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fifthsun
03-02-2005, 07:19 PM
Doomsday

L loved Doomsday comic, I have not seen Doomsday in JLU, but I wish he apeared, I propose It could be a 3 part story.

SUperman and Lois relations is really stuck, and he seems to be geting older. Id wish that he decides to reveal his identity to her and propose marriage.

Meanwhile the JL decides to vote for leadership... I would like to see that, and WWoman wins the election!.

Then, like in the comic, almighty powerful Doomsday erupts and a band of JL members goes to face him, resulting in their oblitiration, Im thinking Fire, Ice, Goldboster, and a couple of others, they trow everything at Doomsday and he beats them up.

I figure all of this could be part 1, and I would like for WWoman to costar displaying her leadership skills.

Part 2 would be WWoman and other heroes handling a natural disaster, while superman goes against Doomsday, in this we would get to finally see Lois and the other superman characters as they see the boy in blue batling the doomsday machine. ALso I woukld love to see Luthors reaction as the menace aproaches metropolis. While superman is detered by doomsdays colateral damage, the monster keeps goinf at metropolis, where Luthor tries to stop him. SuperGirl tries her best and fails. WWoman and the others learn of the monster by the martian but they are busy handling an x natural disaster.

part3
Luthor and the army fail to stop doomsday, supermna arrives for the final fight. Superman dies.... :(

WWoman and the others control the natural disaster and go to metrpolis, where Supermans closest original JL friends see him down. As new leader WWoman feels she let down her friend...

and then:

Cadmus Final Fight, Superboy and Superman Retunrs

part 1

WWoman aproaches Lois as they take Supermans body to the tower where they try to save him.

Misterious supermans are sighted on metṛpolis.

SGilr and Steel cover metṛpolis, where they sight misterious supermans in the city.

WWoman, Batman and Lois go to metropolis to investigate this sighting. It turns out there are two misterious supermans around. The catch up with one who turns out to be bizarro, but they are stuned when a Superboy (from cadmus) come to help them.

part 2

the misterious superboy flees and Fate informs WWoman and the others that there is hope for Superman. They go back but WWoman decides to track down the new superboy, supergilr helps her.

WWoman and SGirl try to talk with Sboy who is almoust brainwahsed by Cadmus, being an all powerful teen, the girls have trouble to help him realize the truth about cadmus. ALso Sboys aparently stable structure may hold the clue to saving Long Shadow`s life.

Fate, whos with hawk Girl, and Lois go on a once in a lifetime ritual where she has to search for Dman to bring him back.

WWoman and Sgirl are finally trying to save Sboy, but then someone shows up... its Galatea and a BRAND NEW evil ULTIMEN!

Sboy is surprised by Galateas violent disposition, when hes really a cool guy. WWoman and Sgirl start to talk with galatea about Cadmus evils. But Sboy goes with her to avoid a fight that WWoman would Lose...

part 3

Lois works to get back Sman as the Kents pray all day long, Fate loses concentration in the ritual as Lois searches for her husbands soul...

A few JL members join WWoman and SuperGirl, including Batman, batgirl, the Question, Green arrow and Flash.

They search for Galatea and Superboy, it turns out WWoman put a battracer on Sboy (something she learned from Batman). SO they head out for Cadmus main base.

Lois has trouble finding Supermans soul, and gets confused in the astral plane, but Fate`s spouse (dont know her name) she gives advice to lois, and lois hears the kents powerful prayers, she then resumes and finds clark...

WWoman and the others drop in to cadmus. Where the Question goes to see if he can get info.

Batman, batgirl, Green Arrow and Flash find the new evil ultimen and start to fight, but WWoman keeps going to find Superboy (she has amaternal instinct ;)

As W Woman and SuperGirl find Superboy, Galatea, a cadmus agent and a test tube with a new superclon.

Sgilr takes her fight with Galatea (powergirl). WWoman talks to Sboy, but a galatea tells Sboy to fight WWoman, he haves a hard time doing it. A new unstable superclon is released by cadmus and goes wild and attacks wowoman, superboy helps her but the unstable clon is too much. The cadmus agent flees but the Question captures him/her. Wwoman and Sboy fight the superclon.

SGirl tells Galatea about Cadmus evils, but galatea who seems brainwashed attacks her with more rage.

The facility begin to self destruct, and they all start to flee, Sboy has to decide if he goes with WWoman or Galatea. He goes with WWoman, Galatea retreats with her Bad Ultimen and the unstable superclon.

part 4

The question takes the cadmus agent to the martian, to extract all of the info.

lois ends her ritual and superman now has to fight his way back to life with fate and destiny`s help.

WWoman as leader consults the main JL members, Batman, martian, flash, Glantern and Hawk Gilr! They decide its time to dismantle Cadmus once and for ALL!

Sgirl feels Galatea calling for her, and decides to run off, but Green Arrow and Batgirl go with her. It seemed that Galatea wanted to talk with SGilr. But Sgilr wanted to save her clone, so she goes. Superboy joins her.

The league finds out of a Cadmus strong hold in an island and they rush there to destroy it.

WWoman asembles the whole JL and calls for an omega situation, with hawk girl and the otehrs advcie she decides to go against the cadmus government project. They all got o mount a full scale attack and stop the clonning of metahumans.

They storm the island, but there they find DOZENS of ultimen, who start to attack them. The Jl heroes, G Lantern, Cap Atom, Atom, Canary, ALL of the heroes strike against the poor evil clones (who had a low quality in their making, like animals.)

WWoman and the other big heroes (batman, hawkgirl, flash, GLantern, Martian) go and face the cadmus main heads.

Galatea starts to fight Supergirl as they both interchange their impresions on the goodness and evil of things. The unstable superclone drops in as galatea had convinced the superclone to hel her, Sboy takes him on. Some cadmus agents try to drop in but batgirl and arrow hel her out.

The cadmus leaders on clone island unleahs their superclones adn WWoman and the others start to fight. Batman and flash capture some cadmu agents, but supermans unstable clones are too much...

the ultimen and cadmus persoanl are also beating the JL in the island...


part 5 the end ;)

SGilr tries to convince Galatea of her evil ways, galatea starts to feel SGirl goodnes rubbing on her. Batgirl also tells Galatea to stop fighting SGirl. Superboy has a lot of trouble with supermnaclone, and starts to get beaten, arrwo tries to help him.

Galatea comes to her senses and agrees to stop fighting, they all rush to fight the eviol superclone.

On the island Batman and the other main JL members all pull out some kriptonite that batman had given them, the clones are then easily beaten.

Then the Question sends a message to all JL members saying that "a cadmus agent" had activated the self destruct for the whole island. The JL members all start to carry each other into safety, the ultimen being most of them barely rational dont think of fleeing the island.

In metripolis the superman clone beats up all of the supers (girl, boy and powergirl). Then he ends destroyed by his weak molecular structure...

Back in the tower Longshadow is cured of his molecular problems. Galatea and Sboy join the Justice league...

and then someone steps up... Superman.

Superman is again alive.

But the League will have the new responsibilities of training PowerGirl and Superboy.

Also after all of that Lois and Clark marry.

In the wedding attend the original JL heroes in their civilian forms.

Diana tells Bruce that now thats shes an amazonian outcast she also wants another identity and her own city to protect...

So the league just keeps getting more interesting ;)

How about this ideas hu?

Doomsday
03-02-2005, 07:44 PM
Doomsday

L loved Doomsday comic, I have not seen Doomsday in JLU, but I wish he apeared, I propose It could be a 3 part story.


Uhhhh I guess you are in luck because Doomsday was in JLU 2 weeks ago in an awesome episode. Your idea of a 3 parter around him is interesting but I think 3 parts are to much for the big guy, and this is coming out of a big Doomsday fan. :D

Hey if you want to see the talkback for the Doomsday episode, The Doomsday Sanction, here you go... http://forums.toonzone.net/showthread.php?t=135306

You should try to find a way to watch it, someone you know have a tape? The episode won't reair anytime soon on CN so you better have another resource if you want to watch it.

fifthsun
03-02-2005, 08:41 PM
But as soon as Im on vacation Ill try to get the episode somewhere...

JLU has not arrived to mexcio yet, and I only have air antena...

And of course I dont want to see the spoilers!!! I want to be surprised ;)

Supremus
03-02-2005, 08:59 PM
You may want to edit out the offending "D"-word, unless you want the thread closed.

fifthsun
03-02-2005, 09:26 PM
I dont get it, what ofenmding "d" word?

was it download??

anyway if you really think I should edit soemthing just say it straight,

you can easily send an instant message, and not bother this thread

Im not sure whats your problem, with taht bossy attitude, but if you want to be bossy just close the thread, do what ever you want.

Im not sure why you act this anoying way, I came here to have fun.

Supremus
03-02-2005, 09:32 PM
I dont get it, what ofenmding "d" word?

was it download??

anyway if you really think I should edit soemthing just say it straight,

you can easily send an instant message, and not bother this thread

Im not sure whats your problem, with taht bossy attitude, but if you want to be bossy just close the thread, do what ever you want.

Im not sure why you act this anoying way, I came here to have fun.I'm not bossing you, just giving you a bit of advice since you are new around here. Discussions about downloading is against the forum rules, and since I imagine you spent a bit of time writing up your fan-fic thingy there, I wouldn't have thought you wanted the thread closed, but suit yourself.

fifthsun
03-02-2005, 09:38 PM
:p

:p

:p

well thanks for the "help"!!

But the word "download" is NOT offending. It may be inapropiate or such but not "offending".

soa big:

:p

to you!!!!

Bird Boy
03-02-2005, 09:44 PM
It's offensive to the site owners who have legal issues to tend with if our users start talking about downloading about their legally protected content.

And please be more respective to users in the future. Repeatedly using :p is rude and somewhat annoying.

Please review the FAQ (http://forums.toonzone.net/faq.php?) and rules before posting. Thank you.

-BB