaurus in the underbelly, sending the spinosaurus over the cliff and into the river, but the boulder did not crush his skull but his underbelly! That might remind you and me of the death of a fat kid named Piggy in a book called Lord of the Flies but less violent.

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The 11 Dinosaurs have fled from the Spinosaurus when they are surrounded by the pack of 300 Raptors, Durok, Kala and The Ceratosaurus Pack. They chased the 11 dinosaurs through the jungles and the rocks and terrain of Prehistoric Lands until they chase them to a log bridge, Adam the Iguanodon challenges the 300 Raptors and the Ceratosaurus Pack and with a powerful swipe from his tail, he knock the log over, sending those 300 Raptors, that Durok and those Ceratosaurus pack to the bottom of the gorge, where they (Durok, Kala, the raptors and ceratosaurs) are reunited with the three T-rexes, who already defeated Croc Jaw the Spinosaurus.
The 11 Dinosaurs have move on until they met a Therizinosaurus named Freddy (a reference to Nightmare on Elm Street’s Freddy Krueger), who is feeding from the trees. It was Freddy who led the 11 dinosaurs to a river where a Baryonyx named Skipper is fishing. Both Dinosaurs told them “travel east of the sun, west of the moon, and you will travel for 28 days and 28 nights until you find your holy grail of Prehistoric Lands.”
So the 11 dinosaurs travel for 28 days and 28 nights. In the frozen land of what are now the Artic regions, they met a pack of Crylophosaurus. The Crylophosaurus pack protects them from the freezing cold in what are now the Artic regions. A week later, they left the frozen land, and into the canyons, where all 11 survived an attack from an evil Carcharodontosaurus named Saber.
A week into that, They travel through some snow capped mountains called, The Pangaea Mountains, through forest, through open plains, through valley through plateau and encounter many dangers: Giant Crocodiles, the 300 raptors, the Ceratosaurs, The Three T-Rexes (who chased the 11 dinosaurs through raging rapids or a river or something, with the 11 dinosaurs in a huge fallen tree in one scene), Tarbosaurus, Suchomimus and not to mention, Acrocanthrosaurus and Mapusaurus.
They met a Gigantoraptor, A Gwanlong Wucaii, a Dilong, and, among others, a flock of Compsognathus, all of which help them find the Valley of the sun.

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Finally, they reached the Valley of Dante’s Inferno. It is a jagged barren land, similar to Mordor but no tar pits please! ‘Cause they appear ONLY in the Cenozoic Era! They crossed a medium natural bridge, surrounded by a stream, and climb up a very large hill, or mountain, or whatever. However when they reach the cave, they are unaware that it is the home of a Giant 25-feet-tall insect-like monster that resembles a cross between a giant spider, a giant scorpion and a giant deer tick, named Brontonyx. Brontonyx spots the 11 dinosaurs and chase them through the cave, but did not kill them all, for Brontonyx is no match for the spike tail of Samson the Stegosaurus, the horns of Kirk the Triceratops, and the thumb spikes of Adam, David and Eve the three Iguanodon, and finally, Samson the Stegosaurus hit Brontonyx with his spike tail, and for the final blow and when Brontonyx rears up in pain, Adam plunges his thumb spike into his chest! Brontonyx roars in pain, topples for a moment and then, with a terrifying roar, Brontonyx, the Spider/Scorpion/Tick-thingy fell through a crack and disappeared forever.
The 11 dinosaurs are victorious! That evening, with the sun began to set, the 11 dinosaurs settle down by the waterfall and when it’s nighttime, they went to sleep.

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At 4:00 in the morning, They are awoken, by a voice, “Come with me.” It was a large pterosaur, A Quetzalcoatlus/Pterosaur hybrid named Ulgor the Great, the ruler of the Valley of the Sun. He talks to the 11 dinosaurs. And then, they travel through the caverns. Wanna see a picture of what Ulgor the Great will look like in Dinosaurs? Okay, fine.

As they travel, Ulgor told the 11 dinosaurs about the Valley of the Sun. The 11 Dinosaurs and Ulgor travels through more caverns.
Until, there is a bolt of light bursting poking through in the distance. The 11 dinosaurs run while Ulgor flies to the other side of the caves.
When the 11 Dinosaurs and Ulgor stops Outside on a cliff, The Light grew bigger….and…bigger….and bigger…and bigger…

Until finally…guess what?
THE VALLEY OF THE SUN!!!!!!!!!! HOORAY!!!!!!!!
You see, below the 11 Dinosaurs and Ulgor is the Valley of the Sun. A beam of sunlight comes through the clouds and shines on them, eventually spreading out to reveal the entire Valley of the Sun. Yes, the Valley of the Sun is what all living creatures in the age of dinosaurs had hoped for. The 11 dinosaurs runs towards the valley, welcomed by the dinosaur herds and dinosaur packs who have reached there. They are reunited with their friends, families and relatives, all of which has survived the perilous journey to the Valley of the Sun. Then, Ulgor dubbed Adam and Eve, the new king and queen of the Valley of the Sun.

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3 Months has passed. They played in the Valley of the Sun. They held ceremonies about them and their land. The 11 dinosaurs witnessed the Birth of Adam and Eve’s iguanodon hatchlings. One night, A fleet of comets pass by warning that a huge meteor, like Mandark said earlier, will wipe out the dinosaurs forever.
Then, the next day, Adam was warned by Tearak that an army of carnivorous dinosaurs are coming to invade the valley. Adam call upon even the most defensive of the dinosaurs to challenge Akiro, Kahn, Lucifer, Durok, and his army of meat eating theropod dinosaurs. The predatory army came and when they show up, Adam addresses his dinosaur warriors: “Today the fate of our world will be decided. In the name of God, our fighting will stop until each one of the predators lie dead and the Valley of the Sun will be saved once and for all.”
He then, rears up on his hind legs and gave loose, a blood curdling, ear splitting battle roar or bellow that can even be heard in space! Akiro the T-Rex also gave a blood curdling, ear splitting battle roar or bellow! Both armies charges. They clash their “weapons” against each other, the battle rages all day all through the night, and by afternoon, the defensive dinosaurs began chanting, “The Whole World is watching!” Durok and his 205 remaining raptors, and the Three T-Rexes challenges Adam, Kirk, Tearak, Samson and Anthony by roaring.
This is the end of the story beginning and according to your friend and humble narrator; Tyrannosaurus Rex has terrorized the land for the last time. A giant meteor, is summoned by Mandark the Devil, rips into the earth’s atmosphere and slammed into the Yucatan peninsula in the Gulf of Mexico. The Dinosaurs stares and suddenly….after somebody yells, “Yeesha People Gonna Die!!!!!” and another yelling “Son of a *****!!!”…..Guess what?

KA-BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The meteor strikes. It hit with the force of 10,000 nukes, causing a bombardment of meteors and a traveling, spreading, fiery debris inferno. The dinosaurs panicked and run! The fiery inferno spreads killing every dinosaur in sight like the impact of a tidal wave. Adam and Tearak got chased by the three enraged T-Rexes, through the valley. Kahn and Lucifer got killed and swept through the fiery inferno, and when, Akiro the T-Rex, Adam the Iguanodon, and Tearak the Troodon reach the highest cliff, the fiery inferno crashed into a half of the chasm but not the whole one. Akiro Challenges Adam but a Meteor hit the cliff beneath Akiro’s feet, sending Akiro falling into the Fiery Lake. With a final terrifying roar, he vanishes forever!
Adam and Tearak are reunited with Eve, Kirk, Samson, Maia, Anthony, Courtney, David, and George and they run for their lives, and finally they leap into safer ground. Adam said, “It’s gone, The Valley of the Sun is gone.” David replies, “It’s over, Adam. The Age of Dinosaurs has ended.”
Within the next few hours, the 8 dinosaurs died of exhaustion. Adam and Tearak are the only one left. Adam said to Tearak for the last time, “Tearak, I am glad you’re with me. I will see everyone all in heaven.” And then, Tearak dies and fall to the ground, and Adam was the last to die, and fell with a huge thud!
But it was not over. All the dinosaurs that we saw in the movie are sent to Heaven by God, the same god that we saw in Bruce Almighty and Evan Almighty. God showed him the Valley of the Sun, within Heaven. While the inhabitants of Heaven (which includes such historic people in humanity’s history) looks on, the dinosaurs has entered their promised land.
Adam is reunited with his 10 friends. And as they started their new life in Heaven, the Three T-Rexes showed up and thank them, in addition to apologize to them for antagonizing the 11 dinosaurs. Then, what they saw from the clouds is Today’s World, possibly, the streets and skyline of New York City in Present Day Earth. Durok and A Microraptor then turn into a House Sparrow and a Pigeon and flies to Earth.
The dinosaurs stayed in Heaven while their remains were buried in the earth. Like the narrator of the Walking with Series said: “We have since built museums to celebrate the past and spend decades studying prehistoric life. If that only taught us anything, it is this: no species last forever.” Roll End Credits and throughout the end credits will be dinosaur art that has been made between 1676 or 1677 and 2012.

So, what is your review of Dinosaurs: An Epic Prehistoric Tale?

[J'onn J'onzz]

This is the best story ever written. So epic it can't fit in one post.

[veemonjosh]

Oh sweet baby jesus, Timbox is back!

Between this and having a great time today with my crush, this is the greatest day of my life. :D

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Oh.

My.

God.

Timbox, you have to show this to your schoolmates and try to get financing for this. When the end of the script came, I was crying. I think there needs to be a sequal.

Let's imagine that all of the main characteers survived in your story, and were frozen in ice. Then they unthawed like in Ice age, but 20 minutes goes on between both scenes, chronicling all of the history that goes on before then. Then they wake up in present day times, where they unthaw in your city. You all have magical adventures where you help save the world as a crimefighting team and musical sensation known as Tim and The Super Dino Gang. Then you guys make an alternate reality machine that let's you get the two girls from Ego Trip and Mandark so theyll join your gang and you rename it Tim and The Super Dino Gang and Mandark and Those 2 Girls from Ego Trip that do Mandark's and Tim's Bidding.

I think the music should include no less than all of these musicians. Britney Spears, The Beatles, Jimi Hendrix (Who, despite being dead, will write 5 new songs for the movie), Micheal Jackson, Miley Cyrus, The Naked Brothers Band, Radiohead, Bruce Springsteen, Rolling Stones, The Cast of High School Musical, The Cast of High School Musical 2, The Cast of High School Musical 3, The Cast of High School Musical 4, The Cast of High School Musical 5, The Cast of High School Musical 6, The Cast of High School Musical 7, Reba McEntire, 50 Cent, Eric Clapton, Paris Hilton, Jennifer Lopez, Christina Agularia, Justin Timberlake, and 10 Performances by Tim and The Super Dino Gang and 5 by Tim and The Super Dino Gang and Mandark and Those 2 Girls from Ego Trip that do Mandark's and Tim's Bidding.

The Movie would run 560 Minutes Long, but would be Condensed to 600Minutes Long for the theatrical release. All other movies would be rmeoved from theateres to show this one movie. It will generate 100,000,000,000,000,000,000 dollars at the box office. It will be hailed as the best movie in the world

So what are you waiting for Timbox, start getting financed!!

[timbox129]

Well, I want the story to be in the way I wrote and imagine it. But I don't want to make your story the way you imagine it. So anyway, what does the story that I wrote in the way I wrote and imagine it reminds any of you of?

[DarthGonzo]

Well, I want the story to be in the way I wrote and imagine it. But I don't want to make your story the way you imagine it. So anyway, what does the story that I wrote in the way I wrote and imagine it reminds any of you of?

What flavor is the oxygen in your world Timbox? :p

[timbox129]

Well, The same as Earth's, water.

[SilverKnight]

I'll be honest, Tim. I tried to read it. I really did. My eyes glazed over after the third line of the first paragraph, though.

What exactly is this story supposed to be? Is it a script? Is it prose (IE, novel like)? The thing doesn't really fit into either category; it comes off more as a poorly thought-out summary of all this 'epic' stuff that makes my head hurt more than anything else. Paragraphs are your friends, my man. You should try using more than three in a given post.

And incidentally, everyone in this thread is making fun of you. They're just being jerks subtle about it. That should stop, by the way.

When you've decided what kind of format this is supposed to be in, I'll try to give it a closer look. As it stands, now, however, I value my retinas too much.