starfiah

[psycho fish]

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10296534/

A follow-up to a Raven ink drawing I did.
I'm proud of it, though I know there are a lot of mistakes. That left hand is the one that sticks out the most, I've got to be more careful about rushing next time.

There is supposed to be reflections from her starbolts and natural light from underneath, but I don't think that comes across very well.
I'm mainly looking for inking, lighting and anatomy tips. Anything else you could throw at me would be appreciated as well. Thanks.

[Outlander00]

Well, right off the bat (besides it being a good drawing)... The values are similar between the background and parts of the foreground (the shading on her). You start to lose differential in those areas. Also, the feet are a little too small (not badly, just a little bit).

Other than that, I dont see very much else wrong with it.

You did a good job with it. :)