A poem

[Starfire Raven]

Isn't it strange?

Isn't it strange?
when you truly love somebody,
it feels like you've met them before?

before time
before space
you've met him
long before history

It gives you,
a strange sense or strength
and hope

before sky
before sun
you've met him
long before day

yet it hurts
when love
is not returned

before stars
before the moon
you've met him
long before night

Love is a punishment
and a gift
cherish it
and throw it away
at the same time

Isn't it strange?
when you truly love somebody,
it feels like you've met them before?

a poem by me, paige law
like it?

[True Noir]

Oh wow....that's beautiful! Nice job! I like it a lot. :)

[Beguiled]

I agree with True Noir. That was very beautiful. Wonderful work! Keep it up! :)

[Starfire Raven]

I got a new one. and by the way, thanx:D

Love is
a burden
a gift
a chance
a dead end
a hope
a death
a dream
a night mare

[guinaevere]

Starfire, the first is wonderful. Epherial, if that's the word I'm looking for.

And the second... short and to the point. Yes, it's all those things you mention. :anime:

[starburn1116]

i love your poems!!
i love how they make u thnk without thinking
does that make sense

[Starfire Raven]

yeah it does make sense....... well, sorta and incase you are wonderin when i made these poems, it was after I met a guy at school that I really love (yes,love) but sadly, I can't tell him because we're friends and I don't want to mess it up. although people keep on saying he likes me....

Have I Seen You Before?

one day
you come in
I look into
your eyes
and fall
in love

It makes me
remember
something long ago

your eyes,
I have seen
Bright windows
in a different world

have I,
seen you before?

we become friends
and one day
you grab my hand

It makes me
remember
something long ago

you hand
I have felt
soft but firm
in a different world

have I,
seen you before?

You laugh
with me
one day

it makes me
remember
something long ago

Your smile
I have smiled with
daring and kind
in a different world

have I,
seen you before?

I hear
you talk
I talk with you too

It makes me
remember
something long ago.

your voice,
I have heard
fast but strong
in a different world

you walk
up to me
and ask

I keep on
remmembering you
but in a different world

i smile
and say
me too

and thats when
I knew
I have
seen you before

[Starfire Raven]

hello? does anyonbe like it? :( :( :( :( :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad: :eek: :eek: :eek: no one likes me!:crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying:

WHAHAHHHAHHHHH!





Wah!!
I feel better now, I guess....

:elle: Paige

[Tay the Cat]

All of your poems are really, really nice and well-written. So, you like a guy, but you don't want to tell him? I totally understand where you're coming from.

:) :anime:

[Starfire Raven]

well, my friends forced him to tell me he like me, but for now, I can't be sure if it was because a threat or if he really meant it. There is a huge possibity though.:) :anime: :D ;) :p :elle: Paige
ps: in my sig, his qoute is the first one in the red he likes that color, oh and he likes black and ravioli, and has a size 5 1/2shoe, likes zelda and LInk....
ya get the picture right?:sweat:

[Sproxie]

Wow, I really like these poems, you're a great poet!

[Starfire Raven]

Thanxies! I have a new one, but it's not a poem it's a short story, one post!:D

She decided it was the day. She'll have to tell him, that she loved him. no matter what happened. He decied that he was going to see her more often to get to know her more. She walked up to him and said in a fearful voice,"I love you, do you love me?"
He, said nothing.
"Would you cry if I died?
"no"
"Do you you want me to stay with you for a while? To talk?"
"no"
"Did you ever like me?"
"no"
That was enough, she couln't take it. She ran. It started to rain. Every tear seem to take a piece of her hopes and dreams. Her every step took her away from life. She was hopeless. She was dead. Never. Never, she decided, was she to ever love again. She prepared herself, for a cold, heartless life. She never looked back, he was probably still standing there.
She felt someone pull on her arm.
"Please, you never let me finish." a voice said.
She turned around, it was him.
"I love you, if you died I would kill myself. I don't want you to stay with me for just a while, I want you to stay with me forever. I never liked you, I've aways loved you, from the first day we met."

He hugged her. She was happy. Very happy. The sun rose once again.

I know, kinda cheesy, but this is the first time I've ever done this kid of story.:sweat:

[Starfire Raven]

Some of my quotes:

no one wants to understand me, they're all busy with their lives of happiness. I'm just a shadow in their sunlit lives.

Cold eternal darkness. A lost and alone shadow wanders forever. Crying black tears or pain and heart brokeness.

A small girll sits in a corners alone. No one hears her cry. She is like a shodow. a small shadow. lost in this world.

I told myself when I told him I loved him. If he answers he loves someone else. I'll smile and wish him good luck. Even if inside my heart's weeping.

[Mystique]

I love your poems. Especially the first one. It sort of intrigues me, because I have never really been in love before. :)

[Neko Konneko]

Yea. they were really good. I've never been in love with someone who liked me. This guy that I had a crush on always hated me for no reason, so i opened my eyes and now i try to hit him with a basketball in PE. I was really close too. Well, I hope it all works out! :anime:

[Starfire Raven]

thank u! it's been awhile I got a new one...

Souless

I am gone
I was gone
long ago
I was
a soul

They took
me away
Now, I am dead

The person
I used
to live in
is souless, now

She is now
deep
dark
and empty

yes,
I, was her soul

[Neko Konneko]

You are really gifted. I just really liked that porm in a weird way I can relate...