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Sweetdreams
02-06-2002, 03:54 PM
Ok, I am guessing everyone knows I am the writer Of "What it Could Have Been", so here goes: As everyone knows in my last chapter, the Titans have entered the scene, bringing with them Kory, Dick's ex-finacee. My problem is explaining their break-up. I need for you guys to vote on which idea you like better.

1) Kory cheated on Dick by sleeping with Roy (more than once, I'll say she was cheating on him for 3-4 months), his best friend, and the rest of the team knew about it but didn't say anything to him. By the way, she slept with Roy, because Dick wouldn't sleep with her. Dick didn't want to sleep with her, because he felt they should wait.

2) Kory is not straight (I am not sure I could use the other word here).

3) Create your own reason.

I would be extremely grateful to anyone who would help me. If you guys have any other suggestions for the story, please feel free to mention them. Thank you.

Sincerely, Cathy

P.S. Feedback on last chapter is welcomed. ;)

Coran
02-06-2002, 11:12 PM
First off Sweetdreams, I have really enjoyed what parts of the story you have posted. Next, for my vote I would say I would go with choice 1. Kory cheating on Dick would deffinately add an interesting take on the story. I hope you see your next chapter soon.

Batgirl_2005
02-06-2002, 11:42 PM
I agree with Coran on all counts. definitely choice #1 and it has been a great story for more. post again soon!

Mr. Unspeakable
02-08-2002, 12:07 AM
#1 is cool, the only addition I have is to have the team differ on reasons why they didn't tell Dick. e.g. some thought that if Roy and Kory did it, it was their business, some felt that Kory was right to find someone else if Dick wasn't satisfying her, some felt they were protecting Dick by not telling him, some just didn't want to rock the boat. By the way, what's wrong with using the explaination given in the comics?