Doomed Comics!

[Bartiscool]

http://elitrix.net/doomedcomics/album_pic.php?pic_id=11

Thats one of the comics i made lol! If you want to see more go to www.doomedcomics.us.tt (http://www.doomedcomics.us.tt)

[Peter Paltridge]

You are not authorized. I'm not authorized.

[Bartiscool]

http://img228.echo.cx/my.php?image=file00360mo.jpg
ok i hosted it onn image shck now it should work!

[Tak Mazé]

..... I don't get it :confused:

[Outlander00]

Nice start, bart... however it does lack a proper script direction. You lose where your punchline. You may want to look at your favotire comic strips and books to get an idea as to what I am trying to say.

The drawing is good and will get better as you keep drawing.

Good start so far. :)

[Bartiscool]

Why thank You oh i think i understand what you mean! I will try to get better thanks!