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Chime
09-03-2005, 09:14 PM
How do you withdraw..?


This feeling of need,


This echo of love,


Where does it originate?


What will be lost?


What will be gained?


A golden fiber


A shadowy rain


Pale sunlight


Why do we love?


What will we gain?


Why do we live


To love





Why do we love


To live





Why is there song


Because of silence





Why sorrow


Light





Whisper


Wind


Song skeleton


Silver corpse


Red sunlight


Golden sorrow


What is left


What is sane


Life


Is death


Death is white


Pain


Soul


My


Soul…


There is blood


There is water


Explain





Fire spider


Are you the butterfly of dreamy thought?


What do you think about


Why do we feel


What is emptiness


I…


Am


I


Empty?





Lost


I didn’t like


The pain


Nothing can be explained





Dance on the grave of


The wind





Sail on the wave clouds


Stupor


Breeze





I am


Windchime


I sing with death, I whisper life


Your wish is my command





Command me


Shadowlightning.





Everything’s changed


A rift


A gaping archway





These slender tears


They dry up in this love


Like a desert





Where are you going?


Where can we go


Do we flee


Pursue





If I were the rain that


Bound together the earth and sky,


Could I bind two hearts together?





Have you seen the wind?


I fell in love with the wind.


Help me find her.


Please help me find the wind





Have you kissed the rain?


I once loved the rain.


She calls to me still.


Please sing to the rain





Have you touched my song?


There is a song in my heart


Can you hear it?





Do you love me?





Such pretty tears


Such cool fire


Such warm earth


Such dry rain








Don’t kill me


Don’t kill anyone.


Love your hatred


Hate


Me…?





A bright shadow


A glad loss


A timely death


A quiet life





Why do we live?


Why do we love?





What is death?


What is silence?





Sing forever.















I understand that this makes no sense. please tell me what this means to you after you have read it. I do not understand it myself. I sat down to write, and the next thing I knew, I had three pages of nonsensical text and an hour had slipped away.

Reket
09-03-2005, 11:16 PM
Yes, you do have my opinions for your poem already if you recieved my private message. I do think that this poem has a nice ring to it.

Chime
09-04-2005, 04:40 AM
actually, it's like a long list of irrelevant thoughts, images, & dreams. I don't know what I was thinking. it was like all of the odd stuff just flowed out and...well... maybe someday it will become something worth looking at.

King_of_doom
09-04-2005, 09:33 AM
Nah don't be too hard on yourself, when you got and idea and want to express it, you don't know how the results are, if its bad or good it always happens, i know that you write some cool stuff so dont worry, probably next time when you write it will be ten times better than the last.

Beguiled
09-04-2005, 12:47 PM
Mm... odd, but very beautiful. It does has a lovely ring to it and there's something haunting about it. Very good. Keep up the good work Moogle. :)

True Noir
09-04-2005, 03:48 PM
actually, it's like a long list of irrelevant thoughts, images, & dreams. I don't know what I was thinking.
Don't worry about it. It's very nice and original. Tangled thoughts are the perfect source for great poetry.