Two short poems by me

[Kury Wagner]

These are just little poems I've written. The first one I wrote quite awhile ago, and the words just sound weirdly cool, so yeah. :sweat: And the second one I wrote in a few days before my birthday in July.

Think of Me

In the adjoining life when you look at the twilight Welkin and see the celestial body: Think of me

When you feel the touch of nature, or sail a famous sea: Think of me

When you smell a flower, or see a beautiful light tower: Think of me

And when you’re happy to the highest degree make sure you: Think of me.

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Music
Listen to a song, some words sound wrong.

Song's so catchy, lead singer's kinda sketchy.

I like the beat, I can tap my feet.

I'll sing along, 'cause I like this song.

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Comments are very welcome!


TZ's friendly neighborhood geek-girl,
~Sam aka Kurt~ :gir:

[Beguiled]

Those are great Wagner! I like them alot! I love the first one because it's just short and sweet and I like the second because it makes me think of hanging out with friends listening to music! Especially when hanging with friends listening to their music which you happen to thoroughly dislike, but are having fun kickin with em anyway! :anime: Good job!

[Kury Wagner]

Those are great Wagner! I like them alot! Well, danke, mädchen*! :D



*'Thank you, girl' for the German impaired. :sweat:

[Kylewayne]

Ooo! I must agree with Angel. Those are very nice! Please write more! =D

[Feist]

I agree with what's been said, those are good poems! :cool: Keep up the great work!

[TimTwoFace]

Hey there little Miss Kurt! *PINCH* :anime:

Sorry I took so long to check these out - but I like 'em. The second one is a nice little poem with some fun rhymes, but the first one I liked even more because it was actually quite touching. My only suggestion would be to eliminate the colon from the last line - it would set it apart from the rest and make it more noticeable and poignant.

-Tim

[Eddie G.]

Pretty cool stuff KW. The only thing is in the first one I wouldn't keep repeating the same line, it doesn't hit the ears right.

[True Noir]

Nice job, Kurt. They made me smile that's for sure!