Poetry - 2nd chance

[Kuja's Light]

Not many replies fro mthe original thread I trid, but I'm giving thigns a 2nd chance. I'll post three poems to start.


Bloodlight Symphony:

Fragrant smells form around the bloodlight symphony ....
these smell are more of the devil's ashes corrupting those hostily, into prism red baths of blood
The blood is thought of as a light to their eyes, but is merely full of evil ashes, ashes hat ran through the mouth of impaled demons feasting on the bones fallen bones of chaos man


Moonlight Dreams:
The moon circles 'round you and me, in a Heavenly glow of moonlight dream glory.

The moonlight speaks to us, as crosses gaze into the direction of where the moonlight is palest, warding away desires of heart-eating levels of death...

The Moonlight Dreams carry the obelisk sonata of glory, but also pain if gone the wrong way, which of a double edged sword...

Forever, however, the moonlight dreams will circle them, shining bright....



Time under the Glass:

Time echoing farther...who knows if it heals or seals pristine breath away.
However time is sealed away...Like under glass it shines it will spark
The glass never shattering, does this mean anunending, unfreed chaos...for that I don't whisper
Into the air the fury goes with the glass making the pristine tears glow...

The glass...may it break....

[Squisheee]

All three of them! They are awesome and very detailish! Good work!

[Kuja's Light]

No other replies? Ugh, you guys make it seem like my work is total you know what or something..I have a new poem here:

Decay of the Voices:

Flesh bound, destruction iminant.
Blood spills by the dawn of decay
Anger rebound, decaying soul
Magical essance, flicker firey decaying soul

[Squisheee]

I love it, Kuja! Come on, everyone! Show him that his work is good! :)

[Kylewayne]

Not many replies fro mthe original thread I trid, but I'm giving thigns a 2nd chance. I'll post three poems to start.


Bloodlight Symphony:

Fragrant smells form around the bloodlight symphony ....
these smell are more of the devil's ashes corrupting those hostily, into prism red baths of blood
The blood is thought of as a light to their eyes, but is merely full of evil ashes, ashes hat ran through the mouth of impaled demons feasting on the bones fallen bones of chaos man


Moonlight Dreams:
The moon circles 'round you and me, in a Heavenly glow of moonlight dream glory.

The moonlight speaks to us, as crosses gaze into the direction of where the moonlight is palest, warding away desires of heart-eating levels of death...

The Moonlight Dreams carry the obelisk sonata of glory, but also pain if gone the wrong way, which of a double edged sword...

Forever, however, the moonlight dreams will circle them, shining bright....



Time under the Glass:

Time echoing farther...who knows if it heals or seals pristine breath away.
However time is sealed away...Like under glass it shines it will spark
The glass never shattering, does this mean anunending, unfreed chaos...for that I don't whisper
Into the air the fury goes with the glass making the pristine tears glow...

The glass...may it break....
Oooo! You clever girl! You spoiled us with 3 not 1 but three lovely poems written by you. My favorites lines, I have bolded and my favorite poems I underlined as well.

Moonlight Dreams captured me because to tell you the truth , I have always been fascinated by the moon and its mystique powers. As for Time under the Glass, I find it kind of eerie a bit since the notion of time is always on my mind and what happens when everything just disappears. It's literaly scares me thinking that way :ack: Nice job on the poems they really make you think beyond what is written =D