Tears of a smiling shadow-TT poem

[starfire0639]

Hey evryone um....this is a continuastion of a poem in my fic on the worlds finest forum:tears of a smiling shadow hope you like it





Its a shame that I think

to live such a lie..

And living everyday

hoping to die

My life curves and it twists

truths hidden in the shadows

my love is hiding

deep in the gallows





My eyes are weak with trouble

red with disgrace

I beg and I mumble

at this terror I face



And my life as it spins

and it stops and it winds

reminds me of why

its love that I find

and I look up to you

and all is that of fine

becuase in my heart

your truly and always

mine



I think to myself

and I wonder why

in my truth full of trouble

theres always a lie?



With the problems I face

denial and grace

I skip and I fall

onto hard base



I smile and I giggle

behind this false body

I talk and I mingle

Whispering to nobody



And I look to you

with tears in my heart

my life is a'new

because you took part



And I smile

holding him

becuase he is mine

I'd run for miles

till the end of time



I want to grab him!

I want to kiss him!

till the end of time and now

my life is screwed up and I just don't know how



But its just so hard to think

so hard to be

I wonder and wonder

Why can't I be me..?

But all I see

is darkness swallowing me

but I hold onto him

and I never want to leave



Please,my soul

I beg you,my eternity

please wont you still

help guide me?



Its coming I swear

a truth very horrid

I wish I could tear it

as it be morbid

Its coming,I feel it

for me as it said

and I feel in my heart

Its really,really bad



Why?Leave me be

why are you coming for that of me?

please!I beg of you

hear me plead



And

I'm scared

please someone...

just save me



OK i liked it but its really not up to me-smile-what did ya guys think?-smiles-Oh and heres the site thingy if you want to read the story yaya I know im advertising but thats not to bad is it:anime: Baically the poem is my charchters shes a writer in the story and...oop!told ya to much already go read tp find out more!byz!
http://forums.toonzone.net/showthread.php?t=135507

[Neko Konneko]

*claps* Liked It!!!

[Starrysky]

You are wonderful at poems. That is the bottom lin. All I can say is good job and keep on going! (very nice detail and emotion by the way.) :anime:

[starfire0639]

thankies starry and neko!i shall write more soon then:anime:

[Jean_Grey]

Great job I really liked it!!

[rrarbecy]

Wow Ash. That's great. I'm proud of you!

[starfire0639]

Thank you so much Becy!And here ya guys sorry I made ya wait so long


warm water trickling down my face

tears in my eye

wont you please sit

listen to my aliby?

its sad sorta kinda

with a bit of disgrace

i cry and i wonder

as i cower behind my gracebut whatrs it to you!/

you dont have any force

no idea what it is

what it is,im forced to endure!

you dont have any idea

nor do you care

and you think you lifes horrid

mines just unfair!

and i sit here

talking to the darkness

and acting like a wierdo

be it true my uncomly life

be sorrowfully mocked

i sit here and i wait

for what is to come

i sit here and i cry

knowing what is to come

i wait here as i sit here

in the darkness i wait...

just come

get it over with

and i will except my fate

[rrarbecy]

Wow. You must have been depressed when you wrote that.

[Sproxie]

wow, your good at poetry! :)

[ShadowOfAGhost]

very nice work! ffirst time I read it I thought it could have been a song lyric!

[Faethie]

Ash, you definately have a gift at writing poetry. Awesome job! Chawesome!!!!!:D

Faith