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SilverKnight
04-21-2005, 08:46 PM
I was reading lyrics of a Metallica song, when the first stanza just popped in my head. I guess it has to do with FFVII, and probably Vincent's relationship with Lucrecia and all that, but whatever, if it makes no sense, just consider it original. That works. :D

Beautiful Sorrow
By: SilverKnight

Hers is the pain that never leaves
His is the heart that forever grieves
Theirs is the life that neither leads
Given an eternity that neither needs

Hers is the loss that always stays
His is the scar that forever remains
Their is the dream that neither obtains
Given an eternity that no one regains

Hers was the sight she never used
His was the light he always refused
Theirs was the right they would never choose
Given an eternity that neither could lose

Theirs was the path of lingering threat
Constant pain, unyeilding regret
Theirs are the lives they want to forget
Always remembered, never content
Thiers is the prison of harbored intent
Never realized, forever misspent
Theirs are the remains of shattered kismet
Given an eternity to never relent

Hers is the love she'll never know
His is the soul he'll never show
Theirs is the hope they'll forever forego
Given an eternity of beautiful sorrow

4-21-05

So...yeah. >twitch< Go me. >disappears<

Beguiled
04-21-2005, 10:17 PM
I actually thought that was really beautiful! :) Good job! Somehow...it reminds me of a book I'm reading...O_o

Zach
04-21-2005, 10:32 PM
Very good... It makes me think on a whole nother level of thinking when I here something like this...

TimTwoFace
04-23-2005, 02:32 AM
Like I said on AIM hon, I loved the metre, the rhyme, and the vivid word choices. :)

*HIGH FIVE*

-Tim