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rrarbecy
04-05-2005, 06:33 PM
Hi. This is a poem that my sister wrote. I found it saved on Microsoft Word, and it was so beautiful that I had to post it somewhere. Reading this makes me wish I could write poems half as good as hers.
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Stargirl:
The Voice Lives On


Differences are unwelcome here
As in many places
She feels no fear
As she passes through the angry faces

The time goes by
Acceptance is rare
She never understood why
They all hated her there

He finds her
As the days go on
All emotions stir
Never knowing she would soon be gone

Enchanted places to open your mind
To let your thoughts wander
Try to let yourself unwind
Thinking the whole time and becoming even fonder

Of each other, hope feelings will never fade
But soon will come a change
When a choice must be made
Between her and them although it may sound strange

Today it is all different and she is gone
Did he make the right choice?
Were his thoughts all wrong?
Times have changed but through the years most can still hear her voice.

Matt A
04-05-2005, 07:34 PM
For some reason, I'm thinking "soon to be an award-wnning poet and/or song lyricist". DJ, your sister is truly a goddess of poetry, and quite frankly I'm amazed that you'd post this on her behalf. Most brothers wouldn't do that, myself included.

Well done to her for that great poem, and well done to you for that great find!:anime: :anime: :anime: :anime: :anime:

Ta,
Matt A

rrarbecy
04-05-2005, 08:05 PM
Thanks. She'd KILL me If she found out that I posted it on the internet.

Kylewayne
04-06-2005, 09:53 PM
Wow, I am speechless. That was such a beautifully written poem. Your sister is talented. You should encourage her to write more =D

rrarbecy
04-07-2005, 01:28 PM
I believe she wrote that for a school assignment. It was based on a book.

Faethie
04-20-2005, 02:39 PM
Wow.....:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

Your sister is an awesome poet. Really awesome. I almost wish she had given u permission, so I could tell ya to tell her that. I so wish it.....
My sister makes up these really annoying really catchy little toons that I have to admit are pretty good, but I'd never be good enough to post them anywhere. I'm quite frankly impressed that you'd post it. I'd never do it, and even if I wanted to, I don't think I'd have the guts to risk her finding out...even if she is younger than me.:sweat: :p :sweat:
Faith

starfire0639
04-22-2005, 12:44 PM
That was actually really good.IS this your younger sister or your older younger sister that wrote this Becy?......Hard to believe this came from the one that sang the banana song:p Its pretty..ya the words of the poem ryme at every stanza so its easily to flow thru and read at a regular pace.Thumbs up for your sister Becy!!:anime:

rrarbecy
05-04-2005, 07:24 PM
No, it was the older one.