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Nighthawk
07-24-2007, 09:22 AM
these are little sketches i did.



avengers (ms. marvel, cap america, black panther) :
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/1956/avengersbo9.th.jpg (http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=avengersbo9.jpg)


superman , batman
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5206/supermanbatmanyt7.th.jpg (http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=supermanbatmanyt7.jpg)

ill post more later

King_of_doom
07-25-2007, 10:56 AM
I see you started posting your stuff.

Not bad for your first start, i do like Ms. Marvel, however the rest don't look that well.

Blackpanther looks like a giant monster, Cpt. America looks too flat and his shield looks very small.

Batman looks like his lower body is missing only his legs.

It's good that you try some dinamic poses yet i suggest you try simple poses, when you get the hang of it the you try some dinamic ones.

here are some tutorials that might help you out, mostly are chicks but they can give you and idea on how you draw your characters better detailed and all.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54943831/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/55020585/

Leaping Larry Jojo
07-25-2007, 11:30 AM
I see you started posting your stuff.

Not bad for your first start, i do like Ms. Marvel, however the rest don't look that well.

Blackpanther looks like a giant monster, Cpt. America looks too flat and his shield looks very small.

Batman looks like his lower body is missing only his legs.

It's good that you try some dinamic poses yet i suggest you try simple poses, when you get the hang of it the you try some dinamic ones.

here are some tutorials that might help you out, mostly are chicks but they can give you and idea on how you draw your characters better detailed and all.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54943831/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/55020585/

Haha, damn, you're kinda rough today! When are we going to see the perspective pics you said you were experimenting with? I'll post mine if you post yours. :p

While it's always good to keep looking at guidelines for improvement, sometimes you need to try out dynamic shots to get a feel for the human body, even if it isn't yet something you've mastered. So, I encourage repetition (of course, don't draw the same way all the time, but with an eye for improvement) and experimentation.

It's really a matter of practice, especially if you're still young.

King_of_doom
07-25-2007, 12:56 PM
Actually that's how my friends critique my own work, if you think that's rough go to my friends and ask them for advice on how you can improve your skills.

You gotta admit that this is just to show him how he can improve so he can start practicing, if wasn't for critique than i just say nonsense, making him think he's doing well without guidenes.

I don't have much to show since i'm busy so here are some that i think it goes well:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/60148561/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/58043271/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/57058286/

besides if you put more atention i already put this awhile ago.

Leaping Larry Jojo
07-25-2007, 01:05 PM
Those pics aren't what I mean, though. I've seen all these pics you posted. I'm talking about PERSPECTIVE, you know, stuff like this:

http://www.fai-terminal-project.com/i/Interior_Perspective800x600.jpg

I remember you saying you had some pics pertaining to MartianInvader's perspective thread a while back. I was eager to see them.

P.S.: I didn't draw this. I'm not that good.

King_of_doom
07-25-2007, 01:21 PM
I meant on a person not an actual scene on the previous topic, i have along way to do that sort of thing.

Leaping Larry Jojo
07-25-2007, 01:31 PM
I meant on a person not an actual scene on the previous topic, i have along way to do that sort of thing.

Ah, I see. Got ya.

:)

Although, this kind of thing is in a few ways easier to learn than the human body, I'm finding. Still a biatch to learn, though. I've been playing with it myself.

Nighthawk
07-26-2007, 09:56 AM
batman and joker
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/3078/batmandm1.th.jpg (http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=batmandm1.jpg)