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Neko Konneko
03-10-2005, 02:50 PM
I wrote these poems sooo please reply! :anime:

Dark Twilight Storm

I walked down
familar streets
I saw the Dark,
familar road

I laughed with friends
all by my side
But they do not know
the inside of me
They Know the happy
cheerful girl

The winkd blew strong,
hard and cruel
I saw the twilight
dusk ever near

I saw people
happy and sad
I saw people
laughing and fighting
I do not know
where I belong
If I do

I looked up
The sky so blue,
I looked down
The ground so dark.

I looked ahead
My future there?
I looked behind
my past lay
awake and cold
a part of my mind
that never strays.

I closed my eyes

This world where
saddness and dispair rule
lives on in my past
But I will
make it through
this dark twilight storm

Mystique
03-11-2005, 05:37 PM
Hey, that was good :). Keep writing!

Kylewayne
03-13-2005, 02:00 PM
Interesting poem =) Seems we all can realate to it =D Keep it up Neko! :)

Neko Konneko
03-15-2005, 04:03 PM
Thanx for the nice comments Kylewayne, and Mystique! I got this poem published in the school magizene. i hope you like it!! :anime:


The City Lights

Finally

It took so long


I’m out


On the streets.


The city lights


Gleam and shimmer


In twilight.


I rule


Its my life


In my hands


To control


My destiny


To choose.


I’m starting over


To show the world


Who I am


To prove them all wrong


Everyone who


Thought


I was


Nothing unusual.


I’m more


Than what


Meets the eye

Neko Konneko
03-15-2005, 04:05 PM
sorry the font's so big. i copy and pasted it from my poetry book on works. My appologys.