Vengeance

[Coran]

(Readers: For past information please read the "Time Waits For No One" series. I hope you enjoy this sequal.)

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Barbara Gordan lay on her bed, staring up at the ceiling with a surreal smile plastered on
her face. Her hair lay on the bed, framing her face as she lay there thinking about the past
several weeks. “How could life be any better?” she wondered. “Ever since Derek entered
my life, things have been wonderful. After a few weeks we began dating, and he sends me
a rose every day!” Barbara smiled a little bit more at her next thought, “And on our one
month anniversary he sent a whole bouquet... and for ever anniversary after that.”

A knock suddenly sounded on the door and she called out happily, “Come on in, but only
if you bear good news!”

Commissioner Gordan walked in with an eyebrow raised slightly, “Are you OK Barbara?”
She smiled at him as she sat up on the bed. “Never better Dad. What’s up?”

“Oh, there’s a young man downstairs that wants to see you.”

Barbara lept up, “Why didn’t you just send him up! You know I always want to see
Derek!” moving swiftly she raced out the door and downstairs while her father looked
after her with a perplexed expression on his face.

“Derek! Dere.... oh. Hi Dick.” Barbara said as she raced around the stairs, his happy
expression going into a slight frown, “I thought you were someone else.”

Dick Grayson nodded, “So I noticed. I thought maybe you and I could talk Babs.”

“About what?” Barbara asked as she bit her lip with her hands crossed over her chest.

“About us.” Dick answered simply as he looked at her. A month or two before that look
would have made her heart leap and it still had the same effect now, though not as strong.

“There is no us.” Barbara said quietly. “I met someone... he’s everything I like about you,
and everything I wish you were. In other words he’s perfect.” Barbara glanced at the
clock, then turned and moved towards the stairs. “If you’ll excuse me I have to get ready
for my upcoming date. I believe you can remember the wait out.”

Dick stood, looking after her, a surprised and hurt expression on his face, “But...” then he
turned and walked out, shoving his hands deep in his pockets just to try to get rid of some
of the mounting frustration inside.

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Barbara stood watching Dick leave from her bedroom window and murmured softly, “I’m
sorry Dick...” then she turned and moved over to the mirror to begin putting on her
makeup.

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“To us...” Derek said with a smile as he lifted the glass of champagne. Barbara smiled as
she toasted also, and took a sip. Derek sipped and looked at her with those eyes that just
made her go crazy and then asked quietly, “Is something wrong Barbara? You don’t seem
to be yourself.”

Barbara smiled, though it was a little forced, “Oh... I had a surprise visitor today. A past
suitor that it didn’t work out with. Maybe you’ve heard of him. His name’s Dick
Grayson.”

A spark lept into Derek’s eyes, but died so quickly that Barbara never noticed, “No... I
don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting this Dick Grayson.” A smile played over
Derek’s lips as he reached out and gently grapsed Barbara’s hands, “But I must say... he
has excellent taste in women. Though I am surprised that he didn’t make it work. Letting
you go was probably the stupidest thing he ever did.”

Barbara smiled, and this time it wasn’t forced at all. “Keep talking like that, and you
might even get a good night kiss Derek.”

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Derek escorted Barbara to her door like a true gentleman. For his efforts he received a
peck on the cheek. Derek smiled as he returned to his convertible and got in, driving off.
Minutes later he arrived at his private appartment and went into a special closet. Moments
later Derek was no long around... in his place stood a masked figure.

Darkness was the biggest color. The bodysuit was a dark, dark red. Crimson at least, and
possibly even darker. Black marks outlines every muscle that the suit stretched tightly
over. A black “V” was over the chest, running from the left shoulder, to the belt buckle,
then back up to the right shoulder. A black utility belt ran around the waist, with various
buttons and compartments covering it. The black mask covered the man’s whole face,
with a crimson visor running over the eyes. Under the cloth at the throat, was a hidden
throat mike. A black cape fluttered from the crusader’s shoulders. Black gloves that
attached to black bracers, and also black boots helped assure that shadows would hide this
menacing figure. Hanging off the belt on his right side was some kind of gun, and on his
left side was a long dagger.

“Vengeance...” the man murmured softly as he walked to the balcony and raised his right
arm. A grappling hook fired from a launcher on the man’s forearm and he swung off with
ease... his cape billowing behind him.

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A youngster on the street looked up and saw the shadowy form flying across the sky.
Grinning foolishly the child pointed, but his beleaguered parents paid no attention. Even if
the person witnessing this action had been an adult, he would have had no way of knowing
that he had just witnessed the birth of evil... evil in it’s worst form.

[Batgirl]

Nice... Mesa think I don't like this guy Derek. I like the idea though, please keep going. :bosko:

[Batgirl_2005]

eep... poor Dick... ~sniffle~ she's so rude to him! ~glomps her homemade nightwing plushy doll...~ poor thing...

ehem.... anyhoo... methinks me no like this... Derek Hall... Making Babs be all mean to Dick... ~sniffle~ ~glomps her nightwing plushy again~ (and I will love him and squeeze him and call him George)

double ehem. ANyhoo... neat story. keep writing.

[Coran]

Dick Grayson sat at the computer in the bat cave, and slowly read over the information
that Bruce had compiled with billions of dollars, and a lifetime of experience.

“I brought you coffee, Master Dick. It appeared to me you plan to pull a late shift tonight,
and I thought you could use it.” Alfred said as he walked up behind Dick.

Dick smiled as he glanced over at Alfred, “Thanks Alfred. With Bruce and Tim in Europe
right now, I have to keep a really close eye on things.” Dick leaned back, stretching, then
sipped at his coffee, “Do you know why they decided to go to Europe now?’ he asked as
he looked at Alfred again.

Alfred thought a moment, “I believe it’s simply because Master Bruce thought it would be
an education experience for Master Tim. And also of course, the fact that Edward
Nygmah (sp?) decided to travel to Europe after getting out of Arkham. Master Bruce
thought he would need monitoring.”

Dick rolled his eyes and looked back at the computer, “I should have known it had
something to do with a super villian.” Dick sighed as he stretched one last time, “I wonder
what’s on the news...” he mused quietly as, with a few quick commands, he switched over
to the news.

“...and the Gotham Knights took the football game 21-7 over the Metropolis Scouts. In
other news Marilynn Hall died in her sleep last night. Marilynn Hall was the wife of the
late Frank D. Hall, who was this city’s mayor for several years. The coroner and police
report that Marilynn died in her sleep of a massive stroke, which was not unusual because
the Hall family had a history of blood flow problems. And now, on to the weather. What
can we be expecting Bob?”

Dick tapped a key and learned back, “Looks like there’s nothing interesting in the news.”
Dick turned and smiled at Alfred as he handed him back the coffee, “You know what
Alfred, I think I’ll turn in early tonight. It doesn’t look like anything big’s going to
happen... and the city won’t fall apart because there was no super hero on duty for one
night.”

Alfred smiled, nodding slightly, “Very good sir. Sleep well.”

Dick smiled and said, “Thanks Alfred.” as he turned and walked upstairs into the mansion.

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From the shadows on top of the Gotham Clock Tower a quiet laugh could be heard,
“Wonderful... they think she died of natural causes. Gotham still has no idea that
Vengeance has arrived.” Stepping into the dim light of the moon, the dark figure raised
and arm and fired off a grappling hook, “Time to begin setting up for the next target.”

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Barbara opened the door and smiled, “Hi Derek! I wasn’t expecting you, but... come in!”

Derek retured Barbara’s smiled as he stepped in, “Thank you Barbara. I was wondering if
you would like to have dinner with me tonight. And I was hoping that you might consider
going with me to this little resort I know. We’d only be gone for the weekend and we’d
have separate rooms, so your father would be happy.”

Barbara stood stunned for a moment, then smiled even more than she had before.
Stepping forward she threw her arms around Derek and hugged him tightly, “That sounds
wonderful! Thankyou!” Lifting her head suddenly she kissed Derek squarely on the lips,
then stepped back, suddenly shy, “Um... I don’t think we should do dinner tonight though.
Why don’t we plan on tomorrow night.”

Derek stood there quietly for a moment, then nodded, “S... Sure... That sounds good.
Pick you up at six?”

Barbara thought for a second then answered, “That should be fine.”

Derek smiled, “Good. I’ll be here at six to pick you up.” Derek turned to leave, then
turned back, “Oh... would you like me to ask your Dad whether you can come with me
this weekend? It seems like the gentlemanly thing to do.”

Barbara smiled again, “Thanks for offering Derek, but I’ll talk to him. I’ll see you
tomorrow night.”

Derek nodded and turned to walk out, “Bye Barbara.”

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Derek drove along in his convertible and smiled to himself, “Three days... just three more
days.”

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Barbara stood quietly waiting for her father’s verdict. Commissioner Gordan sat on the
couch and just looked at her for several moment, “I’m not sure about this Barbara but...
it’s your decision. You know Derek better than I do, but I have to say that his offering to
ask me impresses me. He sounds like a good guy, so it’s up to you.”

Barbara moved forward and hugged her father vigorously, “Thanks Dad!” then turned and
ran upstairs to begin figuring out what clothes she would take for her weekend.

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Several hours had passed, and a knock suddenly rang through Barbara room, startling her
out of a daydream about Derek. “Huh... oh. Come in!”

Mr. Gordan walked in and set a package on the bed, “This just arrived for you Barbara.
Oh... I have to go in to work. I’m on the late shift tonight, so I’ll see you tomorrow
morning. Ok?”

Barbara smiled and nodded, “Ok.” then watched her Dad step out and close the door.
Barbara looked curiously at the long box, then walked over and carefully opened it. She
suddenly raised her hand to her mouth as she gasped at what she saw. Inside was the
most beatiful dress she had ever seen. Carefully she lifted it out and held it up. Though it
was cut a little more revealing that she normally liked, it was stunning. Jet black with
clear sequins all over it, it seemed to shimmer as it moved. The dress had no back, and
Barbara could tell that it was made so that it would fit her perfectly... and hug every curve.
The dress was cut a little above knee length.

Barbara looked back in the box and lifted out a note.

“Please wear this tomorrow night.

Love,

Derek”

Barbara looked at the dress, shocked and then simply murmured, “Wow...”

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Nightwing stood on top of a sky scraper and looked out over Gotham. A small smile
flicker over his face.... sometimes it just felt so good to get out in costume and just soar.
A quick leap and Nightwing was off the building, his arms extended as he dropped then
began gliding along. Executing some perfect air acrobatic, he landed on another building
in just a few moments. Nightwing walked over and stood looking down at the street
below as the gentle breeze toyed with his ponytail. “This is the life.” he murmured as he
lept off the building to begin his maneuvers anew.

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High up above Nightwing, the meancing figure of Vengeance looked down on him.
“Soon your reckoning will come Mr. Grayson. Oh so soon.”

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[Batgirl]

Please keep it up! I hope Dick isn't caught too off guard! And I hope Derek isn't too nasty to Barbara. I don't trust him a bit!

[Coran]

Dick Grayson sat astride his motorcycle, as he looked across the street at Barbara’s house.
Since their last conversation had gone so badly he wasn’t quite sure he should go talk to
her, but wanted so much to go talk to her. He sighed quietly, and reached up to take off
his motorcycle helmet when a strange car suddenly pulled into Barbara’s driveway. Dick
halted his movements, and watched, a feeling of dread deep inside his stomach.

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Derek looked in his rearview and carefully straightened his bow tie. He paid no attention
to the motorcycle rider that he could see in the rearview mirror. Derek stepped out and
smiled slightly. He knew that in this perfectly tailored tuxedo he was good looking.
“Time to move on.” he murmured as he walked up to the door and knocked. When the
door opened, Derek caught his breath, as he looked at Barbara. To accesorize with her
dress, Barbara had taken a silk wrap that hung around her arms gently. Her hair fell down
on her close to bare shoulder, and framed her face. The makeup Barbara had used
accentuated her full lips. “You look gorgeous, Barbara.” Derek said honestly.

Barbara smiled and murmured softly, “Thanks. You look good too.” Barbara reached
over and grabbed her handbag, black with clear sequins so it matched her dress perfectly.
“Ready?”

Derek smiled and offered an arm to Barbara as he escorted her to the convertible, “I
thought we’d go to ‘Shae Rasto’ tonight. Barbara smiled, “Italian... expensive... sounds
wonderful.”

Derek started the car and looked at Barbara, “Only the best for one as lovely as you.”

Barbara blushed and looked out the window as they drove off, though she didn’t really see
anything.

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Dick Grayson stood there, his mouth open, and simply stared after them. He had never
seen Barbara look so happy before... well he had seen her that happy once before. Dick
sighed as he looked down. Back when they had first been dating... while he was still
Robin she had always smiled like that. After he came back from his trip though, things
were never the same. Dick looked back up, his eyes sad, “Stay happy Babs.” Dick
quickly gunned the engine and raced off.

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Derek looked at Barbara over the rim of his glass of wine, “In the candle light you look
even more beautiful Barbara.”

Barbara smiled and looked down at her plate of food, “Thank you Derek.”

“Were you able to ask your father about our little weekend get away?” Derek asked as he
carefully set his glass down, and took a small bite of food.

Barbara looked up with a lovely smile, “He said it was up to me... and I want to go. What
time do you need to pick me up?”

Derek thought a moment, “Probably about 10:00 a.m. should be right.”

Barbara nodded, “And what kind of clothes should I bring? Cold weather? Warm?”

Derek smiled with a touch of slyness, “A light jacket plus your normal clothes should be
fine. A bathing suit or two would be good also. The hot tubs are wonderful there.”

Barbara smiled and looked back down at her food again, “Ok.” Lost for words, Barbara
returned to eating while Derek simply looked at her.

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Nightwing sat in front of the bat computer, simply waiting for something to pop up. He
was ancy and needed some kind of action tonight. The motorcycle sat on the turntable,
ready for a moment notice. Leaning back he sighed softly as he thought about Barbara
and her new boyfriend. Nightwing’s eyes narrowed suddenly as he shook his head,
“That’s a good way to get yourself depressed Grayon.” he murmured softly to himself.
Hearing someone coming down the stairs, he didn’t bother to look around. Instead he
simply gazed at the screen.

“Dick? Um... could we talk for a minute?” Barbara asked as she slowly came down the
stairs.

Nightwing was surprised, but did not allow it to show as he slowly turned the chair so he
could see her, “What do you want?” he asked quietly.

“I... I wanted... I wanted to appologize for what I said last time.” she said softly.
Nightwing shook his head, “It’s my fault. My showing up so suddenly was stupid. I
should have known you would have moved on after my last message to you.”

Barbara wrapped her arms around, as though holding herself, “No, it’s my fault. No
matter how surprised I was, I shouldn’t have said those things. Derek told me it would be
a good idea to go ahead and appologize before I left town.”

Nightwing’s eyebrow’s shot up, “Derek? Leave town?”

Barbara smiled, her gaze seeminng to lose focus, as though remembering something,
“Derek is my boyfriend... we’re leaving Saturday for a weekend getaway.”

Nightwing stood, silent, unsure of what to say, when the computer suddenly beeped. He
spun quickly, a smile tugging at his lips, “Saved by the computer.” he murmured softly.
Turning back around again, he ran over to his motorcycle, “I have to go Babs... I hope
you have a fun time this weekend.” Nightwing smiled, hiding every bit of pain that was
within him, “I’m glad your happy.” A quick twist of the throttle, and Nightwing
catapulted away, towards Gotham.

Barbara stood there, looking after Nightwing... unshed tears glistening in her eyes...
blinging them away, Barbara angrily swiped at the one tear that had slipped out, “Why am
I crying?” she asked herself softly. “I love Derek, but something deep inside still wishes
for Dick.” Barbara stood for a few moments longer, then turned and sadly walked up the
stairs to the main part of the mansion.

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Nightwing roared along on his motorcycle, his teeth gritted titghtly as he silently fumed.
Gunning his engine one last time he hit a small hill in the road that worked just like a ramp.
He soared through the air and landed right in front of the jewlry store where the silent
alarm had been tripped. Nightwing smiled coldly as he charged the door, “Beat the police
here... surprise surprise!”

Nightwing turned his shoulder and slammed through the front door. The three men inside
spun towards Nightwing. One was the owner of the establishment, and quickly ducked
down behind the cases of jewels. Nightwing stared at the two crooks, his eyes shining like
fire and growled out, “Ok punks you have two choices... you can put down the jewels and
come with me nicely, or I can MAKE you put down the jewels and then MAKE you come
with me... the choice is yours!”

The two crooks looked at eacher, then looked back at Nightwing as their Uzi’s began to
fire off on full automatic. Nightwing took a step forward and dove headfirst towards
them, spinning in the air like a corkscrew. He extended his arms ever so slightly, and
spread his legs a little, causing first his fists, and then his feet to slam into his opponents
faces. Nightwing then landed with his hands outstretched in front of him and performed a
perfect shoulder roll, right back up to his feet. He spun quickly, ready for a counter
attack, only to find that both crooks were unconscious. Nightwing smiled slightly,
“Gotcha.”

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On top of a building across the street, a masked figure gazed at Nightwing through
binoculars. “Impressive Mr. Grayons... very impressive. To bad it will do you no good.”
The figure crouched and gazed through the scope on his sniper rifle as his finger began to
tense, “3... 2... 1...”


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A shot suddenly rang through the air, and a moment later, an anguished scream echoed
through the streets, mingling with the continual echoing of the gunshot.

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[Panther]

1 - you did not just kill off Dick did you? DID YOU!?!?!? >throttles Coran, then relizes the poor auther is turning blue from lack of oxergyn, lets go and settles down<

2 - nit pickey technical thing: can you do anything about the spacing? its a bit off

3 - why can't Dick ever be as sweet as Dereck is acting. (yes, i am well aware that in this case it must actualy be acting)

4 - Dick and Barbara are so perfect for each other!! Why doesn't it ever work out?!?!? >grrrr<

Well, excellent work.

Later,

[Batgirl_2005]

Dangit! Panther throttled him first... and I was about to do the exact same thing! -.-; ah well... well the story is very shway... just like the last one... write more asap! ~big puppy dog eyes~ please!

[Batgirl]

Retsofrso...Derek... Grrr... POST!!!! We're dying here!

[Coran]

(Due to the tremendous response to my last post, I decided to post a little faster than last time, and alleviate your tension. Here is part four, for your enjoyment.)

Nightwing dove behind the jewlry counter when the first shot rang out. Then the
screaming began. Two more shots rang out, and then all was silent. Nightwing stood up,
and gazed across the street with hardness in his eyes. The shooter was gone. Carefully he
slipped around the counter, past the sobbing jewlry store owner. The two crooks he had
just apprehended lay silent... the blood slowly pooling on the floor. Nightwing gritted his
teeth, and then turned and strode out. The police could finish here.

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Barbara sat on her bed the next morning, slowly flipping through her photo album. A sad
smile touched her lips as she looked at some of the pictures that contained her and Dick.
“I was so happy back then.” she murmured softly.

A knock suddenly came from the door and Barbara looked up, somewhat surprised.
“Come in!” she called out as she quickly closed the photo album and stuffed it under her
pillow.

Commissioner Gordan walked in and plopped a box on her bed, and began to complain
good naturedly, “Ever since you began seeing that Derek guy, you get packages at least
once and week, and who has to bring them upstairs? The old man, that’s who!”

Barbara smiled and leaned forward, giving her Dad a quick peck on the cheek, “Thanks
Dad. Your wonderful.”

Mr. Gordan coughed into his fist, trying to his his pleasure, “Well... I have to be off to
work. There was a double homicide last night, and since Nightwing was involved I’m
gonna be heading the case.”

Barbara’s eyes registered shock, though she controlled her reaction, and her father didn’t
notice.

“I’ll see you tonight for dinner Barbara. Bye!” Commissioner Gordan said as he walked
out.

Barbara watched as he drove off, then turned and ran downstairs, quickly jumping on the
motorcycle that they kept in the garage. A moment later, she was racing down the street,
with only one word on her lips. “Dick...”

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Dick Grayson was walking down the hallway towards his bedroom. He had just
completed a rather invigorating shower, and he really wanted to get out of that bath robe.
Swiftly he stepped into his room, then closed and locked the door. Turning, he took two
steps from the door when someone started pounding his door and yelling his name. He
turned, a surprised look on his face. It sounded like Barbara!

Quickly Dick opened the door, “Babs are you...” his voice died off as Barbara jumped
forward and hugged him, “Um... I’m glad to see you too Babs.”

“I was scared you’d been hurt.” Barbara whispered, “My Dad said Nightwing had been
involved in a double homicide, and I was afraid that...”

Dick held her carefully, “I’m fine Babs... really. Nothing happened.”

Barbara stepped away suddenly, and walked over to the window, looking out and simply
trying to compose herself. Dick slipped into the adjoining room quickly, returning
moments later in jeans and a t-shirt. He quickly walked over and stood next to Barbara,
“You OK?” he asked softly.

Barbara nodded, though she said nothing. Dick looked outside at the bright day light, and
then murmured softly, “You should head home. If Derek comes by, I wouldn’t want you
to miss him.”

Barbara stood a few moments longer, composing herself, then turned and walked off, “That’s a good idea... I... I’ll see you later Dick.”

Dick Grayson watched as the love of his life walked out again. He turned and looked
outside, sighing quietly, “Figures... I would have to act like a gentleman... stupid Grayon.
Really stupid!”

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Barbara arrived home and sat on her bed, staring out the window as though in a daze.
Finally snapping out of it, she glanced at the box that had arrived earlier in the day.
Opening it quickly she smiled as she lifted up a note from Derek.

“Dear Barbara,

Since we’re going on a trip together, I thought you might like a small gift from me. I
hope you like it. If not, I won’t be hurt if you don’t wear this.

Love,

Derek”

Barbara carefully lifted out a one piece bikini, and stared at it. The bikini was white, and
had a very daring cut. Barbara smiled, “This I’ll have to think about.”

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Nightwing stood on top of the Gotham Clock Tower as he gazed over the city. Without
really thinking about it, his gaze wandered so that he was gazing over towards the area
where Barbara lived. Shaking his head, he looked back at the main part of the city, “Don’t
keep thinking about her.”

“Oh... has something gone and begun to bother the birdy?” a low voice said.

Nightwing spun swiftly, his eyes glinting as he went into a defensive crouch, “Who are
you?”

From the shadows stepped a dark figure. The face was covered by a mask, and a cape
cloaked most of the figure, “You can call me Vengeance.” the voice said.

Nightwing rolled his eyes slightly, “Oh great... another masked avenger. This city doesn’t
need any more superheros.”

Vengeance laughed softly, “I already know that... the city has too many super heros, and
it’s time to get rid of a few.” Vegeance’s left arm lifted, palm open like a police man
trying to stop traffic. Nightwing began to relax slightly, “And you think a masked person
like you can do that?”

Vegeance simply looked at Nightwing for a moment, and then murmured, “Yes.” An
energy ball suddenly formed in the palm of Vengeance’s left hand and launched itself
towards Nightwing.

Nightwing went onto automatic pilot and executed a perfect backwards leap, taking
himself right over the railing and out over the city. As Nightwing began to plummet he
heard the sound of a ball hitting where he had just been standing, and then the sound of an
explosion. Nightwing fell about two stories, then spread his wings and shot over the city
like a bullet.

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Vengeance smiled as he stepped up to the railing. Quickly he lept over the ledge and
murmured, “Magnetic clamps on. Convert to air mode!”

As Vengeance dropped towards the ground he spread his arms, and locked his legs
together so that he formed a cross. Suddenly his cape seemed to harden, and it clicked
into place, clamped in place by power magnetics that held it in place on Vengeance’s
forwarms and calves.

Vengeance soared easily after Nightwing and made one more command, “Energize visor.”

A targeting reticle suddenly appeared in Vengeance’s site as he locked onto one of
Nightwing’s gliding wings, “Fire.” Vengeance murmured softly.

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Nightwing gasped as an energy beam shot past, sevening his left wing. Suddenly he was
in a free fall that he couldn’t control. He called upon all the calmness, quickness, and wits
that his extensive training had honed to a fine lever as he forced his arms around to grab
the grappling hook. His speed was buildling, and the ground was too close as he fired off
the grappling hook. As his fall turned into a pendulum motion, he hit the button that
would pull him up the line. When he reached the top of the building he looked around
quickly. The begin known as Vengeance was no where to be seen.

“Now what was that all about?” Nightwing murmured softly as he looked around.

“Vengeance!” a voice rang out as a gauntletted fist slammed into the back of Nightwing
head.

Nightwing dropped to the ground, but rolled swiftly back to his feet as he looked at the
masked figure, “Ok... now you’ve really pissed me off!” he yelled as he lept towards
Vengeance.

Vengeance suddenly lifted his right arm, which held a dagger that was pointed right
towards Nightwing’s airborne form!

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Nightwing twisted in the air frantically, trying to dodge the dagger. Suddenly, Vengeance
stepped away, and Nightwing landed hard on his shoulder. He winced as he felt
something give, but quickly rolled to his feet, “Do you only know one word?!” he yelled,
“Is that all you can say?! Vengeance?!”

Vegeance stood quietly, his arms hidden beneath the cape that covers his form. His right
arm suddenly rose, revealing a gun that was pointed directly at Nightwing’s chest.

Nightwing gasped as a muffled shot rang out, and then all went black.

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[Coran]

Ok people, I know, I know... rather a bad way to end this section, when ya'll thought he might have died in the last part. Sorry about this, but this is where the story has led up. Hope you liked it anyway. Make sure to comment!

[The Guitar Slayer]

Y'know, you are just asking all the NightWing fans to lynch you. Not me, of course. I'd just sell the tickets :D . Nice fake-out in the 3rd chapter cliffhanger, but I have a feeling you don't pull the same trick twice, right? ;)

Peace and Rock 'n' Roll
The Guitar Slayer

[Batgirl_2005]

~is having to grip the edge of the table to keep from killing Coran~ You hurt my poor nightwing! ~sniffle~ ~takes several deep breaths~ but that's ok.

needless to say I love your story.

ta-ta!

~batgirl~

[Batgirl]

CORAN!!!! POST!!!!!!!!

[Panther]

Coran, do you have a death wish? (Guitar Slayer - how much are those tickets? hehehe)

How long are you gonna leave us hanging?

[Coran]

Nightwing slowly regained consciousness and looked around. He was still on the rooftop,
but Vengeance was nowhere around. Nightwing grabbed the dart that was still sticking in
his chest, and pulled it out with a wince. He quickly stuck it in a belt compartment for
analysis later and stood up stiffly. “Time for a nice long bath.” he murmured softly as he
left.

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“You are every bit as good as I was told, Mr. Grayson. But I will not underestimate you.
Time is on my side.” Vengeance stepped out of the shadows on a nearby building, then
raised his arm. A grappling hook fired, and he swung off into the night.

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(The Next Morning)
Barbara yawned as she sat up in bed and glanced over at the clock. 9:00 a.m. Barbara
leaned back against the pillows and smiled as she thought about he weekend getaway with
Derek. “This should be very interesting.” she murmured.

She got up, her oversized tee-shirt hanging down over her curvaceous form as she
checked her bags to make sure that everything was packed. Turning, she looked at the
white swimsuit that was laid out on the nearby chair. Last night she had decided not to
take it, but this morning... a mischevous smile came on her face as she murmured, “It
wouldn’t hurt to have it.”

******************************

(10:15 a.m.)
Loading up Derek’s car had gone quite smoothly, and now they were ready to leave.
Barbara hurried over to her dad and gave him a big hug, “I’ll see you Monday.” she said
as she stepped away.

Derek smiled at Commissioner Gordan, “I’ll take good care of your daughter sir. I hope
to get to know you better at a later time.”

Commisioner Gordan nodded and smiled, “You kids have fun.”

A few moments later, Derek’s convertible was out on the road, and they were headed for
their short vacation.

******************************

Dick stretched stiffly as he sat in front of the bat cave computer, “Common knock-out
drug, used majorly by veterinarians. Easily purchased from even a local feed store.” He
sighed as he rubbed his tired eyes, “No help with that. I think I’ll have to face Vengeance
again before I can figure out who he is.” he murmured softly as he massaged his sore left
shoulder.

Alfred walked downstair, “Is everything all right, Master Dick?”

Dick nodded with a tired smile, “Yeah... I probably just need some sleep.”

Alfred’s nose wrinkles slightly as he stands next to Dick, “Sir, might I also suggest you
remove your soiled uniform and take a shower? Last nights... excursion make you
somewhat pugnent.”

Dick laughed as he stood up, “You’re right Alfred... I stink. I’ll go take a shower, then a
long nap.”

Alfred smiled as his “son” walked upstairs, “Very good sir.”

******************************

Barbara’s mouth opened in shock as she was shown into her suite... it was the most
beautiful room she had ever seen! Thick velvety carpet of the darkest blue covered the
floor. The bed was huge, large enough for easily four people to lay on, with rolling room.
She walked over and opened a door that led into a large walk in closet/bathroom. The
closet portion was huge, and in the center was a large make-up area. Off on the other side
was the bathroom. Barbara walked back into the main part of the room and collapsed on
the thick, comfortable matress. “I could get used to his.” she murmured softly.

A few moments later, a knock sounded at the door. Barbara got up and quickly walked
over to the door, opening it to find Derek standing there.

Derek smiled, “Hi Barbara. Settled in OK?”

Barbara smiled and nodded, “Yes... this room... it’s... it’s...” Words seemed to fail her as
she turned to look at it again.

Derek grinned, “Isn’t it though. I was wondering if you’d like an early dinner, or maybe
some time in the hot tub. Of course there’s also the steam room, masseuse, and of course,
wonderful shops right around here.”

Barbara turned back to Derek, a smile covering her face, “Tell you what... why don’t I
meet you at the hot tub. After we relax from that long drive we can have dinner, and then
stroll through the shops. Ok?”

Derek nodded, “I’ll see you in there in say, twenty minutes?”

Barbara smiled her agreement, “Perfect.”

The door closed and Barbara stood there for several moments before she slowly walked
over to her suticase and opened it. Lying on top was the white bathing suit. She though
for several moments, then a small, yet mischevous smile trailed over her lips, “Let’s be
daring.”

A few minutes later she stood in front of the mirror, admiring how well the bathing suit
hugged her body. Turning she looked out how the cut showed her bare back, and the
curve of her spine. Barbara smiled and murmured, “It looks as though it was made
exactly for my body.” Quickly she pulled on a white cloth bathrobe, and headed out to go
to the hot tubs.

******************************

Dick Grayson stretched out on his bed, stareing at the ceiling. Sleep fled from before him,
like a sheep fled from a wolf. His thoughts focused continually on Barbara, as he argued
with himself.

“She’s happy now. I should leave it all alone.” Said one voice.

“But you can make her happier.” Said the second voice.

“She hurt me so deeply... if I go after her, I open myself up for hurt again.” Said the first
voice.

“But by sitting on the sidelines and simply watching, you open yourself for a worse kind of
hurt.” Said the second voice.

“I could never compete with Derek. Like she said, he’s perfect.” Said the first voice.

“Tell her how you feel, then work from there. Just start somewhere.” Said the second
voice.

“Shutup!” said Dick suddenly. Then he chuckled softly as he realized he was yelling at
himself. “Ok... time for some sleep.” he murmured as he rolled over.

******************************

Derek smiled as he waited in the hot tub... after dating Barbara so long he would have
loved to have time to enjoy her body, but there were more important things to be done
first. And after they were done, she would be gone.

His eyes trailed over the area, focusing on several other very lovely ladies... at least there
were other women in the world.

His eyes focused quickly on Barbara as she walked in and pulled off her bathrobe... his
smiled slightly, so she had decided to wear the bathing suit. That white color would
practically transparent when she got in the water, except for several very carefully done
places where extra cloth had been sewn in.

He smiled as he nodded to Barbara... things were moving along perfectly.

******************************

[Batgirl]

Coran, you gotta stop doing this... You're gonna give your readers a heart attack! Then who's going to read the story? As always, post soon!

[The Guitar Slayer]

I know exactly what's happening, but man, if you don't clean up your act around these NightWing fans, I'll actually get a venue ready. Any suggestions? :D

Peace and Rock 'n' Roll
The Guitar Slayer :cool:

[Batgirl]

Come on, Corran! Post!!!

[Panther]

Eeep! Dereck's want's to kill Babs while Dick stands on teh sidelines! Ahhh! Oh, what could be worse (or more insulting) then to be seduced and then the seducer doesn't even want to seduce you! (did that make sense to anyone else?)

POST already!

later,

[The Guitar Slayer]

Don't worry, I won't get in your way, Batgirl, Panther. I'm just running this thing. Now, let's see...now, are you guys going to actual get in on this or just watch? Lynch-ettes get in free, audience members, small cover price :D. Anybody know a good venue, I ask again?

Coran, I think you might be running out of time. I hate to cheat myself, but I believe in a point of no return, and buddy, you're about to cross it with the ladies ;). Good luck, man.

Peace and Rock 'n' Roll
The Guitar Slayer :cool:

[witness]

Man, Coran you're really doing great with this story! the first one was good, but this is going a lot better! I'm enjoying a whole lot that you're aggravating all of the nightwing fans here. When I read the last two chapters and the reactions to them, I laughed so hard!

I really like what you're doing with Barbara and Derek. To have the superheroes personal lives under attack is surprisingly fun to see. I love this Vengance character. I almost wish that the villian was in animated form! I'm doing my best to picture it though. I'm really anxious to read your next chapter! Keep it coming!


As for you, Guitar Slayer, welcome to the fanfics board! :D

[Coran]

( :) People, please remember that if you lynch the author, you will not see the end of the story! :) )

Barbara sat in front of the mirror in the bathroom/closet and smiled to herself as she
slowly brushed her red hair.

The transparency of her swimsuit had been somewhat surprising, but acceptable. Derek’s
eyes had never left her the whole evening, even after they changed into somewhat less...
revealing clothes. Dinner had been wonderful as had been wandering the shops.

Barbara smiled and stood up in her knee length, blue silk nightgown. “He’s so
perfectly...” she murmured as she reached over and grabbed a a light weight, floor length,
blue silk robe she had brought. In just a moment, she had and knotted the robe on and
then strolled into the main bedroom. There she stretched out on the bed, picked up a
book to read for while. About half-an-hour later she put down the book, took off the
robe, turned off the light, and went to sleep. Her dreams were filled with Derek’s face.

******************************

Derek stood on the balcony of his room, quietly looking out over the frost covered land.
Glancing over, he noted that Barbara’s light had gone off. He smiled and murmured
softly, “Perhapse I’ll keep you Barbara... I mean, you weren’t directly responsible. Not
like Dick.”

Derek turned and walked inside, closing the doors firmlly behind him.

******************************

Dick Grayson sat in front of the computer, his hands forming a tent, just in front of his
contemplative face. “If he’s after me for vengeance... exactly what would he be
avenging?” he asked himself quietly. “Batman is really everyone’s enemy, at least here in
Gotham. Any of my enemies would come after me in Bludhaven. None of them want to
stray into Gotham.”

Dick’s hands went down and he quickly began to type, “Let’s try a little cross
referencing... where are some cases where I was the main person involved in Gotham
City...”

Before Dick could get started, the computer beep, signaling an incoming communication.
A quick flip of a switch, and the faces of Bruce and Tim filled the screen. Dick smiled as
he leaned back, “Hey you two... having fun in Europe?” Bruce nodded, “It’s been an
interesting experience, but something has come up. I’ll be staying in Europe for probably
another week or so. Tim’s going to wander around for a few more days, but then he’ll be
flying back. He should arrive on Wednesday.”

Dick noded, “Alright... as soon as you know the arrival time call us. Alfredwill pick Tim
up at the airport.”

“Good.” Bruce answered. “I have some things to take care of, so I’ll talk to you later
Dick.”

A moment later, Bruce’s face was gone, and only Tim’s remained.

“So what happened to cause Bruce to extend his trip?” Dick asked with a smile.

Tim grinned as he replied, “I have two words for you... Selina Kyle.”

Dick laughed softly, “Alright. Have a good time, and I’ll see you a few days.”

Tim nodded, “Bye!”, and then his image flickered out.

******************************

A few moments later, Dick was able to return to his computer work. However, first he
had informed Alfred of Bruce’s latest plans.

With the power of the bat computer at his beck and call, Dick Grayson sorted through
information quickly.

“Let’s see... I’ve had a few cases here, but in most of them Bruce was in charge... there
are exactly three cases where Bruce wasn’t involved.” he murmured. “Guess it’s time to
begin checking them.”

He went silent as his fingers flew across the keyboard. Hours passed as Dick continued
his search. Finally he stopped exasperated, “None of the cases fit...” he mumured softly.
“The only case that could fit is the one involving Jake Hall, but he has no surviving
relatives, so there’s no way that works.”

Dick sighed as he rubbed his eyes, then he turned and wearily headed upstairs, “I need a
break rom the computer...” he murmured. Then a small smile played across his face as he
continued, “And I need some food!”

******************************

Derek and Barbara arrived back at her house Monday. Being the gentlman that he was, he
helped her carry her bags inside. When Barbara entered she found a not from her dad.

“Barbara,

I’m sorry I couldn’t meet you when you got back. I had some urgent business at work.
I’ll see you tonight.

Love,

Dad”

Barbara smiled as she turned to Derek, “Would you care for a drink or something before
you go?”

Derek noded, “”Just a soda if you don’t mind.”

Barbara got the drinks, and the two of them sat down in the living room. Minutes turned
to an hour as they chatted back and forth about their wondeful weekend. Barbara’s face
practically glowed, and her merry laughter filled the room. Never had she felt such pure
happiness... not even with Dick.

Derek set down his empty glass, “I should probably go.” he said as he stood. Barbara
rose also and walked over, “Thanks for the wonderful weekend Derek.” she murmured
softly.

Derek smiled down at her, and then suddenly the were kissing. Several minutes passed
before the kiss finally ended. “Wow...” Derek murmured softly as he gazed at Barbara.

Barbara’s cheeks turned rosy as she returned his gaze, “You’re wonderful.” she murmured
softly.

******************************

Suddenly several cannisters shot through the window, landing directly at Barbara and
Derek’s feet. Before either of them could react, gas began to pour forth. Barbara turned
and pulled Derek behind her as they tried to escape, but the gas was too strong. Moments
later, they were both stretched out on the floor, unconscious.

******************************

The door to the Gordan’s house flew inside, as though propelled by an explosion. The
sinister form of Vengeance strode in quickly, and gazed at the two unconscious forms.
“You’re reckoning has come Mr. Grayson!” Vegeance murmured heatedly as he reached
down and lifted the two forms on his shoulders. A note fluttered to the floor where the
two had lain, and then Vengeance walked out of the house. The note, cannisters, and
broken widnow were the only evidence left that anything had happened.

******************************

[witness]

I thought Vengeance WAS Derek!!!!!!! No fair! no fair! Man, now you've really got me wondering where this will go next! Keep it up, man!


By the way, I finally got around to posting my latest chapter! woohoo! :D I'm sure you're already reading it as we speak. ;)

[Coran]

I thought you would enjoy that twist Witness... I'm glad everyone is enjoying my story so much. For only my second time writing a fanfic, I am quite pleased with the response. I promise to post more within the next few days. Adios!

[Batgirl]

That is completely unfair! You have to post soon! I can't believe you did that!!!!!!!! CORAN!!!!!

[Batgirl_2005]

~blink blink~ but... I thought... umm... but wasn't derek.... ummm... but... wait a sec! That's not fair! Why else would anyone be after them? hmmmm? oh phooie...

great twist!

ta-ta

~Batgirl~

[Panther]

Well, I guess it is a good point that if we lynch ya we won't find out what the heck is going on in this ever twisting story of yours,

BUT...

two things the Disney villian Jafar said:

"There are so many things worse than death"

AND

"You'd be surprized what you can live through."

hehehe



(mini tantrum) POST MORE NOW!


later,

[Coran]

(I hope everyone enjoys this chapter!)

Nightwing perched atop the Gotham Clock Tower with his senses on full alert. This was exactly where he had been attacked before, but nothing seemed to be happening tonight. He had checked the rooftop thoroughly, and now was simply waiting as he gazed over the city. Nightwing just couldn’t understand how one night could be different from the other for an attack when the conditions and location were exactly the same. Suddenly something interupted his thoughts... flashing across the sky was the Batsignal. Nightwing smiled slightly as he lept off the building... time to get to work.

******************************

Police Inspectors Harvey Bullock and Rene Montoya stood beside the bat signal, waiting. A moment later, Nightwing landed nearby and strode forward... he glanced around for a moment before speaking, then asked the obvious question, “Where’s Commisioner Gordan?”

Harvey chewed on a toothpick as he glanced over at Rene, then back at Nightwing, “He’s not allowed to touch this case because of the he’s too close to the victim.”

Nightwing raised an eyebrow, “Care to spell that one out Inspector?”

Rene stood with her arms across her chest and spoke up quickly, “Barbara Gordan was abducted from her home this afternoon. As was her boyfriend, Derek... his last name is currently unknown.”

Nightwing stared at Rene for a moment as he said incredulously, “Last name unknown? The commisioner never even found out his last name!”

Harvey shook his head, “Barbara never mentioned it. Anyway, at the scene of the crime we found three important pieces of evidence. Two gas canisters. The lab has already analyzed them and they were used to contain a very powreful knock-out gas. The other piece of evidence is this note...” he said as he pulled it out from his coat and held it out towards Nightwing, “even though it’s address to the Commisioner, it says a lot about you too.”

Nightwing reached out and grabbed the note, reading it over quickly.

“Commissioner Gordan,
Your daughter is safe... for now. If you want to see her safe again then you will contact Nightwing, not matter what it takes. Even though I know the police will be searching, I can garuntee that Nightwing is your only hope. Nightwing is to wait at the police station for further instructions that will be delivered sometime tomorrow afternoon. The rules are simple... you want your daughter and I want Nightwing. If I get what I want, your daughter will be released.

Vengeance”

Nightwing looked up as he handed back the note, his face and eyes broadcasting his anger, “Are you two running the case?”

Harvey nodded quickly, “Yep... since the Comish is so close to this, regulations don’t allow him to be directly involved. But he did order us to let you do whatever you can.”

Nightwing nodded slowly, “Alright... I’ll back here at 12:00 tomorrow and I’ll stick around until the next set of instructions are delivered.”

The two nodded, but didn’t bother to say anything as Nightwing spun around and stalked away.

“I sure wouldn’t want to be the crooks when that guys catches up with them,” Rene
murmured to her partner, “he looks like he’s about ready to kill someone.”

Harvey nodded in silent agreement.

******************************

Dick Grayson sat in front of the bat computer, running over information quickly. He
knew the type of car Derek was driving so first he ran a search that cross referenced the
DMV’s database and the firt name “Derek”. Dick’s eyes narrowed as he continued
working swiftly... that search had narrowed the list, but not nearly enough.

Alfred walked up behind Dick and stared at the computer, “Any luck Master Dick?”

“I’m working on it Alfred.” Dick murmured quietly, “I’ve got the list narrowed, but I
need to cross reference some more information so we can get Derek’s last name... I feel it
in my gut! There’s some kind of connection!”

Alfred nodded and stood silently for a few moments, then said quietly, “You’ll find her,
sir.”

A flash of pain shot across Dick’s face before quickly being hidden by the anger that was
welling up deep within him, “D*** right I’ll find her!” he said forcefully, though deep within himself he had some doubts that he had to simply ignore for the moment.

******************************

Time passed, and Dick glanced at the clock to see it was only 30 minutes until 12:00. He
gritted his teeth and typed in a few commands that would keep the computer working
while he was gone... it was time for him to go catch a badguy. With a swift movement he
placed on his mask, transforming himself from the young adult, Dick Grayson, to the
meancing angel of justice, “Nightwing”.

******************************
(3:00 p.m.)
Nightwing stood in Commissioner Gordan’s office, staring out the window. Inspector’s
Bullock and Montoya were using this as their base of operations so that way
Commissioner Gordan would feel somewhat included in this case. Time continued to
tick away.

******************************

Barbara slowly regained consciousness, and winced at the pain that suddenly flooded
through her system... she had felt the after-effects of knock-out gas before, but never this
strongly.

A few minutes passed before the pain in her head finally stopped. Slowly Barbara opened
her eyes to look around. She was in what appeared to be some kind of old warehouse and
was tied up to somethign that resembled a cross. With her arms stretched out as they
were, she knew that escape would be difficult, if not impossible. Suddenly she felt
panic... where was Derek?! Here gaze raced around the room before locking on Derek’s
still form. He was shackled down on a platform of some kind. From where Barbara
hung, it appeared that he was still unconscious. Suddenly from the right, a figure strode
in. She lookd over to see the menacing figure of Vengeance coming towards her.

“Who’re you? What do you want?!” Barbara asked with all the anger she could possibly
put into the question.

Vengeance stood in front of Barbara for a moment, then a hand came up, slapping across
Barbara’s face so hard that it knocked her head back against the wooden cross she was
tied too. “That’s for insolence!” Vengeance growled. “Who I am and what I want are
none of your concern Miss Gordan. You will be returned to your happy home after my
vegeance is complete!”

Barbara glared at Vengeance as on her cheek, a bruise rapidly blossomed, “You’ll pay for
that one!” she said in a low voice, “You’ll pay dearly!”

Vengeance laughed coldly, “Dick Grayson will be the one paying for past sins... not I.” he
then turned and strode over to where Derek lay. After checking to make sure his victims
were both still alive, Vengeance strode away, leaving them alone in the silence again.

Barbara hung there... shocked by the last thing Vengeance had said. Without meaning
too, a small whimper escaped from her lips, followed by the name she had sworn would
never mean so much too her again. “Dick...”

******************************
(4:00 p.m.)
Nightwing stood, still staring out the window. Time was running out for the package to
be delivered in the afternoon. With his teeth gritted as he stared out the window he
remembered the promise he had made himself about Barbara. A brief smile flashed
across his grim visage as he murmured, “No matter what happens, I will always be there
for you Barbara! You will be see your father again, even if it means my life!”

Rene Montoya walked up to stand by Nightwing, and heard the last part. She looked at
him questioningly, thinking he was speaking to her, “What was that?”

Nightwing glanced over quickly, then returned his cold gaze to the window as he spoke in
a quiet voice that literally chilled Rene when she heard it. “Nothing... just remembering a
promise I made a long time ago.”

******************************

[The Game]

Nice Coran. Very suspenceful.

[Coran]

Nightwing, Harvey Bullock, and Rene Montoya all looked over at the door to the office
as a knock rang out. Harvey opened to door to reveal a delivery man from a messenger
service standing there.

“I’ve got a delivery for a guy named ‘Nightwing’. He here?” the guy asked as he looked
up.

Nightwing walked over, and quickly signed, then shoved the awe struck guy out the door
before he could say anything. He ripped open the package to find a video casette.
Swiftly he walked over to the TV and VCR that sat in the room, and he started the video.

The three detectives stood watching as the horrible mask of Vengeance appeared on the
screen.

“Hello detectives... I’m glad to see that my instructions have been carried out thus far.
Now, the next step is for only Nightwing to accomplish. Nightwing, you are to return to
the place where you and I had our first encounter. There you will find an envelope
containing your next instructions. Just to make sure you know I’m serious, I would like
to show you something...”

The pictures went black for a moment, and when the pictures came back up, Barbara
Gordan was shown tied up to a cross like structure.

Nightwing made a small sound of disbelief and anger as he looked at Barbara... all of her
clothes were torn and ripped, making it appear she had gone through a hard fight. On her
cheek was a large bruise. Her head hung down, showing she was unconscious.

“If you follow my instructions, Miss Gordan will not have to be hurt any more. But if
you ignore any of my instructions, I will make it much worse. For a young woman like
Miss Gordan, there are possibilities that are worse than death.”

The video went black for the final time.

*********************************

Barbara awoke from her unconscious state, and flashes of memory came back...
Vengeance had come up and stabbed her with a needle loaded with some kind of knock
out drug, and she couldn’t remember anything else.

Barbara looked down at her clothes and gasped... her blouse was torn and shredded... one
sleeve was actually gone! The blouse was cut up so much that it provided almost no
covering anymore... allowing anyone around to see her bare stomach and bra. Her skirt
had been treated much the same way... what had once been floor length had been torn up
rather high on her thighs, and the ends were shredded... if it had done more tastefully it
would have been a fringe, but the way it was, it was just shreds.

Barbara looked up around the room, and looked over at Derek. He was still lying totally
still on the table, but his clothes were untouched.

Barbara sighed softly as she allowed her head to drop again... with all the drugs still in her
system, she was unable to think clearly.

A soft whimper escaped her lips as she whispered, “Dick... please find us...”

*********************************

Nightwing sat astride his motorcycle as he raced towards the Gotham Clock Tower... he
was seriously ticked off right now. A quick call back to the Batcave gave him the
information that the computer was still working on the search for Derek’s last name.

Nightwing growled as he quickly shut off the communication... he didn’t have time to
wait.

*********************************

Just a few minutes later Nightwing landed atop the Gotham Clock Tower. His
motorcycle was parked in the alley below. Nightwing quickly went over the whole roof
and found an envelope. He opened it to find a note.

“Well done Dick Grayson. You are almost there. Go to the abandoned factory building,
next to the one that burned down several years ago. There you will find what you are
looking for.”

Nightwing crumpled the note up in his fist and growled, “You’re mine Vegeance!”

*********************************

Time passed slowly for one who hung on a cross... Barbara was waiting, while at the
same time she worked on getting out of her own predicament. A few moments earlier she
had seen Derek stirring, so she knew he would soon be waking up. The problem was that
if he did wake up, and she escaped after he awoke, he would probably be able to guess
she was Batgirl. Barbara sighed as she looked down... she liked Derek, but not enough to
entrust him with her secret identity.

Suddenly Vengeance walked up and stood in front of Barbara. Cruely he grabbed her
face and lifted it so she was looking right into his mask, “You’re a pretty thing...” he
growled out, “I can see why Dick is so enfatuated with you.”

Barbara glared back, though tears stung her eyes, “He’ll stop you! You don’t have a
chance against Nightwing!”

Vengeance laughed cruelly, “Ah... but I do. And perhapse we shall keep you around as a
trophy of this successful mission.”

Barbara’s mind was beginning to clear and her mind latched on one word... “We?!” she
asked in shock.

Vengeance laughed cruelly, “I’ll leave you to think about that one.” then he stepped away,
looking Barbara over in such away that for a moment, she felt like a pool hall girl.
Another cruel laugh came from Vengeance, “Perhapse I should send your father another
video just to let him know how degrading this experience has been for you. I would hate
to think that you could leave this experience, unchanged.”

Barbara lookd down, pain written across her features as her thoughts settled on her one
shining hope... Dick Grayon.

*********************************

Nightwing stopped his motorcycle as he looked at the factory from the alley across the
street. Quickly he propped up his bike and fired off a grappling hook, climbing to the
roof of the building he had been standing next to. With a pair of binoculars he carefully
scanned the area... it looked empty.

Moments later, Nightwing was on top of the factoring, pearing down. There in the center
of the room were Barbara and Derek. He looked around carefully, but saw no sign of
Vengeance... a little voice nagged at the back of his mind telling him this was just too
easy, but he ignored it. All his thoughts were focused on Barbara, and getting her out!

Silently Nightwing dropped to the floor and moved up behind the cross Barbara was tied
too. A few quick slashes with his knife, and she dropped to the ground, with a quiet, but
surprised sound. He rushed around to help her stand up and make sure she was allright.

Barbara opened her mouth to say something, but Nightwing quickly placed a gloved
finger on her lips and shook his head... talking would have to wait.

In the space of a minute, Derek was also set free, and the three young people set off for
the exit. Nightwing growled in frustration when he discovered it was locked, but quickly
set to work picking the lock.

*********************************

Barbara looked around behind them, praying that Vengeance would not arrive. Suddenly
a thud sounded from behind her and she spun to see Derek holding a lead pipe...
Nightwing was on the ground, unconscious, with bloody gash on the back of his head.
Before she could say or do anything, Derek turned and struck out with the pipe, sending
her straight to the floor. Before all went dark, she heard Derek murmuring, “I hated to do
that to one so beautiful, but it was necessary.” Then blackness claimed her.

*********************************

Nightwing gritted his teeth against the pain in his head as he slowly opened his eyes... he
was now tied to a cross like structure, much like the one he had rescued Barbara from.
The only difference was his was situated in some kind of huge vat. Nightwing winced
slightly against the pain in his head as he felt the blood dripping down the side of his face.
He slowly looked up, to see two figures both dressed like Vengeance... one figure had not
worn the mask, revealing the face of Derek. Nightwing looked at him wordlessly for a
moment, then murmured, “You’re Jake’s son... your last name is Hall!”

Derek laughed ruthlessly, “So the great detective has finally made all the connections.” he
then began clapping sarcastically as he said icily, “Bravo... bravo!”

Nightwing glared at Derek, then turned his gaze to the other Vengeance, “So who’s your
friend? Some thug you got to dress up as Vengeance and kidnap you and Barbara?”

Derek smiled, “No... of course not. This person has much closer connections than that.”

Vengeance reached up, and slowly pulled off the mask... when the mask lifted, long
golden locks of hair cascaded down her back, going down to her waist. Deep blue eyes
gazed at Nightwing. Full red lips were curved upwards in a smirk.

Nightwing looked at her quietly as he quickly noticed one thing... though the women
herself was gorgeous, the expression on her face was anything but beautiful.

Derek smiled as he stood beside the wondrous beauty, “Dick... I’d like you to meet my
sister, Vanessa.”

[Panther]

My first response:

AHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiieeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! :eek: :eek: :p :p :D


As you might be able to tell from the above reaction - I definitly did not see that one coming!

One word for you, oh-champion-of-the-twists-and-turns:

Bravo!

[witness]

Alright! One more piece of the puzzle! Now that we know WHO Vengance is, you still need to fill us in on the how! I really want to know how these people know that dick is Nightwing. Do they also know that Barbara is Batgirl?


I too did not see that one coming. The having a sister thing was true genious. Is she a twin sister, or just a regular sister? Why do they have such contempt for Barbara? What will happen next?????


Post more soon!

[Coran]

(Well people, it’s time for me to post the next chapter too this story. I knew I wouldn’t have time to post this over the weekend, so I decided to post a little earlier than usual. Once again, make sure to post your comments!)
(PG-13 Rating Due To Graphic Detail & Language)

Nightwing stared coldly as Vanessa... his eyes hard. “So yet another of the Hall brood
decide to take to a life of crime.” he growled softly.

Derek shook his head, “Ah... no. We’re only here to avenge our father’s death. After that it’s off to the Bahamas, or some equally beautiful place.”

Nightwing stared at the brother and sister duo... one question nagging at the back of his
mind. “How did you find out that I’m Dick Grayson?”

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Barbara awoke to find herself once again tied up to the cross. At first, her mind didn’t register anything... then she remembered Derek’s betrayal. A scream released itself from her lips as she struggled against the restrains, then suddenly went limp again as she sobbed. She sobbed for her own broken heart. She sobbed because of Derek’s betrayal. She sobbed because of Dick’s capture. But most of all, she sobbed because it seemed her last shred of hope was now gone.

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Derek smiled coldly, “Oh that’s an easy one. Our father told us before he had his final encounter with you.” Derek’s eyes took on a somewhat glazed look as he remembered the past, “You see, my father was a brilliant man, but my uncle’s betrayal destroyed any hopes of his becoming some kind of genius inventor. Instead, he devoted his massive intelect to devising a plan to destroy dear Uncle Frank. As part of that plan, he studied the bahavior of the local super heros. By figuring out where the super heros usually arrived from, he was able to narrow the location. You’re moving to Bludhaven made it even easier, because he was actually able to narrow it right down to Bruce Wayne’s manor then. None of the other residents in that area had had any relatives or friends move to Bludhaven. Of course, once he knew you and Bruce, the rest all fell into place. Barbara as Batgirl, and Tim as Robin.”

Derek’s eyes cleared as he brought himself back to the present, “So, it was really quite simple you see. But only for one who was as clever as he.”

Vanessa then spoke up, with a somewhat throaty voice that sounded like it belonged to a runway model, “When our father died in his encounter with you, we were both 19. We knew that we had to avenge our father’s death. Our mother was already dead so there was nothing to hold us to our home town. Luckily, the money Dad had made in his robberies had already been sent to us. We used it, along with some plans he had made for this... glorious battle suit, to begin a plan that would bring us closer to avenging our father’s death. This suit had been our father’s dream invention. It was the one thing he had completed, but due to Uncle Frank stealing his wife, he never tried to patent it.”

Nightwing stared at them for a moment... curious about something. “But, with Marilynn leaving Jake, who was your mother?”

Vanessa smile, “A hooker... plain and simple. Our dad became attached, and they became steady lovers. Then Derek and I were born. Our mom died when she was out on business... she was beaten to death.”

Nightwing listened quietly, but was unable to think of anything to say.

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Derek suddenly glanced over at Vanessa, “I’m sorry my dear, but I think that by now, Barbara should have woken up. I should go... comfort her. I’m sure this betrayal will be hard for her to take.”

Vanessa nodded, and Derek turned to walk away.

Nightwing looked after him... stunned for a moment, then yelled, “I thought you were going to let Barbara go!”

Derek turned back, an evil smile on his face, “Well, plans have changed... you see, during my months of dating Barbara I never got to experience the best of her. As beautiful as she is, I would hate to see her wasted on another man, so I’ve decided to take her with me.” he continued confidently, “She’ll get over the betrayal, and come to love me just as she did before. I’ll make sure she totally forget you!” Then Derek turned, and walked out of the room, leaving an enraged Nightwing behind him.

Vanessa stood, looking at Nightwing quietly. Nightwing returned her gaze coldly, then asked, “So... what are you going to do with me?”

Vanessa smiled, “This is a vat specially made to hold liquids that would eat away at most substances. The cross you are tied too is made of the same metals. When I leave, I’ll start the process of filling this back up with acid. It will slowly creep up, eating away your feets first... then your legs. When it finally reaches your heart, you will die.”

Vanessa turned and strolled over to the exit door, glancing back at Nightwing for a moment, “It’s a pity really... if you hadn’t killed my father, I would have tried to go to bed with you.” She then turned and stepped outside, shutting the door with a resounding clang.

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Nightwing hung there, head bowed and mind racing. He watched as holes opened all over the bottom of the vat, and acid began to slowly rise. Nightwing’s teeth gritted as he swiftly began looking for some means of escape. He suddenly smiled... they had tied his arms to the cross at his wrists!

He closed his eyes and began some of the deep breathing exercises he had learned in his travels. Then, with a quick movement, his climbing claws flicked out. He curved his fingers down, bringing them in contact with the rope. Quickly, he began moving his fingers, slowly cutting away at the rope.

Nightwing’s mind rebeled against the pain as he acccidently flicked his own flesh with the sharp blades, but he ignored it and began murmuring to himself, even as he continued cutting at the robe, “Pain does not exist... fear does not exist... peace is all there is!” A small smile flickered over his face as the rope on his arm finally gave way. He reached down quickly, slashing at the rope on his feet, just in time. Seconds before the acid would have reached, Nightwing yanked up his legs. One more quick slash with his claws
and Nightwing quickly sat on top of the cross, with his other arm free as well. He smiled and raised his grappling gun... lucky for him that the top of the vat was open!

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Barbara looked up as Derek strolled up... he had taken off his Vengeance costume and was once again dressed in regular street clothes. He smiled at her as he continued to walk closer, and Barbara thought how strange it was that the man who had once made her heart beat so fast by simply smiling at her... now just made her heart practially die in her chest.

Derek stood right in front of Barbara, looking her over with a rather lustful expression on his face. Barbara looked down... a flush of red covering her face. She knew that he could see almost her whole body... more than he had ever seen before.

Derek reached out and grabbed her face, raising it so she was looking at him. “You may despise me now...” he murmured softly, “but I’ll make sure that you forget about Grayson! Even if it takes me a hundred years, you will come to love me, and only me!”

Barbara looked at him, and felt the tiny flame of rage building in her chest. The flames gave her courage, and suddenly spit in his face and glared at him as she whispered, “You’re disgusting!”

Derek reached up and wiped the spit away from his cheek as his expression turned ugly. Suddenly he brought back his fist and slammed it into Barbara’s face. Barbara winced as he head was knocked back against the post behind her.

Derek reached up and grabbed her hair, twisting her head cruely as he yelled, “You are now my slave, you little b****! You will do what I say, when I say!” he voice went quiet, though even more evil as he continued, “You will be expected to fulfill my needs... especially in the bedroom!”

Barbara looked at him, fear apparent in her eyes, as he suddenly stepped even closer and kissed her forcefully, his hands pawing at her body. She strugged against the ropes but to no avail, and from deep in her chest, she screamed... a scream that his kiss silenced before it even began!

[The Game]

Oh no! I tell ya, if I ever run into this Derek, why I'll....

[Batgirl_2005]

ACK!!! Stupid Darak you ~goes into several obscenities before stopping and regaining her I'l simply say that he should die.

Great story!!!

[Panther]

>mutters to self< ...that lousy no good son of a @#%%^mumblemumble beep#$!!! Dereck must pay!grrrrrrrrr<


NEway. Moving on. Horrible way to leave us hanging - /do/ think of posting soon. No pressure or anything. (>de sotto voice< Oh Guitar Slayer, how much are those tickets si vous plait?)


later,

[Batgirl]

ALMOST! Ha! Dick is gonna wipe the floor with that- insert bad word of choice. Please continue Coran. I wanna see this guy get his arse kicked by Dick. Please post it soon.

(Slayer... remember, I have him first!!!)

[Coran]

Ok, people, allright. My next post will be either tomorrow (Monday) or the day after (Tuesday). I promise to put it up as quickly as I can. Oh and Batgirl... welcome back to the boards.

[TheVertigo]

...A Cliffhanger? -_-;;; As you probably noticed already, I'm not a big fan of those. But newho, plz continue the story, I'm literally jumping from one foot to another with anticipation... and you better get Dick do to do some serious butt-kicking in the next post! (Or you'll disappoint everyone, including me!)

Oh and Batgirl, Lord of the Rings fan, are we? heh heh. Sorry, I couldn't help to smile at your quotes. I love LOTR! (Both the books and the movie... though I spoiled most of the novel by seeing the movie beforehand, but I finished reading it anyway! Just as good :) )

Hey! Pippin' and Glimi are the best! :p


NEwayz! Till Monday, Coran! (Notice I prefer the earliar post date) O.o

[Coran]

(Rated PG-13 For Explicit Detail)

The kiss continued for several minutes, during which Derek’s hands moved over much of Barbara’s lovely body. Derek was thoroughly enjoying himself. He had never had the opportunity to examine her body like this, and he was finding it a very... enlightening and arrousing experience. Her struggling made it even better.

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Barbara felt sick. The worst part about what was happening was the fact she couldn’t do anything to stop Derek. Her shouts and screams of defiance and rage had quickly become sobs of fear and pain. In Barbara’s mind, hope had ceased to exist.

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Derek was suddenly yanked away from Barbara, and spun around by a powerful hand. Derek felt true terror when his gaze settled upon the hate filled eyes of Nightwing. Nightwing’s fists flashed out one... two... three... four times.

Derek stood there, dazed as blood flowed from his nose, one hand going up to try to stop the flow of crimson liquid.

Nightwing stared at his... hated enemy, then suddenly lept in the air, performing a perfect spin kick... executed in such a way that his heel slammed into Derek’s temple. Derek flew back several feet and crashed to the ground.

Slowly the dazed man stood, shaking his head to clear it. Though fear blazed in his eyes, there was another emotion... pure anger. He charged Nightwing, screaming hoarsely.

Nightwing smiled grimly as he watched the deranged man charge him. Suddenly Nightwing took several steps forward, arriving in front of Derek much sooner than Derek expected. Nightwing’s arm rocketed forward, as though propelled by a cannon. Derek dropped to the ground again, and this time he stayed down.

Nightwing raised his eyes from the batted form that lay sprawed on the floor. His gaze bored straight into Barbara’s beautiful eyes, and for a moment, he couldn’t move or say anything. Then, he regained his senses and moved forward swiftly. In just a few quick slashes of his climbing claws, Barbara was in his arm.

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Barbara’s body shook from the sobs, and tears streamed down her face as she held herself close to Nightwing. One word was intelligible through all the sobbing. “Dick...”

Nightwing held Barbara close and murmured, “I promised I’d always be here for you Babs... I wasn’t going to let you down this time!”

Several moments passed while they simply enjoyed the feelings. Barbara’s eyes slowly flicked open, then widened in shock as she said, “Look out”!

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Nightwing spun, his eyes cold. Before him, Derek was slowly standing up again, a horrible grin plastered over his bloodied features. “So the two lovers are reuinted!” he sneered nastily. “I hope you get to enjoy her as much as I have...” he said as he leered at the woman standing behind Nightwing, “from what I... felt, she has a VERY nice body!”

Nightwing suddenly strode forward... seriously ticked off. “She is a beautiful woman, and you don’t deserve to walk on the same earth she does!” he said heatedly as he dove towards Derek.

Derek swung around, connecting with the side of Nightwing’s head. Nightwing collapsed to the ground, but bounded back to his feet, his fist suddenly flashing out.

Derek folded over as the one, two punch connected with his stomach. There was an audible gasp as all the air rushed out of his lungs. Nightwing stood, looking at the man, then drew back and swung a powerful uppercut. Derek collapsed to the ground, and this time it was obvious he wouldn’t be moving anytime soon.

Nightwing turned and walked over to Barbara, locking one arm around her waist as he raised his grappling with with the other, and said softly, “Hold on!”

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Moments later Nightwing was carefully depositing Barbara on a nearby rooftop. He looked at her for a moment... his gaze full of an emotion that could best be described as... love. “Wait here.” he said quietly, then turned to go. As he turned to leave, Barbara moved forward quickly. “Wait!” she called out after him.

Nightwing stopped and turned towards her, just as she came up and deposited a long, hard kiss on his lips. “Come back to me in one piece.” she murmured softly.

Nightwing lookd at her in surprise for a moment, then whispered, “I love you Babs!” He then quickly turned and lept off the building. There was some unfinished business that needed to be taken care of.

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Nightwing arrived on the floor of the warehouse. As he looked around swiftly, the only person he saw was Derek... still on the floor unmoving. Nightwing moved over to Derek’s still form, intending to hog tie him, but discovered it was unecessary. Two things had changed about the way Derek was laying there... he was now wearing his
Vengeance suit, and there was a bullet hole right between his eyes!

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Nightwing spun swiftly due to his hearing a sound behind him. He completed his spin, just in time for the gauntleted fist of Vengeance to slam into his face.

Nightwing’s body fell backward, and slid several feet across the floor. Nightwing stood as quickly as he could with the mild concussion he had just received, and faced Vengeance. “You don’t have to do this Vanessa!” he said quickly. “Give up now, and I’ll get you the help you need!”

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An amused, female laugh filled the air of the abandoned warehouse. “I don’t think so.” Vanessa said as she pulled off her mask. “you see, I’m not a deranged lunatic like my brother and father were.”

“Then end this now!” Nightwing said swiftly, though he remained tense and ready for anything.

“This is the end... though not like you think.” Vanessa said with a smirk. “You see, thanks to my brother there is no way I can be directly connect to Vengeance. Only your testimony could connect me, and you would never testify. If you did, you would have to admit to the world that Dick Grayson is Nightwing. So I get to leave this place and begin my life over, with plenty of money, and a clear conscience.”

Nightwing began to move towards Vanessa with the intention of stopping her. She suddenly raised a gauntletted hand, revealing the building energy ball. Before he could react, the energy ball rocketed towards his chest.

Nightwing dove to the side, but was caught in the shock wave from the explosion. Slowly he shook his head, and raised his eyes to look at Vanessa’s smirking face.

“I told you... I get to leave here with a clean conscience, and no crimes on my record.” She suddenly raised her hand again, causing Nightwing to wince slightly. However, instead of an energy ball, Vanessa was holding a remote detonator. She pushed the button and smiled again, “That begins the mixture of two explosive chemicals. In about
ninety seconds the building will explode. The process can not be stoped. I suggest you leave now, while you still can.”

Before Nightwing could move any closer, Vanessa faded back into the shadows without a sound.

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Nightwing swiftly raised his arm and fired his grappling hook. Moments later he was on top of the warehouse. Aiming carefully he fired his next shot over at the building where Barbara waited. Then he hit the button to begin realing the powerful line in.

*********************************

Barbara stood on the nearby building, watching as Nightwing suddenly appeared on the roof of the warehouse, moving as quickly as he possibly could. A small smile flickered over her face as she waited for the man she loved.

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Deep within the building, the two corrosive chemicals finally ate through the metal barriers between them. The reaction to their contact was immediate, and the pressure within the huge vats began to build. Seconds later, they errupted in a huge explosion, sending a fireball out that moved along in perfect synchronization with the shock wave from the explosion.

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Barbara gasped in shock when the explosion began to echo, but moments later a cry of fear rang out from her lips. When the fireball completely enveloped the building, it continued outward and had just enveloped Nightwing as well! Barbara stared at the flames, and screamed one word... “Noooooooooooooo!”

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[austin norsworthy]

MAN! Derek is SICK!! thank you for finally having nightwing open a can of whoup *** on him.









HA,HA! I beat you guys to typing this first! :D

[The Game]

Suspensful addition. Derek certianly got what was coming to him. :)

[TheVertigo]

Oh YEAH! Nightwing delivers one HECK of a punch. Although what I don't like is the fact that Babsy standing there and taking this all like "Nightwing, [sigh] my hero..." Come on, girl! The love of your life is kicking some serious ***** in that warehouse! Wouldn't you want to join in the fun.... and make sure he's still alive (Although I'm quite confident he is ;) ) after that explosion?

NEwayz, Coran, you delivered well.... but another Cliffhanger? *pout* Plz hurry up w/ the next part! I wanna see that flashy, big smooch Babs is gonna give her hero! (heh heh) Good Work!

[Batgirl_2005]

Eek... but... but... Poor Dick...

You have to write more soon! It's not nice to leave people hanging. :D

[Coran]

Time for me to answer a couple of the comments really quick. First off... I was contemplating having Barbara step in and help fight, but I didn't for a couple reasons.
1) She isn't really dressed or equipped to getin a slug fest.
2) She was just drugged, and thus isn't in top form.
3) Nightwing almost lost her once, and he had sworn she would see her father again, even if he had to die. Thus he wouldn't let her endanger herself.
4) And finally... I just like seein' Dick kick some serious butt!

For all you waiting for my next post, it will be within a couple more days, and it will be the last chapter to this story. See you all again soon!

[austin norsworthy]

Originally posted by Coran
Time for me to answer a couple of the comments really quick. First off... I was contemplating having Barbara step in and help fight, but I didn't for a couple reasons.
1) She isn't really dressed or equipped to getin a slug fest.
2) She was just drugged, and thus isn't in top form.
3) Nightwing almost lost her once, and he had sworn she would see her father again, even if he had to die. Thus he wouldn't let her endanger herself.
4) And finally... I just like seein' Dick kick some serious butt!

For all you waiting for my next post, it will be within a couple more days, and it will be the last chapter to this story. See you all again soon!


"Seein'"?

good story shame it's gonna end but then we won't on the edge of our seats.

[Panther]

:eek: What are you trying to do? Give an entire fanclub a massive heart attack? Don't leave us hanging like that! Can't wait to see how goes,

keep posting

Later,

[Coran]

(Ok people... here it is. The end to the story entitled "Vengeance. Enjoy!)

(PG-13 Rating For Graphic Descriptions)

Nightwing felt shock and pain as the huge fireball enveloped his body. Directly ahead he saw his rope was almost burnt right through... suddenly his years in the circus, and the countless hours of training caused him to react. A swift pull on the rope caused it to snap clean through, but also made him cartwheele through the air. Nightwing’s strong hand reached out grabbing on to the rope just above where it had snapped through. His swing continued, though not as controlled as before. He gritted his teeth against pain as his shoulder slammed against the building. When he finally stopped swinging around, Nightwing slowly began to climb up the rope.

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Barbara breathed a sigh of relief when she saw Nightwing escape the blazing inferno. She could barely restrain herself to wait until Nightwing was totally on the roof, but managed. As soon as Nightwing stood firmly on the rooftop, she wrapped her arms around him and kissed him hard.

Several minutes passed as the two released all the pent up anger, frustration, sadness, and love through this kiss. When they finally finished Nightwing lifted a hand to gently touch Barbara’s hair, while Barbara looked at him and murmured, “I love you!”

*********************************

Several days later, Barbara stood on the balcony outside Wayne manor, looking over the acres of land. Inside she could hear Tim laughing and teasing Alfred just like any normal morning. A light breeze blew, causing her calf length skirt to gently wave. Barbara smiled, and wrapped her arms around herself against the slight chilliness of the air as she leaned against the railing. Suddenly two strong arms wrapped around her, and a kiss was planted on her neck. She smiled as she enjoyed Dick’s embrace and quietly murmured, “Hi...”

Dick smiled slightly as he held Barbara, “Hi yourself.” Suddenly his voice took on a tinge of worry as he asked softly, “Are you all recovered from the other night?”

Barbara nodded... loving the concern he felt for her, “I’m fine... I’m happy to be with you!”

Dick hugged her and murmured softly, “If I ever do something that reminds you of him... tell me. OK?”

Barbara leaned back against Dick’s strong chest and folded her arms over Dick’s. “I’ll tell you.” she whispered.

Several minutes passes, as they simply enjoyed each others company. Suddenly Barbara spoke up, “So... is it over then? I mean, there’s noone else that will be coming after you?”

Dick shook his head and murmured, “Derek’s gone, and there is noone in his family left that wants to come after me. We’re safe. At least from that threat.”

Barbara smiled, and the two stood together as the time passed, however, they both knewthat true safety would never come until they hung up their masks, but for now... they would accept this small amount of peace.

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Vanessa stood in the bathroom, looking at herself. She was dressed in a black nightgown that went down to about mid thighs, and she was wears a black wig. Dark red lipstick accentuated her full mouth. Inside the bedroom, a man sat waiting.

“Do you remember Jackie Sullivan?” Vanessa called out from the bathroom as she reached into a nearby drawer.

The man though for a moment, then grinned, "Course... very nice looking, though she was nowhere as beautiful as you.

Vanessa pulled out a .22 pistol and slowly screwed on the silencer... “Do you remember her daughter? The cheerleader?”

A lustful smile spread over his face for a moment, before he returned to just grinning, “Of course I remember her.”

Vanessa suddenly stepped out of the bathroom with gun raised, “This is for that cheerleader you assaulted exactly six months ago.”

Before the man could say anything, a silenced shot was heard, and he fell back onto the bed. In just a few moments, the previously white sheets were dyed a dark red.

Vanessa smiled slightly, then went and redressed herself in her skimpy black cocktail. Moments after the ruthless shooting, she was leaving the room as though nothing strange had happened.

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A new kind of justice had come to gotham. It was covered by a mask of beauty, and hidden by fears and shadows. This justice could be described with one word...

VENGEANCE!

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THE END

OR IS IT?

[Coran]

Ok people... it's come down to this one last comment from you, the reader. But I ask you to answer a question or two for me.

1. Please tell me if there was anything you disliked in the story. Were there any major errors I made?

2. Would you be interested in reading a story where Vengeance returns?

Make sure to tell me exactly what you though. Was the ending bad, or good? Thanks for your comments!

Coran

[The Guitar Slayer]

I definitely want to see Vengeance's return and how things progress for Dick and Barbara. Excellent tale of suspense, Coran.

Sorry, people, the event is cancelled. All tickets are nonrefundable. <notice they're all ready for a lynching> On second thought, they are refundable. :D

Peace and Rock 'n' Roll
The Guitar Slayer :cool:

[Batgirl]

WAY TO GO CORAN!!!!!! That was awesome. Definately go for a trilogy! Maybe Babs can finally have her 'vengance' on Vanessa for all she went through. Not to mention Brucie's not gonna like the new addition... Loved it. Wouldn't change a thing. Great cliff hangers, cool villians, a touch of romance. Nicely done. Very nicely done. Please write another story and grace us with your excellent writing ablitity.

[witness]

wow! this was a great story! i wouldn't change a thing. i didn't see any errors that you made. duh! of course i would like to see vengeance again! that villian was totally awesome! it would be wonderful if you could get someone to draw it for you and post it on this thread.

a couple of questions of my own here...was jackie sullivan vanessa's mother? does that make vanessa the cheerleader? or was that just another job for her as vengeance?

[Panther]

Coran - that story ROCKED! I can't wait to see more!! Despite all the compliants (mine probably being loudest of all) the cliffhangers were awesome! The actionwas described beutifully and loved the interaction between Dick and Babs although at times it was a little hard to belive that they go from freezing to boiling hot towards each other. The only slight problem was at the end what Vanessa did was specific in a vague kind of way tha left me sratching my head - same questions about that as witness.


Guitar Slayer - can I exchange my ticket for a new one if Coan goes overboard on the cliffhangers w/Dick again and we are forced to have another...gathering? ;)

Later,

[Batgirl_2005]

I would DEFINITELY read another story about Vengeance. I love this story. I don't think you made ANY errors at all...

[austin norsworthy]

Originally posted by The Guitar Slayer
I definitely want to see Vengeance's return and how things progress for Dick and Barbara. Excellent tale of suspense, Coran.

Sorry, people, the event is cancelled. All tickets are nonrefundable. <notice they're all ready for a lynching> On second thought, they are refundable. :D

Peace and Rock 'n' Roll
The Guitar Slayer :cool:



HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was really funny. coran i would love to see a squel. you make brillant storylines.