Various poems

[Mystique]

It was dumb of me to think of you as more than just a friend,

Dumb of me to think we could be together until the end.

The rational part of me knows that you have a life that dose not involve me,

But sometimes the rational way of thinking is just so hard to see.

I sometimes think our relationship is special,

But in my heart, I know that that isn’t true.

There are so many people out there who know and love you like I do.

Our days together are limited,

Soon you will have to go away,

But before you go and leave me, I have this to say.

I hope that we can keep in touch over, the passing years.

The thought of us not being friends, practically brings me to tears.

Thank you for being my friend, and the first love I ever had.

The thought of you not being in school with me makes me extremely sad.

And lastly I hope that you are successful,

In what ever you choose to do,

And I hope and pray to God that life is good to you.

And as I conclude this angst filled poem,

Of feelings you can never know,

I find myself wishing that you did not have to go.

[Kylewayne]

It was dumb of me to think of you as more than just a friend,

Dumb of me to think we could be together until the end.

The rational part of me knows that you have a life that dose not involve me,

But sometimes the rational way of thinking is just so hard to see.

I sometimes think our relationship is special,

But in my heart, I know that that isn’t true.

There are so many people out there who know and love you like I do.

Our days together are limited,

Soon you will have to go away,

But before you go and leave me, I have this to say.

I hope that we can keep in touch over, the passing years.

The thought of us not being friends, practically brings me to tears.

Thank you for being my friend, and the first love I ever had.

The thought of you not being in school with me makes me extremely sad.

And lastly I hope that you are successful,

In what ever you choose to do,

And I hope and pray to God that life is good to you.

And as I conclude this angst filled poem,

Of feelings you can never know,

I find myself wishing that you did not have to go.





That poem made me teary eyed! I can so relate to that poem of yours =) Love your stuff Mystique, you got a knack for writing poems. I also love the fact that they rhyme! =D

[Mystique]

thanks. Here is another one I made.

In The Secret Places of My Mind.At school you see me act, in a certain way.

You see the way I dress, and listen to the things I say.

What you see is only the surface.

The parts of me that are only skin deep.

When really you have no idea of the secrets that I keep.

Do you know how much I love you?

No, and you never will.

For you I would do anything, make rough waters still.

Do you know that I often think of you,

In the secret places of my mind?

I love the way you are so funny, so interesting, and kind.

Do you know that you alone, mean the world to me?

No, because I keep those thoughts hidden, in places you can not see.

You will forever skim my surface.

Unaware of all the secrets I keep.

The relationship I have with you will only go skin deep.

[Kylewayne]

I so love your poems!
Write more please!

[can_i_live_777]

Wow, those were really good! I especially liked the second one. Trust me, I can sympathize with how you feel.

[Mystique]

Please Let Us Have a Snow Day

If we have a snow day,

That would be really great.

I would not have to worry, about getting up to late.

I would forever believe in weather men,

And all the untruthful things they say,

So God, it would be really nice, if we could have a snow day.

If we had a snow day, it would be really cool.

I would not have to worry, about going to school.

No English class, no health, no French and Algebra one,

Just a day of pure relaxation, of blissfully happy fun.

It’s time this poem ended, I really have to go.

But before I go to bed tonight, I will pray for snow.

A little more on the lighter side. Thanks for the nice feed back. I always thought my poems were kind of dreadful. :)

[Kylewayne]

Your poems are not even close to dreadful they are delightful! I love reading them =D

[Mystique]

Just Another Sheep

Everyday I get out of bed,
and go to school, which I dread.
I am constantly around people,
both friends and foes.
I follow the crowd, wherever it goes.
Just a poor little sheep trying not to wander astray.
An angst filled teenager trying to make her way.
At school I'm a sheep trying to move with the flock,
but my eyes are constantly on the clock.
The bell rings, school is finally done.
I'm out of that place, as fast as I can run.
Now at last, I can set myself free,
No one is around to put pressure on me.
All alone, I read and I write.
My sisters and I occasionaly fight.
By myself, I let down my hair,
and I let my favorite music blare.
I dance really crazy and sing very loud.
I like to pretend I'm in front of a crowd.
I look like a fool, but I don't care.
It is night time, and no one is really there.

Here is another one. Thanks again for the nice comments. :)

[can_i_live_777]

Man, I know what you mean. I feel the same way some times. I'm in school right now, and a couple of red-neck da's just made fun of me for the way I dress. Good poem. Oh, and apologies to all red necks that were offended by that. I don't hate all red necks, just the stupid ones that can't understand anything different.:D

[Neko Konneko]

* claps* I reeeeeaaaaallllyyyy liked that. You should try to get them published! I am trying to get some of mine published! If I ever get one of mine published in a real magizene besides the school newspaper i am shure you could easily get yours published!!! If anyone wants to read any of mine they're in a thread called "these poems" Pleeeaaassse write more!!!

[Mystique]

Thanks everyone for the comments. Here is another one I wrote. I don't particularly like this one as much as some of the others. I think i starts out okay but some of the middle verses are not so good. It would be great as always to get some feed back :)



On the day I decided not to care,

I did not bother, to brush my hair.

I wore yesterdays clothes, thrown on the floor,

And I walked boldly forward, out the front door.

On the bus, I put aside my fears.

In the school bathroom, I dried my tears.

During the day, I laughed and had fun.

With the worrying and wanting, I am finally done.

Don’t ever forget, to live your life,

No matter what your pain, not matter what kind of strife.

Love is never really fair,

But, you know what? Today I decided not to care.

[Neko Konneko]

wow that was good too. I don't want to come to a consumption but this poem sounds like a break-up poem. Um never mind I am probably wrong anyways!

[Mystique]

Haha. You almost guessed right. It was over a guy I liked. Thanks for the nice comment:anime: