Newest Poem-- The Condemned

[Beguiled]

Here's my newest poem. I know, it took me long enough. XD Well, enjoy.

~Beguiled



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The Condemned


Be it understood their wrath,
Is the fire of retaliation,
Be it understood their will,
Will bring a world of desecration,
Be it known they will not stop,
To give the slightest consideration,
For their ideals have been blackened,
By their twisted inspiration.

Once thought it was that peace,
Could unite a war-torn nation,
Alas too far have we strayed,
From the path to our salvation,
Condemned the lost have we,
Delighting in their devastation,
The war once despised,
Is now sought with desperation.

To the wise ones I now plead,
That we may heed this revelation,
To the powerful I swear,
I will not bow to accusation,
To the proud I will say,
Contemplate your destination,
To the condemned I comfort saying,
I free you from damnation.

[Otaku Bishop]

Whoa! fan the girl off, 'caue she on FIRE!!!

Man, B, I didn't know you had it in ya! That's an excellent poem, no matter what other people say. (Even though I'm not a qualified critique...)

[Squisheee]

Awesome poem! It's good to see that you are still writing! It has inspired me to post some of my newer stuff! *goes off to post some poetry*

[Beguiled]

Hey you guys! Thank you so much for the encouraging feedback! :) I just entered it in a poetry contest for teens so wish me luck!

[Otaku Bishop]

*crosses fingers, grabs a horseshoe, and prays quickly and silently*

[Squisheee]

*crosses fingers* Good luck, Angel! You totally will win! At least, I sure hope so!

[Kury Wagner]

My first thought after reading it was that of a six-year-old boy-- "Cool!!"

The rhythm is awesome, I could definitely see this in song-form. Do you drink magical authorship shakes or somethin'? I'll check eBay...