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daedalus222
01-25-2002, 12:44 PM
Jl4ever I'm pretty busy at work but I read this thread about 2 days ago and had to after figuring out how to become a member---I simply had to respond to your comments from Naraht.

1st, as a HUGE comic fan of some 20 yrs. and as a member of the entertainment community--I am pretty disappointed in Timm and this new JL. Why?? Simple, IT IS AMATUERISH. Not only is it amatuerish but it is a vanity project that is being stifled from it's full potential. I like Timm....I really do like TIMM. But....Jeesus man! He DID NOT bring in EMMY-award winning writers as producers??? Come on! Why would u not do that when u are working on the biggest project in the DC cannon? I think it comes down to vanity. Timm got a big head, some people at Cartoon Network and Warner Bros. Studios got together and decided for cost purposes be better to have 1 superstar rather than the team and possibly filled Timm's head full of nonses and there we go. Egotism run amok for a show that should have brought out the absolute best in producing and writing.

To call the show a success is both silly and simply incorrect. A success to whom? To 8 yr old kids who have never seen Superfriends....well that's great--I doubt Timm wants their respect or his and Dini's Batman and Superman cartoons would have been the ass that JL is now. No, these gentleman want respect and want to push animation and JL so clearly does not. It's got big ratings some of you will say--but big friggin deal! This ius Cartoon Network! What new show featuring iconic characters doesn't get good ratings. I mean, Planet of the Apes by Tim Burton was considered a failure cuz it was critically lampooned and turned fans off. But, boy it did make close to $200 mil--that in Hollywood is a success even though they may never make another one now because of how bad a taste it left in fans' mouths. So, this show is no success. The Batmans, Batman Beyond cartoons --now that was a success.....critical and demos wise. I mean Timm or anyone on hee like JL4ver using that as a crutch is like Rick Fox taking credit for the success of the Lakers...hey man...when u got Jackson, Kobe and Shaq--there is no way on Earth that thing is not going to be a success despite some moron's assertion that he is the brainchild of it.


The writing! Without a date--the absolutely worst part of the show. HANDS DOWN! In fact, this is some of the SLOPPIEST writing I have ever seen in a cartoon. Here are some classic moments from the season thus far:

1. Batman magically appearing after supposedly being killed without so much as an explanation from Martian Manhunter during the alien capture scene in Secret Origins. (I mean Timm went out of his way to discuss in some condescending way how Morrison's run was alil too out there for conversion into animation but I think even a ool could have adapted Morrison's superior 1st effort with the white martians and the incredible showdown between Batman and the aliens one heck of a 3 part season opener---if all of u JL supporters have never read it--then becfore defending Timm and co--go get it...u might see why those of us who are offended by this version care so much). Paraide Lost was horrid. A stone warrior or robot that protects a statue?? The property damage?? WW just leaving for Themyscria in the middle of an obvious emergency (the whole beginnig sequence we know the set-up but why wasn't this shown over the span of weeks and have WW realize it is affecting her place HELPING humans and like Supes says--go home and fix this and she do that over the span of time--this would have ben believable-would have spared us the infamous fire truck scene and would have been honest to her character---it's just sloppy)

2. Superman period! His dialogue is the worst I have ever heard.
"I don't know what that thing is but I must stop it" . I do not want to get into voices yet (that's down alil ways) but lemme say this...if Newburn could act or like one poster said if he conveyed the confidence of Tim Daly's Superman (why oh why did they not convince this guy to come back????) then some lines might not sound so flat or stupid, "No approach them like a King"; "It's what they call on my world a frame-up". Still bad dialogue aside (and I agree with same poster that some dialogue just is sloppy--Superman would have just gotten angry and flown off after being knocked by that alien in Secret Origins and not uttering that classic--don't know what that thing is but I msut stop it line) the WORST thing with Supes is his depowering. WTF????? Why is this happeneing? Does anyone think it is necessary? Morrison not only used it but expanded it --like when Supes literally groudned the Earth or fought angels. My god this is a travesty of the character and for what??? so that dorky Flash can look cooler around the kids to sell his figures?? Give me a break. I will say this many times...but the episode of the Justice League Unlimited in Batman Beyond is not only a superior portrayal of the Justice League but it is a superior portrayal of a team with an ultra-powered superman. R u honestly telling me we had to have weak supes for this???

3. Weak Batman!! What the heck??? Batman the reason Timm and co are even making money in this biz and Timm has reduced him to a joke. Deadshot and Batman's big show off in the tunnels in the Enemy Below 1 and Batman get's taken out by a gas bomb???? Nuff said on the absolutely retarded writing this show has.


4. Plots!! R just plain awful. They could have retofitted old JLA wikth Dick Dillan artwork and had better non-cheesier storylines. In the GL ep which started out okay actually (as a black man--sorry but not only do I dig GL but I really dug the voice acting and hometown stroll of that 1st ep...one of the few cool and honest moments next to Aquamans' slashing of his hand in the entire season), this death of 3 billion was already establsihed. Then we get the cop out of a friggin illusion device. Why not actually have the planet in ruins and that it was really a ray the enemny's used to destroy it. That's non-lethal death for the kiddies...the point is made that people really died (since it's implied in the 1st episode--I mean, it doesn't make it any less devastating news now that we find out it wasn't his fault) and finally we prove how bad the vilains are. I say all this for one reason...why in sam hill of all sloppy writing would a illusion device insite a galaxy and no one NO ONE knows this planet is still in orbit, no one knows that people are still flying to and from work on that planet --leaving that planet and so on? Come on!

I could go on but why? the writing is butt.


Finally, the voices are simply wretched. This is perhaps my most personal gripe with Timm because while he didnt hire his ex buds Dini and Radomski and definitely his superiors at story construction...he did seem to approve hiring of ridiculous voice actors.

let's just go down the list:

Newburn: Supes is weak. This guy cannot act. lacks confidence.

Conroy: Simply put--he is as much to the success of Timm and Co as they are to him. Glad to know Timm still has some loyalty.

Eisenberg: Timm has loyalty to this chick...why? I don;t know. Another completely non-actor. Her voice is wrong. In a time where I agree with Timm's decision --diversity..more women and more ethnic variety..why not hire a sexier etnic greek voice? WW sounds like a bubble-headed cheerleader and not a goddess. Her emtional levels in Paradise Lost was just wrong and when we have eps of BB and Batman that featured more stunning acting in frigin guest roles this is unacceptable.

Hawkgirl: Excellent!! Why is her voice and character personalty not WW's?? A fan favortie by far.

Rosenbaum: Stick to playing Lex dude! This guy's Flash has the corniest lines period. Trying too hard to make him a repressed chick magnet. It grates everytime he speaks just cu I know he's going to say something stupid. Although if this were being written by Dini...Flash might be cool wth Rosenbuam's voice...there'd be some twist or dramatic staple for us to understand why he is the way he is.

Lamarr: GL--is excellent. I don't care for his lines that suggest he tells even Supes what to do....that is not right..Supes and Batman are the kings of this troop and no matter how cocky GL is--even he should convey to viewers that he knows that. Shave a hair of that cockiness off GL's lines and acting and give to Supes and who knows??

Lumly: MM--excellent. Simply the best voice actor next to Conroy and Lamarr

So, in all....this show sucks b/c it has really missed it's potential and has sold its' sold to make some executives rich or smart (hey Isigned the JL show aren't I smart--no moron...u r just typical of anyone riding someone's else's hard work) and to have Timm come across as more of a one-man army that he's not. Incidentally--the guy is an amazing artist--I love his worka ndhis JL designs--but even he has to wince when he sees the eps--they look horrible. I was looking at BB and it just looks so vibrant and mature and JL looks like an animated Don Heck drawing (if u know what I mean then smirk b/c that was not a compliment).

Anyways, I'm done...curious to read everyone's response to this.

Naraht
01-25-2002, 12:55 PM
wow....

That was...wow

Not sure which of my comments prompted this, but it is nice to see a new face, putting alot of thought into his posts.

Not sure I agree on all of your points...

I like Flash's voice...it's the lines that need help. He's doing what he's told.

GL bugs me, cause I'm a big GL fan....but I like to see GL actually USING his ring, not just as a light saber.

I dunno, I don't think it's as bad as you're making it out to be, but I also don't think it's as great as alot of other people.

Web Head
01-25-2002, 01:07 PM
Is JL as good as BTAS? No, it's not. But Jeez, we've got a cartoon on every week of the mightiest comic heroes out there! No it my not be perfect, but would you prefer the alternative? After they cancelled BB (which is on par with, not better than JL) we had nothing. Now we've got JL, which I am really enjoying. And it's hard to compare toons to comic books because they will NEVER live up to their printed counterparts.

Some other points:

-Tim Daly couldn't do Supeman because when the series started he was woking on The Fugitive on CBS (which was canned). He wanted to come back but schedules conflicted.

-Many have argued that Batman is too strong. He is just a human surrounded by those with godlike powers. What do you want from the poor guy.

-A lot of writers de-power Superman simply to provide him with more challenges and to tell a better story. I dislike it also, but it is not a novel idea to the JL writers.

-Michael Rosenbaum is a great Flash. You don't like his dalogue obviously, but imagine the voice next time you pick up an issue of Flash.

-GL should be able to tell off Supes an Bats. Just because they're icons doesn't mean they should be revered. GL has put his time in and undoubtedly suffered some hardships along the way, he shouldn't be intimidated by his allies. Besides, even if you walk on eggshells around thm at first, I'm sure that would get old real quick, especially if you're workng with them all the time.

Wow, long post. I'm sorry you don't like JL daedalus. Personall I have enjoyed every ep, and think it is on par with STAS and TNBA. Enemy Down Below was a great ep with some great dramatic moments. I missed Paradise Lost so I can't comment on it yet. All I say is give it at least till sweeps month. Those should be the best eps.

Justice League 2000
01-25-2002, 01:35 PM
Justice league is a good show and the best. bruce did a good job casting the people to do the voices for these characters

george newbern did a good job doing the voice for superman not as good as tim daly it will get better in the future.

kevin conroy is the best voice for batman did a very good job voiceing the old bruce wayne in batman beyond and I am glad he still doing the voice for batman.

susan eisenberg good voice for wonder woman sounds like linda carter little bit but good.

michael rosenbaum good voice for the flash funny voice but good
and he also going to be in the movie coming out in 2002 or 03 call dog catcher.

phil lamarr sounds like carl weathers but better in green lantern.

carl lumbly he really did a good job voice in j'ozz j'ozz carl also
in a tv show call alias.

maria canals wow never hear that voice before in her but better
she really doing a good job voice in hawkgirl that woman from america sweethearts.

why would you say pardise lost is a horrid? :(

Batman 80
01-25-2002, 02:32 PM
Another complaining post. Just be thankful we finally have a Justice League cartoon. Timm and company are doing a fine job. Would you rather have Fox do a Justice League cartoon?

daedalus222
01-25-2002, 02:46 PM
I'm glad to see responses from people who are hardcore fans. I think the one poster is higher than a kite if he thinks BB is on par with JL--BB exceeds Justice League on so many levels its' not even funny. I ownder if u have watched all of BB (while some episodes are weak then Episodes featuring the JLU, Lila Moon (sic?) and the 1st shirek are are some extremely well-written and very dramatic episodes which is not easy considering many of the characters in those shows were brand new.

Let me state also..I certainly do not mean to suggest that no JL at all is better than this crap on tv now. It's not..hell this is basically Superfriends for the new millenium and I watched the hell out of Superfriends for years even though technically and stylistically it was one of the worst cartoons ever made. This is just a slightly better Superfriends which sucks....it should and could be so much more.The criticisms made about the writing and voices have no rebuttals from any of you and that is saddening some to me. Do not except substandard stuff just because u r starved for superhero cartoons. Demand a better show!!

The excuses that voices will get better is not a great one...jeesus they cannot get worse. They should have been better from the beginning considering this is the 4th show by this team o producers and voice directors (andrea Romano...why r u slipping???).

Likewise, the excuses that this will not compare to the comics is lame as well. hell, I think we all will agree that Batman the animated series was THE definitive Batman of comics, movies and animation of the last 50 years. That is not a mistake but the truth as deemed by many professionals in the entertainment (comincs, videogames and film industries) it was THAT good. Do not mistake the efforts for that show which is a classic in modern television programming and will exist long after all of u and I have been forgotten makes it any easier to stomach the sloppiness of JL.

JL has had its' moments. Enemy Below had some nice scenes (hell EVERY ep has had a moment like the Manhunter JL fight in the streets of Harlem or the Supes WW fight in the Paradise Lost) but c'mon a moment or two compared to vitrually 'perfect' eps like the 1st Mister Freeze episode of Batman the Animated series just don't cut it.

Again, I want responses from all of u..but hey--let's lay off the JL bandwagon (it exists and nothing else is on so yippeee!) that's there only cuz nothing else superior exists right now. These people are professionals...let's start acting like it.

Furthermore, the

Domino
01-25-2002, 03:02 PM
Originally posted by daedalus222

4. Plots!! R just plain awful. They could have retofitted old JLA wikth Dick Dillan artwork and had better non-cheesier storylines. In the GL ep which started out okay actually (as a black man--sorry but not only do I dig GL but I really dug the voice acting and hometown stroll of that 1st ep...one of the few cool and honest moments next to Aquamans' slashing of his hand in the entire season), this death of 3 billion was already establsihed. Then we get the cop out of a friggin illusion device. Why not actually have the planet in ruins and that it was really a ray the enemny's used to destroy it. That's non-lethal death for the kiddies...the point is made that people really died (since it's implied in the 1st episode--I mean, it doesn't make it any less devastating news now that we find out it wasn't his fault) and finally we prove how bad the vilains are. I say all this for one reason...why in sam hill of all sloppy writing would a illusion device insite a galaxy and no one NO ONE knows this planet is still in orbit, no one knows that people are still flying to and from work on that planet --leaving that planet and so on? Come on!


I won't argue with most of your opinions. They are, after all, your opinions. I just find this part interesting. The plot that this episode was based on came from two comic books that were drawn by Dick Dillin, so I'd say that we'd get exactly the same kind of storylines! ;)

James Harvey
01-25-2002, 03:10 PM
Hey,
First off- please no personnal jabs at people. If you dissagree with someone, you don't need to insult them or say they're high as a kite or whatever. No one is to be judge don their opinion. Their opinion is as valid as the next so please keep that in mind. You can debate the opinion, and discuss it, but please don't insult the poster. If that person likes a show that you don't, that doesn't give you reason to bash them or call them names. They have a different opinion, as does everyone else. You're gonna find that alot of people don't share the exact same opinions here, so please keep that in mind when replying. A similair thread on the AniGen Board erupted becuase of this, so please...be nice. And I suggest you read the rules. I guarentee reading those will save you from some potential problems down the road. This goes for everyone.

Anyways, I do have to agree that the animated Batman is by far the best version of the character to date. All the extra baggage has been ripped away to show him in peek form in every aspect. But we have a Batman, Superman, and Beyond Board to talk about this.

There's this one complaint I hear about the series which I just can't stand - that the animation is like the animation in the early 90's X-Men: The Animated Series show. I don't think so. This show has animation way better than that horibly animated show. That cartoon had possibly the worst animation and designs I've ever seen, outside of the recent Avengers cartoon.

Anywho...

daedalus222
01-25-2002, 03:32 PM
I hope I did not offend anyone. And again..these are just opinions..and that is what is beautiful about this board. I do hope I challenge some people from blindly following.

Liekwise, to the poster about the Dick Dillan storyline--u r right..but I'm pretty sure I outlined that the stories would need to be retrofitted..revised and retold in a more modern and mature sense.

As it stands...the Dillen issues were pretty cheesy when looked at today (although I do look at them fondly) and so was that epsode. LOL. IN my opinion that is.

Maxie Zeus
01-25-2002, 03:35 PM
Intelligent and trenchant criticisms of JL are scattered among a variety of threads and posters. I was actually going to a start a new thread where such discussions could air outside a narrow topic like "Lasso of truth: cop out?" But then I happened on this thread, which admirably serves the same purpose.

A marvelous first posting, daedelus222. I will only change the thread title so that it sounds a bit more inclusive than a simple "lets bash JL session." That way we can get the discussion you ask for and deserve.

I for one have really been impressed by the criticisms leveled by daedelus and gregstones and Heehaw and others, not because I agree with them but because they have been so reasoned and insightful and informative. Thanks to gregstones, for instance, I am actually beginning to watch the show with a better eye (or, maybe, an eye better educated to identify nuances I was only vaguely aware of before.) Good criticism is always educational, even if you ultimately dissent from that critic's final judgement.

To those who sound resentful of the criticism, I would just remind you that such good criticism actually reflects well on Timm and his collaborators. BTAS is often judged the best animated action show of all time, and STAS and BB often don't rank too far behind. If Timm is held to a very high standard, it's because his work has often passed that standard. And I doubt he would want it any other way.

That's all I will say for now. There's a lot of food for thought out there, and I for one am enjoying the feast.

Ed Liu
01-26-2002, 12:30 PM
Howdy all,

By and large, I agree with the substance of daedalus222's comments, if not in their intensity. I actually kind of like the Flash's voice acting.

I still think my biggest complaint about JL is in the details. Every episode I've seen so far has had a number of moments that are interesting, cool, hip, whatever. The stroll GL takes through his old neighborhood (why oh why wasn't there more to that), the bit where Aquaman punches out GL, the bit where Aquaman cuts off his hand, the line where Wonder Woman asks, "How can females wear such ridiculous clothing?", the Superman/WW fight sequence...I could go on.

My biggest gripe is that so many of these cool moments are paired off with either cheese, or just plain bad writing. Honestly, some of this stuff is the kind of writing that makes people denigrate animation as a "children's" medium, managing to insult both children and animation at one fell swoop.

What frustrates me the most about the show is the potential it has. Watching an average ep of BTAS, or even STAS, really showed how animation could manage to appeal to adult sensibilities, while still being presentable to children. Pixar, Samurai Jack, and the classic Looney Tunes cartoons had that same kind of magic. I know BT & co can DO that kind of stuff. The fact that they're NOT is frustrating, to say the least.

-- Ed/Ace

BeastBoyWonder
01-26-2002, 02:43 PM
wow, this thread is great :D

I basically grew up on BTAS, so I was excited when I heard about Justice League. I was just getting into Batman Beyond after I realized it was the same continuity as BTAS when I was a child, after watching the BB episode with Kairi (the daughter who was kidnapped in Day of the Samouri, i think).

Anyway, I watched the JL pilot episode, and the one thought that dominated my mind was "this is just like when I was a kid". The thrill of watching Batman, the original Batman (in my mind), my Batman, was wonderful. Soon enough, I realized that JL was no BTAS. In place of thought provoking issues underlying in episodes, cool plots, dialogue, and character interaction was action, action, and more action. If JL is compared to the standard of BTAS, it will never be enjoyable. Although the show has its weaknesses, I've accepted it for what it is, and enjoyed the great action scenes, because that's what I've been expecting.

daedalus222
01-27-2002, 01:14 AM
Like my man Neilf, I saw the maraton today and although I have not children..I can honestly say that it was both a wonderful and bittersweet moment to be in the presence of such wonderful if not the greatest action animated shows EVER in the history of TV programming. It's simply a shame the pinnacle show of the DC Universe--the Justice League cannot have a better track record of spot on voice actors and acting and incredibly deep stories and drama.

On a related note I picked up a copy of the Justice League Adventures issue 3 today (for those that don't know it's the comicbook counterpart of the TV show..offering new tales done in the animated style). While the 1st two issues were actually WORSE than the show (is that even possible u ask?? oh it is kids.), the 3rd issue was pretty damn good. Not awesome but it absolutely blew apart ANY ep to date. Why?? The plot is actually good for once not hokey (political refugees from the planet Daxam--a sister planet to Superman's Krypton come to Earth and upon discovering they have powers--go about 'fixing' Earth's problems). #2, the characterization is FANTASTIC (Supes finds love, his relationship to Daxam is hinted at, Batman doesn't trust the daxamites and WW even admits a slight bit of personal interest in Supes---their scene is more dramatic and true than anything done on the show to date).

Upon reminiscing on the shows from the Cartoon Network Bats and Supes marathon and upon looking at the comicbook--it amazes me that in an hour per 'story' (2 eps) the JL still feels flatter and more rushed than a 25 page comic book and a 22 minute ep of the classic Bats and Supes.


Please tell me that Timm reads these posts. If he is not careful, he is going to find himself at the bottom of the respect chain for animation. I'd hate to see the man get booed at a comic-con but I fear that will happen if this season doesn't pick up. And WHATEVER the real reason behind Dini and Radomskia nd Burnett's exclusion from JL (I believe it it politics and any ego that Timm has garnered in the 12 years of the show) I hope he realizes he needs these guys and lets go of his pride to bring them aboard and not ride a sinking ship down.....


for all of u action cartoon fans that are just happy JL is on the air...it won't be long fr Spiderman comes on MTV and if they do everything that Bendis is capable of---expect your vaunted JL to go the way of the dodo.

Pick it up Timm....you're killing a franchise.

Mr. Mxyzptlk
01-27-2002, 10:00 AM
I just read the first post in this thread. Sorry I'm a newbie. I have to agree with it. Timm's approach here is reminding me in abig way to "Enterprise". Let's try to do something memorable by forgetting what has gone before. Tim Daly is Superman. Newbern is weak and sounds stupid. Wonder Woman sounds wimpy until she fights Faust. I still think after a few broken bones by a woman as strong as Hercules, Faust might have come around. Batman and Superman are the kings here not followers. As much as I think a diverse JL is good Kyle Rayner has already been established as Earth's GL. John Stewart seems like a thick-headed clod with his use of the ring so far. I have already weighed in elsewhere on the depowered Superman. I hate it!!! I think a more CREATIVE look at all the JL's powers is in order. It would be nice to avoid that old comic pitfall of when heroes team up they all seem to be less than the sum of their parts.

Naraht
01-28-2002, 07:14 AM
ok, here's wher I weigh in.

JL is being hindered by it's multipart, 1/2 hour format....
They need to A) Cut the shows down to self contained 30 Minute Shows...
or B) Expand to an hour long format.

Hear me out...

It's hard enough writing for a half hour of TV...writing for an hour is also difficult...but writing two half hour shows which tell ONE story is very difficult...it's like playing a video game, and turning it off half way though, only to come back later...it takes you a while to get back into it...

I really think the format is the biggest problem JL is facing. VAs are only as good as the script...and the script is dependant on the Format of the show.

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Maxie Zeus
01-28-2002, 10:12 AM
Originally posted by naraht
ok, here's wher I weigh in.

JL is being hindered by it's multipart, 1/2 hour format....
They need to A) Cut the shows down to self contained 30 Minute Shows...
or B) Expand to an hour long format.

Hear me out...

It's hard enough writing for a half hour of TV...writing for an hour is also difficult...but writing two half hour shows which tell ONE story is very difficult...it's like playing a video game, and turning it off half way though, only to come back later...it takes you a while to get back into it...

I disagree. The break between the 2-parters has no more effect on the structure of the show and its success than does a commercial break in the middle of 1/2 hour show. All such breaks tend to occur at "teaser" moments, or at the climax of a scene. The only difference is that with a two-parter you have to wait a week to pick up the other half.

You can see what I mean simply by taping a complete JL story and watching the two parters back-to-back. There's a bit more of a "sting" given to the cliffhanger moment just before the "to be continued" pops up, but it doesn't alter the way the story plays.

You can see that with the premiere of "Secret Origins," before it was broken up into 3 parts. It feels like a single uninterrupted movie and if you're not paying attention to the clock you don't really pick up on where the 2 chapter breaks occur.

So, it's not the 2-part structure which is hurting JL. Or, if it is, why does that structure not hurt BTAS' "Two Face" or "Feat of Clay," or BB's "The Call" or "Rebirth"?

Naraht
01-28-2002, 01:39 PM
because they're forcining it. Watch a 1 hour show tonight (or this afternoon). See if the show is completely balanced, one half, to the other.

Trust me, they won't be.

Doing a two part episode occassionally is one thing....doing one every two weeks is another...


That's my thinking..I could be wrong, and the writers could be being inept just for the heck of it.

I dunno, I don't work for WBA

SimonMoon5
01-28-2002, 02:20 PM
One thing about the show being broken in two all the time:

I think that it increases interest in the show. So far, I think that each "Part One" has felt like a teaser, setting up the story just enough that the viewer wonders what will happen next. I also think that each "Part Two" has been disappointing. If it was a one-hour show all the time, all you'd remember would be the disappointing endings. However, with the half hour bite-sized pieces, there is a feeling of excitement (perhaps that's too strong a word... curiosity? expectation?) every other week, so that you only stay frustrated with the show half of the time. :)

Mr. Mxyzptlk
01-28-2002, 03:16 PM
I think the writing is just weak. The two parters work fine together as a one hour show, but the plots are weak and the writing is weaker.

Maxie Zeus
01-28-2002, 03:24 PM
Originally posted by naraht
because they're forcining it. Watch a 1 hour show tonight (or this afternoon). See if the show is completely balanced, one half, to the other.

I'm not sure what you mean by "forcing it." Are you saying that the stories are not complex enough for a 2-parter and are being stretched too thin? Or being jerry-built as part of the attempt to make them into 2 parters? Then the answer is not to get rid of 2 parters, but to write them better.

Naraht
01-28-2002, 03:29 PM
Originally posted by Maxie Zeus


I'm not sure what you mean by "forcing it." Are you saying that the stories are not complex enough for a 2-parter and are being stretched too thin? Or being jerry-built as part of the attempt to make them into 2 parters? Then the answer is not to get rid of 2 parters, but to write them better.

A little of both..and yes, they do need to write better...

I don't like the format, and I wish they would change it, because I do think it would help the stories...