My Wolf

[Kuja's Light]

I just have to make a poem now. This is dedicated to the man, I wish to be my love. I love his soul and self so much, oh god..I wanna be in his arms. So this is for Shawn, that wonderful man..

My Wolf:

Crossing the dark lands, go the wolf tribe
Honor, sleek, strength they travel
Fierce hearts, their hunger grows
Never forgetting a life bound sonata

Growls show their voices.
Voices untainted
distant, deep unleased emotion
Love sheltered by the fur

This is for my wolf lover(fan so to speak) bestfriend/brother type, who I hope someday becomes my lover...I wanna cry now, cause he makes me so happy, yet sadness cause I miss him so much...

[Squisheee]

I love it! Very awesome!

[90'sCartoonMan]

I just have to make a poem now. This is dedicated to the man, I wish to be my love. I love his soul and self so much, oh god..I wanna be in his arms. So this is for Shawn, that wonderful man..
I really like this poem, mostly because I love wolves, but I'm a bit confused. It sounds like you wanted to make a poem about a very specific person, but you're using the idea of the wolf as a pack animal.

Anyway, great work!

[Kuja's Light]

You see..he loves wolves, they are his fave animal actually. I used the metaphors of wolves, to represent the fierce feelings I hold for him, and the honors between us both. Two wolves, always there to protect each other, and love each other, within their tribe.

Oh ,and thank you.