Zach
11-18-2004, 06:43 PM
Okay, I've decided to write a story...note: I don't use paragraphs.
Shivers were going up my spine as I removed a block of the wall. I queitly sliped through the hole. I walked up to the opened door and peered out into the hallway. "Hmm...only one guard." I muttered to myself as I slowly crept out of the room. As soon as I noticed the guard was headed towards my direction, I quickly ran into a room. "Just a little closer..." I said silently. The gaurd kept walking. Right when he walked past the door I silently sliped out and grabbed his neck. I held a crud, custom-made blade to his throat. "HHEELLLPP" he began to scream. I cut him off and slit his throat. Blood gushed everywhere. I took his corpse and placed it into a closet. Just as the body was disposed of, three or four guards showed up. "KILL HIM!!!" one of them said. I unsheathed a wakizashi and speeded towards them. The tip of my blade sliped through a pair of ribs. I pulled it out and slashed one of the guards's shoulders. He staggered in pain as I cut through a head followed by an arc of gracefull slashes. The rest of the bodies fell on the ground dead.
This is a small demo. I'll add more later. I know it sucks, but I am planning to revise it so it'll be good.
Shivers were going up my spine as I removed a block of the wall. I queitly sliped through the hole. I walked up to the opened door and peered out into the hallway. "Hmm...only one guard." I muttered to myself as I slowly crept out of the room. As soon as I noticed the guard was headed towards my direction, I quickly ran into a room. "Just a little closer..." I said silently. The gaurd kept walking. Right when he walked past the door I silently sliped out and grabbed his neck. I held a crud, custom-made blade to his throat. "HHEELLLPP" he began to scream. I cut him off and slit his throat. Blood gushed everywhere. I took his corpse and placed it into a closet. Just as the body was disposed of, three or four guards showed up. "KILL HIM!!!" one of them said. I unsheathed a wakizashi and speeded towards them. The tip of my blade sliped through a pair of ribs. I pulled it out and slashed one of the guards's shoulders. He staggered in pain as I cut through a head followed by an arc of gracefull slashes. The rest of the bodies fell on the ground dead.
This is a small demo. I'll add more later. I know it sucks, but I am planning to revise it so it'll be good.