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[aalong64]

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[James]

I would in future recommend a direct link to the flash you are showcasing as people are often too busy or easily distracted (ask Bic) to follow a set of instructions.

As for the episode one. Some nice ideas in there - the over reliant Police Chief. Some tongue in cheek jabs at the hero genre. If I was to make a criticism, I think it needs some sharper cuts. It does feel a little longer than it needs to be, and the gags and visuals would - IMO - work flow far more consistency and strengthen the narrative flow. In my opinion of course. I'm not a flash animator, so maybe someone else could speak on the front. Some fun designs in there, through sometimes they looked a little too flat when forced into perspective!

Always nice to see some original animation. Good to see more animation being showcased here! More. :)

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[James]

I've changed the link so that it goes directly to the episodes. There's two there, in case you didn't notice-- it seemed like you only saw the first one.

It does say on your page as I recall that the second was still WIP - does that need an update, because it's what stopped me clicking for episode 2!

Yes, I think the links will make a difference. Keep it easy and people will make that step!

I would certainly recommend people have a watch - there is stuff in these cartoons that I think certainly will have comedy appeal to those interested in the genre!

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